Talk:2013 El Reno tornado/GA1

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 00:05, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 00:05, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Three dead links - check the external link checker
  • This one's been on hold for a while, so I figured I would help out. Links fixed. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • Two of them are still dead, check the external link checker again.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 02:37, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
      • After fixing two dead links, I'm not seeing any more via the checker, so I think you can count this issue as fixed. Master of Time (talk) 01:57, 25 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "The widest tornado in recorded history, it was part of a larger weather system that produced dozens of tornadoes over the preceding days." Change the middle part to "history was part".
  • "The widest tornado in history was part..." would allow for some readers to assume that the "widest" claim refers to a different twister; to me this makes it clearer that we are referring to this tornado. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• The full name of CAPE should be mentioned before it can be abbreviated.
  • Put in a primer on CAPE. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "Thunderstorm activity across Oklahoma during the mid-afternoon hours was largely limited to far northern parts of the state due in part to a capping inversion that did not erode farther south until later in the day, aided by a shortwave trough that pushed into the region from the Texas Panhandle and a stronger trough located over Colorado." Citation needed.
  • Claim removed, couldn't find a reference. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "Many were located in a region northeast of the tornado's circulation, which was both in the direction of travel of the tornado and in an area known as the "bear's cage." WP:SPS.
  • Link removed and citation added. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:48, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "They are the first known tornado-related deaths of either recreational storm chasers or scientific researchers." Past tense.
  • Past now. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:51, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• Access dates aren't consistent.
  • I have addressed this point. Master of Time (talk) 00:44, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

*I believe I have addressed everything. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:51, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]