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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images appropriately licensed
- More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:44, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- Tell the reader that Ludendorff was a former general in the Prussian Army.
Done
- Move that to the lede.
Done
- partition Austria-Hungary of
Done
- French prime minister Georges Clemenceau in particular awkward. Suggest "in particular, French prime..."
Done
- in favor of Kingdom of Romania, the Kingdom of Serbs, Croats and Slovenes, First Czechoslovak Republic "the Kingdom" "and the"
Done
- You have a real problem in this article with forgetting to use articles like "the", "of", etc. Please do a thorough re-read and add all these sorts of missing words. Ping me when you're done and I'll continue the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:17, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
@Sturmvogel 66: I am ashamed to admit that you are right. It should be a tad better now.--Catlemur (talk) 19:16, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
- Hungarian society experienced a rise in the popularity of nationalism and revanchism Briefly explain why this happened in the lede
Done
- Link franc in the lede
Done
- Capitalize Admiral
Done
- Post-war Hungary experienced diplomatic isolation and economic hardship reads awkwardly to me, perhaps: "... suffered economic hardship and was isolated diplomatically"?
Done
- convert 93,000km
Done
- Hyphenate long established, French occupied, left over, oath swearing, brother in law,
Done
- spell out dollars
Done
howeverthey forgot "but" --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
Done
@Sturmvogel 66: All done.--Catlemur (talk) 16:45, 1 May 2021 (UTC)