User contributions for Vabro
A user with 32 edits. Account created on 17 September 2019.
16 December 2019
- 03:0403:04, 16 December 2019 diff hist +15,721 User:Vabro/sandbox →Bibliography of Sources for Editing "Bone (comics)" Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0303:03, 16 December 2019 diff hist −304 Bone (comics) →Lead: This lead section better describes what the article is truly about Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5901:59, 16 December 2019 diff hist +1,464 Bone (comics) →Reception: I added this subsection to create a more balanced article. Before, this section consisted only of good reviews, none that opposed the book in any way Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5401:54, 16 December 2019 diff hist +2,497 Bone (comics) →Analysis: The article did not previously have an analysis section, however, there were various details contained within other sections that were better suited for an analysis section than where they were. This will help direct reader towards the info that they are looking for. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:1101:11, 16 December 2019 diff hist +1,582 Bone (comics) →Genre: I have added a genre section, as the article did not previously have one. Graphic novels are a very specific Genre so it makes sense to specify to the readers. Tag: Visual edit
15 December 2019
- 23:2723:27, 15 December 2019 diff hist −593 Bone (comics) →Background: Here, I switched the sentence structure of the first few paragraphs to make the section flow better. I think it gives the audience a clearer read of this section. Before there were many run-on sentences that made the text hard to follow. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3922:39, 15 December 2019 diff hist −9 Bone (comics) →Publication history: According to the wikipedia guideline, the background section should include info about how the book emerged. It should include details about when and why the author wrote it, what inspired them, etc. I felt like this part of the publication history section did so, while the other bit did not. I therefore decided to separate them in order to make the article more accessible to the reader. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3622:36, 15 December 2019 diff hist +34 Bone (comics) →Publication history: separated two sections and named this one publication history, as this sections tells more about the past publication events, whereas the other info that was included told more background info, it highlighted what it took to get the book made, how it came about and the life of the author. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3022:30, 15 December 2019 diff hist +714 Bone (comics) →Story: Changed the title of the section to follow the wikipedia guidelines. Removed the analysis that was in the text(moved to separate section) so that the reader did not get confused, as this section included a lot of information they might not have been looking for. Re organized much of the sentence structure of the actual summary so that the paragraph flow better. Include that this summary is only from the 1st novel, it gives an idea of what the others are but doesn't detail the series. Tag: Visual edit
3 December 2019
- 16:4516:45, 3 December 2019 diff hist +1,186 User talk:Vabro/sandbox →Evaluation of Proposed Changes: new section
28 November 2019
- 00:3600:36, 28 November 2019 diff hist +917 User talk:BenTelerski/sandbox →Proposed Additions and Changes to the Article: new section
- 00:2600:26, 28 November 2019 diff hist +710 User talk:Zach Riviere/sandbox →Evaluation of Proposed Changes: new section
27 November 2019
- 23:5123:51, 27 November 2019 diff hist +1,844 Talk:Bone (comics) →Proposed Additions and Changes to the Article: new section
26 November 2019
- 13:2413:24, 26 November 2019 diff hist +9,933 m User:Vabro/sandbox →"The Handmaid's Tale" Mock Edit Tags: Possible self promotion in userspace Visual edit
19 November 2019
- 16:1416:14, 19 November 2019 diff hist +229 Talk:Bone (comics) Update WRIT 015-12- Banned and Challenged Books assignment details Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
- 16:1416:14, 19 November 2019 diff hist +17 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Georgetown University/WRIT 015-12- Banned and Challenged Books (Fall 2019) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
29 October 2019
- 15:4815:48, 29 October 2019 diff hist +924 m User:Vabro/sandbox Mock Edit Tag: Visual edit
24 October 2019
- 16:5716:57, 24 October 2019 diff hist +825 m User:Vabro/sandbox Fun Home evaluation Tag: Visual edit
22 October 2019
- 12:5812:58, 22 October 2019 diff hist +537 m User:Vabro/sandbox →The Handmaid's Tale Tag: Visual edit
17 October 2019
- 16:0616:06, 17 October 2019 diff hist +1,069 m User:Vabro/sandbox →"Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy" Evaluation Tag: Visual edit
11 October 2019
- 03:3503:35, 11 October 2019 diff hist +22 m Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy Added this source/citation as an easy reference for interested parties Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2603:26, 11 October 2019 diff hist +438 m Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy →Chief Wahoo as a racial caricature: The article fails to address the attitudes towards the Indian's name and logo before the 1970s, by adding this detail one can better understand how insensitive and dismissive society was at the time and how the public viewed the controversy. Tag: Visual edit
10 October 2019
- 16:0416:04, 10 October 2019 diff hist +2 m Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy Changed "to" to "with" to improve grammar and flow Tag: Visual edit
- 15:5715:57, 10 October 2019 diff hist +19 m Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy Replaced the dead URL with one that is now valid. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4615:46, 10 October 2019 diff hist +1 m Cleveland Indians name and logo controversy Corrected spelling of the word "too," improving sentence's grammatical state. Tag: Visual edit
- 10:3010:30, 10 October 2019 diff hist +4,536 m User:Vabro/sandbox Evaluation and suggestion for the article Tag: Visual edit
8 October 2019
- 18:3118:31, 8 October 2019 diff hist +5,984 N User:Vabro/Evaluate an Article Added comma to make sentence grammatically correct current Tag: Visual edit
27 September 2019
- 02:2302:23, 27 September 2019 diff hist 0 m The Hate U Give Improper punctuation according to grammatical standards Tag: Visual edit
17 September 2019
- 13:4613:46, 17 September 2019 diff hist +30 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Georgetown University/WRIT 015-12- Banned and Challenged Books (Fall 2019) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
- 13:4613:46, 17 September 2019 diff hist +33 N User:Vabro/sandbox adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org sandbox}} Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
- 13:4613:46, 17 September 2019 diff hist +235 N User talk:Vabro adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org talk course link}} Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
- 13:4613:46, 17 September 2019 diff hist +233 N User:Vabro User has enrolled in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/Georgetown_University/WRIT_015-12-_Banned_and_Challenged_Books_(Fall_2019). current Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.2]
