Talk:1978 World Snooker Championship/GA1
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Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 18:38, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
These are so easy, I might as well grab the rest. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 18:38, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
Fourth verse, same as the first!
- Lead looks good
- Would suggest moving the sponsorship and BBC coverage from "Format" to "Background", perhaps after the promotion details (since they don't really pertain to the tournament format)
- Love the quote from Snooker Scene - politely brutal
- The whole qualifying round is very colorful
- I revised the sentence about the curse, which felt clunky. Lost the detail about "after the move to the Crucible" but I think that's worth it for the increased clarity
- Otherwise no prose gripes, same comment as the last several in the series - prose is crisp and tight
- That's it - the rest is tables and stats looks fine to me
- Sole image is appropriately used, freely licensed, and properly captioned
- No concerns about sourcing, which is in line with other snooker articles
- Taking the offline sources on GF, I have no concerns with the spot checks on online sources
- No CV or close paraphrasing issues either
I have the least to say here out of any of the WSC articles I reviewed. I really struggled to find anything to gripe about, so well done. Easy pass. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 06:09, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
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