User contributions for Trevayne08
A user with 2,713 edits. Account created on 2 September 2011.
4 July 2024
- 21:5021:50, 4 July 2024 diff hist −15 Fairey Delta 2 →Specifications (Fairey Delta 2): - returned to original page, due to calculation errors current Tag: Manual revert
- 21:4921:49, 4 July 2024 diff hist +4 m Fairey Delta 2 →Specifications (Fairey Delta 2): corrected format issue Tag: Reverted
- 21:4721:47, 4 July 2024 diff hist +11 m Fairey Delta 2 →Specifications (Fairey Delta 2): - added "Mach 1.96" Tag: Reverted
25 June 2024
- 11:2011:20, 25 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Prettyprint →See also: - (subordinate clause muddled overall meaning/intent; corrected) current
22 June 2024
- 21:3221:32, 22 June 2024 diff hist −2 m List of Star Trek regions of space →Delphic Expanse: - "abbreviated as" ==> "shortened to" (incorrect usage) current
18 June 2024
- 17:2817:28, 18 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Planet - "built" ==> "formed", "are formed" ==> "coalesce" (style)
- 09:1909:19, 18 June 2024 diff hist +5 m Thrinaxodon →Dentition: - "are" ==> "is" (plural mismatch), "case" ==> "instance" (style) current
- 08:1908:19, 18 June 2024 diff hist +4 m Fractofusus misrai (hyperlinked to "Glide Reflection" Wiki article) current
- 08:1608:16, 18 June 2024 diff hist +90 m Fractofusus misrai - added detail
17 June 2024
- 15:4515:45, 17 June 2024 diff hist +84 m Douglas F4D Skyray - added detail current
15 June 2024
- 13:5813:58, 15 June 2024 diff hist +27 m Norm Macdonald added "eccentric understatement" (descriptive)
14 June 2024
- 15:0115:01, 14 June 2024 diff hist −6 m C++ - "almost always" ==> "usually" (wordy, awkward) current
9 June 2024
- 07:5207:52, 9 June 2024 diff hist −4 m Life Is Peachy →Background: - minor edits (style)
8 June 2024
- 10:3210:32, 8 June 2024 diff hist +11 m Thrinaxodon →Dentition: - resolved attribution issue
- 10:1310:13, 8 June 2024 diff hist +35 m Thrinaxodon →Dentition: - added detail; more technical (appropriate to article content)
- 09:5309:53, 8 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Thrinaxodon →Histology: - minor recast of sentence (streamlined; stylistic)
- 09:4609:46, 8 June 2024 diff hist −5 m Thrinaxodon →Skull: - "bear" ==> "bears" (direct object plural mismatch; corrected. "which" is unnecessary)
- 09:4309:43, 8 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Thrinaxodon →Skull: - dangling modifier ("arrangement resembles lizards" (incorrect) ==> "resembles that of lizards"), other minor edits
31 May 2024
- 09:1809:18, 31 May 2024 diff hist +7 m Campus network →University campuses: - added "laboratories" current
- 03:2703:27, 31 May 2024 diff hist −2 m Anchorite No edit summary
25 April 2024
- 02:5802:58, 25 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Sukhoi Su-9 →Specifications (Su-9): - the speed of sound (Mach 1) at 43,000 feet is about 660 mph. 1320 mph / 660 mph = 2.0. Mach 2.0
- 02:5302:53, 25 April 2024 diff hist +5 m Sukhoi Su-9 →Design: - "factors" ==> "features" (usage) & recast sentence
14 April 2024
- 09:1409:14, 14 April 2024 diff hist −14 m GeForce 10 series - "have started being used" ==> "were used" (wordy; corrected)
17 March 2024
- 04:0304:03, 17 March 2024 diff hist +4 m T Coronae Borealis →2016-present activity: - rephrased (style)
13 March 2024
- 17:1717:17, 13 March 2024 diff hist +96 m Conewago Township, York County, Pennsylvania - added detail
- 15:4015:40, 13 March 2024 diff hist +9 m Hanover, Pennsylvania - added "surveyors" (clarity/detail)
11 March 2024
- 12:4012:40, 11 March 2024 diff hist +29 m U-boat →Developments: - (minor edits)
- 12:2312:23, 11 March 2024 diff hist +11 m U-boat →Operations: (minor edits)
8 March 2024
- 22:1022:10, 8 March 2024 diff hist +3 m Hymenocarina added "to" (omission) current
- 22:0922:09, 8 March 2024 diff hist −9 m Hymenocarina "..at least" - removed (unnecessary qualification)
20 February 2024
- 16:2416:24, 20 February 2024 diff hist +199 User talk:Trevayne08 →Invitation: Reply current Tag: Reply
16 February 2024
- 14:1714:17, 16 February 2024 diff hist +38 m Hyperparathyroidism →Treatment: (clarity, style)
11 February 2024
- 15:2315:23, 11 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Drive-In Saturday →Recording and release: - "led to his shaving of his eyebrows" ==> "led to him shaving off his eyebrows" (added emphasis)
9 February 2024
- 14:0314:03, 9 February 2024 diff hist −8,502 Hyperparathyroidism Final Edit (completed Paragraph / section consolidation)
- 13:4813:48, 9 February 2024 diff hist +8,485 m Hyperparathyroidism →Causes and Diagnoses
- 13:3313:33, 9 February 2024 diff hist +8,889 m Hyperparathyroidism →Causes and Diagnoses: (consolidated "Diagnosis" paragraph)
- 13:3213:32, 9 February 2024 diff hist −8,887 Hyperparathyroidism →Diagnosis: (consolidated pargraphs)
- 13:2813:28, 9 February 2024 diff hist −4,184 m Hyperparathyroidism - Removed duplicate "Cause" paragraph (consolidated in "Causes and Diagnoses")
- 13:2513:25, 9 February 2024 diff hist +3 m Hyperparathyroidism →Causes and Diagnoses: - inserted paragraph breaks
- 13:1913:19, 9 February 2024 diff hist +4,165 Hyperparathyroidism →Causes and Diagnoses: - (consolidated - removed redundant paragraphs)
- 09:4409:44, 9 February 2024 diff hist −6 m Hyperparathyroidism - Added paragraph headers
- 09:4209:42, 9 February 2024 diff hist −1 m Hyperparathyroidism No edit summary
- 09:4009:40, 9 February 2024 diff hist +26 m Hyperparathyroidism Inserted paragraph breaks (with other minor edits).
8 February 2024
- 13:3213:32, 8 February 2024 diff hist +2 m Kakadu (software) "heavy" ==> "heavily" (standard usage) current
6 February 2024
- 10:0410:04, 6 February 2024 diff hist −26 m IBM AS/400 →Legacy: - "something that ceased to be the case" ==> "which ended" (wordy; corrected)
30 January 2024
- 19:3219:32, 30 January 2024 diff hist −8 m Intel 8008 - "byte-oriented" ==> 8-bit (more concise)
- 18:5418:54, 30 January 2024 diff hist −2 m Victor Poor - "programme" ==> "program"
27 January 2024
- 15:4215:42, 27 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Harley-Davidson Sportster - "details" ==> "features" (style, usage)
22 January 2024
- 20:0820:08, 22 January 2024 diff hist −8 m Hemimastigophora - "is potentially" ==> "may be" (vague)
9 January 2024
- 15:5515:55, 9 January 2024 diff hist −23 m Charles H. Townes →Early life and education: - "as well as had a" (awkward / poor usage; corrected)
