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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
I'll take a look. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
Haven't taken an actual look yet, but...
- You need a longer lead about his Leafs career.
Done
- Montreal Canadians
Done
Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:32, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 3 is dead.
Done
- Canadian football and Harvard Crimson men's ice hockey might be good links.
Done
- Refs 5, 12, 37, and 44 have authors.
- Where? "THW ARCHIVES" stands for The Hockey News Archives
- Only 6 and 38 left. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
Done
- Only 6 and 38 left. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
- Where? "THW ARCHIVES" stands for The Hockey News Archives
- "received a final ranking of eighth amongst North American skaters from the NHL Central Scouting Bureau" Not verifiable via ref 10.
- It's cited to ref 11
- Well now it's 11. I think you added a ref earlier, so everything moved down by 1. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
- It's cited to ref 11
- Are there better mock drafts (from better sources) than those two sites?
Done
- Make sure authors' names are formatted consistently, such as ref 20.
- No author for ref 20
- Got moved down to ref 21. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
Done
- Got moved down to ref 21. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
- No author for ref 20
- "Maple Leafs Training Camp" Maple Leafs' training camp?
Done
- No box score/summary of the Marlies-Phantoms game from the Marlies' website?
Done
- "However" WP:EDITORIAL.
Done
- "He recovered in time to make his post-season debut with the Leafs, playing in all seven games during the first round against the Boston Bruins."" [citation needed]
Done.
- I feel like there is more to the 2019-20 season, at least more than two sentences.
Done
- "failed to medal" Mention they lost to Russia.
Done
- Reference column needs a name.
Done
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)