Talk:Beat of My Heart/GA1

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 22:43, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

• No Issues. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

• since its inception. ---> I find this kind of vague, why it's just can't be release? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  Well, the song was performed on tour before it was actually released.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Alright then. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:14, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Development

• MTV News should not be italicized — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• The song was finally mastered by Joe Gastwirt. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 23:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

•  Done  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 01:16, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Composition

• It carries ---> How about it contains? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• An "overcompensating" guitar strums at a "feverish pace" throughout the song. ---> Maybe merge it with the previous sentence, because it's kind of odd on itself. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Euro pop ---> europop. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• In the chorus, she says ---> she sings i guess? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• she speaks ---> Again sings or some synonym. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:18, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

•  All done, with the exception of Euro pop, as it is from a quote.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

• Suggestion: maybe have Reception as main section and critical and commercial as subsections? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Rest looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

• Good job. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

• Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

• Good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

• There's WP:OVERLINK, unlink please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

•  Done  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

• Looks good. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References

• Ref. 13. misses publisher — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref. 16. doesn't have accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Refs. 17, 18, 19, same, missing accessdate — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref. 23. some linking please. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref. 25. MTV ---> MTV News. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref. 26. wrong formatting. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref. 28. misses publisher. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• When you link ref 23, unlink 34 — Tomíca^(T2ME) 20:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

•  Done I believe all of this has been resolved.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 21:06, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Okay passing this now. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 22:02, 11 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]