Talk:Angelina (Bob Dylan song)

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A fact from Angelina (Bob Dylan song) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 30 August 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Bob Dylan rhymes "Angelina" with "concertina", "hyena", "subpoena", "Argentina" and "arena"?

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The result was: promoted by Evrik (talk) 04:25, 22 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Bob Dylan's song "Angelina" was released exactly ten years after it was recorded? Source: Recorded March 26, 1981, released March 26, 1991. Source: Margotin, Philippe; Guedson, Jean-Michel (2022). Bob Dylan All the Songs: The Story Behind Every Track, p.505
- ALT1: ... that Bob Dylan rhymes "Angelina" with "concertina", "hyena", "subpoena", "Argentina" and "arena"? Source: Heylin, Clinton (2011). Still on the Road: The Songs of Bob Dylan Vol. 2 1974–2008, p.258
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- Comment: ALT suggestions welcome.

Created by BennyOnTheLoose (talk). Self-nominated at 00:11, 19 August 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Interesting enigmatic song, on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. I prefer the original hook, unusual! The rhymes don't really get to the core of the song. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:11, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Passed. Ippantekina (talk) 04:15, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Infobox: shouldn't the release date be 1991 instead?
- I may be missing something - it's showing March 26, 1991. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"his Gospel Tour which concluded" comma before "which"
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Any specific reason why the song was cut from Shot of Love?
- Heylin's Behind the Shades has quite a lot on the changing tracklist, but offers no reasons. I had a look at some other sources. In Time Out of Mind: The Lives of Bob Dylan (2013), Ian Bell wrote that the probable reason for a new tracklist was to keep the album's running time to 40 minutes, commenting: "Why songs such as 'Caribbean Wind' or 'Angelina' had to make way for the likes of the strange, half-hearted 'Lenny Bruce' remains one of the biggest mysteries. The artist has not explained himself." I've added a line into the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Trager also notes that" past tense for consistency
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Author Jim Beviglia thinks that" ditto
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Link rhyming pattern
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"included the track in 71st place" would be useful for us to know how many songs in total was in the list
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops, I misread the release date as 1981. My bad, Ippantekina (talk) 04:14, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Putting this On hold-- Ippantekina (talk) 16:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Side note; I'd appreciate very much if you could take a look at my current GAN for The Story of Us (song). Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 16:45, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks, Ippantekina. I've responded above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the changes. Passing-- Ippantekina (talk) 04:14, 12 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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