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13 December 2021

22 July 2020

21 July 2020

  • 22:2122:21, 21 July 2020 diff hist −98 NoFapIf the header is simply a recap of sources used in the main body, then let's remove the links from the header. They clearly imply that the last statement is supported by those specific sources, which isn't true.
  • 21:1521:15, 21 July 2020 diff hist −34 NoFapNone of the sources refer to any neuroscientists. They also don't use the wording "simplistic" or "incorrect", so i edited the intro to reflect this.

27 April 2020

26 January 2020

15 January 2020

25 June 2019

29 May 2019

13 November 2018

31 October 2018

15 May 2018

  • 18:1618:16, 15 May 2018 diff hist −85 Athene (gamer)"He was from a young age exposed to social injustice" needs clarification. The second paragraph: "vigorous drive to change the world", sounds like self-promotion and lacks objectivity. The paragraph also needs to emphasise that these are his own words.
  • 18:0718:07, 15 May 2018 diff hist −136 Athene (gamer)Nowhere in the provided article does it state that Athene is "one of the most influential and well-known gamers". Such a serious claim deserves some actual evidence to support it.

20 May 2017