Talk:Chitty Chitty Death Bang/GA2
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Reviewer: That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 00:08, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
Looks good, a few changes and it's ready to go.
- Specific
- Each first sentence of each paragraph begins with "Chitty Chitty Death Bang", try changing that (it's used 4 times in the lead only).
- A "1 year old" should be "one-year-old"
- Nicaragua needs a link
- "other various characters" various other.
- "Peter lost his watch of the Dukes of Hazzard." This needs clarification.
- Could you be more specific? Pedro J. the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, what does it mean for one? It doesn't seem to make a lot of sense to me. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- "When Stewie is packing he takes a bag of Cheerios with him" How is that a reference. Should be removed.
- "called said that" Doesn't make sense. One or the other
- Also the sentence with "called said that" in it needs quote marks.
- Again tv.yahoo is not a very reliable source.
- Again? Well anyway, I disagree since the page is owned by Yahoo, but in any case I added a TV Guide link. Pedro J. the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- TV Guide is an even more unreliable source, remove it. I'll accept the Yahoo one, begrudgingly. That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- Everything else is taken care of. Pedro J. the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- General
- The cultural references section reads like a list of trivia.
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
(citations to reliable sources):
(OR):
- Pretty good overall, just one unreliable ref.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
(focused):
- Perfic'
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Perfic'
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Perfic'.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
(appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Okay that's a pass, good job working on this.
That Ole Cheesy Dude (Talk to the hand!) 00:25, 30 June 2011 (UTC)