Talk:Frozen II/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Comments? @Some Dude From North Carolina:. Wingwatchers (talk) 05:37, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Wingwatchers: He'll likely add them later. Just keep an eye out
. Pamzeis (talk) 05:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Wingwatchers: He'll likely add them later. Just keep an eye out
Infobox and lead
- Add alt text to the poster and the image in #Animation.
Done
- In the infobox, does "screenplay by" need a source?
- ... no, it's credited. Should I remove it?
- "in in-universe" - bit repetitive
- "in-universe perspective chronological timeline" - kinda wordy
- "fan's aspiration" - should be plural, right?
- "The film is notably darker tone and heavier in computer effects" → "The film contains a notably darker tone and is heavier in computer effects"
Done
Plot and cast
- "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)
Done
- That's it. No issues with #Cast.
Production and marketing
- Did some copy-editing here and removed some long quotes.
Release
- As seen in this GA-article, add a subsection titled #Theatrical.
- "46 languages ... four more than the first film, which was ... 42" - bit repetitive
- "Following upon the success" → "Following the success"
- "digital HD" should be written as "Digital HD"
- "Blu-Ray" → "Blu-ray"
- "included" → "include" (still available)
- Add hyphens between "behind the scenes".
- Put quotation marks around "Multi-Language Reel".
- "songs performance" - reword
- as well as multiple deleted songs: "Home" and "I Wanna Get This Right", and "Intro"; and removed footages: "Prologue", "Secret Room", "Had Nokks" and "A Place of Our Own" → as well as deleted music and footage (the "quoted" scenes don't really mean much to readers)
- "It was initially" → "The film was initially"
- "to released" → "to be released"
Reception
- Wikilink D-Box.
- "$42.2 million" → "$42.4 million"
Done
- "$130.3 million" → "$130.7 million"
Done
- Add a comma after the first use of "second weekend".
Done
- "$85.6 million" → "$85.2 million"
Done
- Add a hyphen between "highest grossing".
Done
- What source does "India ($3.1 million)" come from?
- Is actually Mexico based on a source from Deadline Hollywood.
Done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:15, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- Is actually Mexico based on a source from Deadline Hollywood.
- The PostTrak score needs a source.
- It is already cited with the Deadline Hollywood source, Postrack is not a website. Some with a featured article, Atlantis: The Lost Empire.
Already done Wingwatchers (talk) 02:19, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Wingwatchers: I know that. The PostTrak score is not featured in that article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:28, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina:
Replaced. Pamzeis (talk) 11:55, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina:
- @Wingwatchers: I know that. The PostTrak score is not featured in that article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:28, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- It is already cited with the Deadline Hollywood source, Postrack is not a website. Some with a featured article, Atlantis: The Lost Empire.
- The recipients in #Accolades should be sorted by last name using this template.
References
- Sources are archived.
- Wikilink David Faber (CNBC), Maureen Dowd, and Nell Minow.
- WP:IBTIMES finds International Business Times "generally unreliable".
- Sort categories in alphabetical order.
Done
- @Pamzeis:, can you leave some tasks for me? Thanks. Wingwatchers (talk) 15:53, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Wingwatchers: I have added all my notes. Article is on hold.
Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:37, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- What do you mean? Do you mean you want me to not complete some of the notes so you can do them? Pamzeis (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Hopefully, all
Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:48, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Pamzeis, Chompy Ace, and Wingwatchers: Great teamwork!
Passing the article.
Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Pamzeis, Chompy Ace, and Wingwatchers: Great teamwork!
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Hopefully, all
- What do you mean? Do you mean you want me to not complete some of the notes so you can do them? Pamzeis (talk) 01:53, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Wingwatchers: I have added all my notes. Article is on hold.