Talk:Cyclone Hary/GA1

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Lead

• Seems fine

History

• Good. Sadly, the prose here would benefit from the merge of some sentences, but due to the type of the article, this could only cause confusion.

Impact

• Good. The prose here flows better :)

references

• Ref #3 - "(French) Track for Intense Tropical Cyclone Hary (Report)." You should use |language=french inside the {{cite web}} template.
  • No, the ref is in {{cite report}} because it is a report. See Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Hurricane Gert (1993)/archive1. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 21:04, 5 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • I'll just change it. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref #4 - "Retrieved 2012-10-23." The date format is different frm the rest of the article
  • Fixed! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments

• As usual, I'd harly have to leave comments from your nominations. I only have those two comments from the references. Awaiting response. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks! Hope you enjoyed it :) --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yeah :) passed. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 01:35, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]