User contributions for WalterGR
A user with 939 edits. Account created on 2 November 2007.
18 July 2024
- 12:2212:22, 18 July 2024 diff hist +18 Serial killer Intro: Add “United States” to “The Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI)”. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:0712:07, 18 July 2024 diff hist +29 Serial killer Article is focused on the US. Add {{Globalize|date=July 2024}} Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 February 2024
- 23:2223:22, 7 February 2024 diff hist −576 GoFundMe →Business model: "Freedom Convoy 2022" is discussed elsewhere. Removing, since this section is titled "Business model" and not "Company history".
- 23:2023:20, 7 February 2024 diff hist −18 GoFundMe →Business model: "If the user receives no donations, then no charge is made." Well, the fundraiser ("user") is never charged. Reword.
- 23:0423:04, 7 February 2024 diff hist −110 Crowdfunding →Platforms: Remove "Currently, the three largest crowdfunding platforms are ... " Not in source. Per source: "We have used several parameters to come up with the top ten crowdfunding platforms. These parameters include the platform's popularity, reviews, charges, ease of use, and more."
- 23:0223:02, 7 February 2024 diff hist −37 Indiegogo →See also: Remove links to articles for specific crowd-funding sites. This is not the place for that. There's already a link to Comparison of crowdfunding services.
25 January 2024
- 07:0407:04, 25 January 2024 diff hist +64 Ningbo Intro: That Ningbo "is the world's busiest port by cargo tonnage and world's third-busiest container port" is a really big deal. Making that more prominent.
19 June 2021
- 05:0405:04, 19 June 2021 diff hist +34 m Satoshi Nakamoto Intro: Add {{Citation needed}} to "Nakamoto was the first to solve the double-spending problem for digital currency using a peer-to-peer network."
3 February 2020
- 21:3821:38, 3 February 2020 diff hist +18 Simon Pegg Intro: Replace 'holy trinity of science-fiction' - which appears to be a neologism (and appeared in single quotes in the article itself) - with actual quote from citation
24 August 2019
- 05:1105:11, 24 August 2019 diff hist 0 m "Weird Al" Yankovic Intro: Because of the "and" in the first clause, and commas in the final clause, this sentence needs to use semicolons to be clear.
6 May 2019
- 08:0408:04, 6 May 2019 diff hist +128 User:WalterGR Add link to page showing my edit count current
- 08:0208:02, 6 May 2019 diff hist −67 User talk:WalterGR Undo previous edit. There's a link to my contributions on my user profile page. Such a link isn't necessary on my "Talk" page. current Tag: Undo
- 07:5807:58, 6 May 2019 diff hist +461 Self-hosting Intro: The Website management meaning of the term needs to be in the intro
- 07:4707:47, 6 May 2019 diff hist +67 User talk:WalterGR Add link to Wikipedia page listing my edits
11 August 2018
- 09:0209:02, 11 August 2018 diff hist +41 Chris Burke (actor) Intro: Try to bring the opening sentence up-to-date
- 08:5808:58, 11 August 2018 diff hist +12 Sarah Palin Intro: Try to reduce non sequitur
- 08:5208:52, 11 August 2018 diff hist +36 Emily Kingsley Not to belabor the point, but "has been writing for the show ever since." needs a citation.
- 08:4308:43, 11 August 2018 diff hist −1 Madeline Stuart Intro: Correct punctuation
- 08:4208:42, 11 August 2018 diff hist +25 Madeline Stuart Intro: The text "the past 5 seasons" needs a {{When|date=August 2018}}
- 08:3508:35, 11 August 2018 diff hist +33 Down syndrome →Name: Citations don't validate the statement. Attempting to accurately represent what the citations state.
- 08:2708:27, 11 August 2018 diff hist +2 Down syndrome →Neurological: Move sentence about loss of speech to the paragraph about language
- 08:2508:25, 11 August 2018 diff hist +2 Down syndrome →Neurological: Move material about generalities and young age to the beginning of the section.
- 08:2008:20, 11 August 2018 diff hist −4 Down syndrome →Neurological: Replace "perform less well than" -> "perform worse than"
7 February 2018
- 15:3915:39, 7 February 2018 diff hist −2,481 Kenneth Copeland Replace several instances of first-party references and original research with {{Citation needed|date=February 2018}}.
7 May 2015
- 18:3418:34, 7 May 2015 diff hist +48 N Mobi (file format) WalterGR moved page Mobi (file format) to MOBI (file format): It looks like "Mobi" is written in uppercase throughout WP, so moving from Mobi (file format) to MOBI (file format).
- 18:3418:34, 7 May 2015 diff hist 0 m MOBI (file format) WalterGR moved page Mobi (file format) to MOBI (file format): It looks like "Mobi" is written in uppercase throughout WP, so moving from Mobi (file format) to MOBI (file format). current
- 18:3318:33, 7 May 2015 diff hist +24 N MOBI (file format) Creating page as redirect to Mobipocket
24 August 2013
- 20:3120:31, 24 August 2013 diff hist +392 Distributed computing →Properties of distributed systems: Revert 05:44, 21 February 2013 edit by 124.43.24.41 which gutted this paragraph and made it nonsensical.
26 January 2012
- 00:5400:54, 26 January 2012 diff hist +51 Prefix code →Prefix codes in use today: Add "variable-length Huffman codes" to examples, since it's listed in the intro
25 October 2011
- 07:2607:26, 25 October 2011 diff hist −154 GEOS (16-bit operating system) →GeoWorks Ensemble: Edit to reflect what the source actually says.
10 September 2011
- 10:0210:02, 10 September 2011 diff hist +28 Insomnia →Melatonin and melatonin agonists: There's nothing on the page for melatonin about drug abuse. That they lack the potential for dependence needs a citation.
- 09:5709:57, 10 September 2011 diff hist +39 Insomnia →Alcohol: Replace [ [polyuria] ] with [ [polyuria|the need to urinate] ]; and [ [diaphoresis] ] with [ [diaphoresis|excessive sweating] ]. This isn't a text from medical school.
5 September 2011
- 18:1618:16, 5 September 2011 diff hist −3 Conglomerate (company) →Advantages: "For example" works better than "In other words", especially
9 July 2011
- 17:3617:36, 9 July 2011 diff hist +240 Talk:Sean Penn →Edit request from 87.228.193.47, 30 May 2011: Respond to prior comment. The above seems like spam. I'd revert it, but I don't know the policy about reversions on Talk pages...
- 17:3417:34, 9 July 2011 diff hist +1 Talk:Sean Penn →Educational background?: Properly indent response (I think / hope it's okay to perform this type of edit...)
- 17:2417:24, 9 July 2011 diff hist +4 Toys (film) Intro: Rephrase awkward sentence.
- 17:2117:21, 9 July 2011 diff hist +7 Robin Wright →Personal life: Rephrase awkward sentence
12 January 2011
- 12:1812:18, 12 January 2011 diff hist −440 Robots.txt →Extended standard: Section was added in 07:01, 31 July 2006 edit, linked to some website, with no discussion of notability. This "Extended standard" hasn't been adopted. Removed.
5 January 2011
- 09:5409:54, 5 January 2011 diff hist −1 Franz Lisp Use more encyclopedic language: Change "It appeared on the scene" -> "The project was started"
29 December 2010
- 10:4310:43, 29 December 2010 diff hist +23 Template:Wiki software Differentiate between CLiki and Svnwiki using Common Lisp and Scheme, respectively
15 December 2010
- 18:5418:54, 15 December 2010 diff hist +30 Munin (software) Add {{advert|date=December 2010}}
9 December 2010
- 09:4209:42, 9 December 2010 diff hist +26 IBM Db2 →History: To "considered by many to have been the first database product to use SQL" add {{Who|date=December 2010}}
8 December 2010
- 13:3613:36, 8 December 2010 diff hist +316 Talk:Family Ties (Arrested Development) →The actress who plays Nellie?: new section
6 December 2010
- 21:5421:54, 6 December 2010 diff hist −8 Phusion Passenger Change "This claim has been verified by major third parties." -> "This claim has been verified by Shopify."
- 01:4301:43, 6 December 2010 diff hist −4 Roku, Inc. →Digital video player: The blog post used as a reference was a word-for-word copy of a page on another site. Using that site as the reference.
21 November 2010
- 13:1413:14, 21 November 2010 diff hist −4 Valency (linguistics) Undid revision 397548372 by 128.135.226.16 (talk) I believe the reverted edit was incorrect.
- 13:1313:13, 21 November 2010 diff hist −34 2009 MTV Video Music Awards Intro: Said: "...unlike in last year..." and linked to the 2008 awards page. That's incorrect. Removing link, because the 2008 MTV VMA page is already linked: in the previous sentence.
- 13:0913:09, 21 November 2010 diff hist +24 2009 MTV Video Music Awards Undid revision 395129532 by 98.156.75.184 (talk) Obama wasn't president at the time. *Very* important distinction to make.
- 12:5812:58, 21 November 2010 diff hist −1 Ambush marketing →History: Use proper double quotes and proper spacing related to them. (Sorry - I don't know WP's policy on period-inside-or-outside-double-quotation-marks. I went with inside.)
- 12:5512:55, 21 November 2010 diff hist +49 The Firm (1993 film) Add {{Distinguish|The Firm (1988 television film)}}
