Talk:19 East 54th Street/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Add alt text to every image being used.
- "with a bead molding" - is the "a" necessary?
- Remove the space between "second- and".
- "in a similar manner" - kinda wordy.
- "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
- Add "the" before "United Nations Officers Club".
- "take title" → "take the title" (both times)
- Wikilink Carrie Donovan and Marylin Bender.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks, I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 16:50, 8 July 2021 (UTC)