User contributions for That Drunk Monkey 12
A user with 51 edits. Account created on 5 February 2017.
25 November 2021
- 14:1314:13, 25 November 2021 diff hist +3 m English school of international relations theory →Key works: Changed out an incorrect link
5 June 2021
- 10:4510:45, 5 June 2021 diff hist +3,042 User talk:SFC9394 →Alistair Cooke, race and golf: new section
- 10:2610:26, 5 June 2021 diff hist −515 m Alistair Cooke Undid revision 1010727654 by SFC9394 (talk) please go and listen to the broadcast, I agree the langauge does not look good but its worth actually listening through again. His argument (whether you agree with him or not) is that the amount of successful sportmen is so limited that young men should try to expand into broader fields to ensure their carrer success. His wording was poor but you are absolutely misconstruing his argument. Tag: Undo
- 10:1410:14, 5 June 2021 diff hist +21 m Breach of promise →England: Changed to 'England and Wales' to clarify the jurisdiction of legislation Tag: Visual edit
17 May 2021
- 13:3713:37, 17 May 2021 diff hist −1 m Honorary male Improved the continuity of grammar - very minor edit Tag: Visual edit
6 March 2021
- 16:0516:05, 6 March 2021 diff hist +1 m Navajo Nation fixed Tag: Visual edit
- 16:0416:04, 6 March 2021 diff hist −8 m Navajo Nation Changed 'Native American' to 'American Indian' as this is the official term, and the term that most of the Navajo Nation residents refer to themselves. It is the official name of 'Indian reservations'; 'native american' refers to any indigenous groups of both Americas, 'American Indians' is specific to the continental United States. Their own website makes reference to this. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4215:42, 6 March 2021 diff hist −515 Alistair Cooke Removed text on a quote regarding an increase in black people in golf after Tiger Woods success. It appears to be added to give an appearence of Cooke holding racist views that were not expressed in the broadcast quoted. This quote gave no contest and is irrelevant to a wikipedia page as it is an out of contest quote from a single broadcast. If you wish to use this quote it must be given full contest, I advice listening to the complete broadcast first, it's easy to see why I've removed it. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
3 December 2020
- 13:5313:53, 3 December 2020 diff hist −2,057 Stonehage Fleming Removed the excessive amount of promotional langauge, I suspect much information has come directly from the companies website. That is fine if done in an informative way, i.e. getting the names of members of the board. But you must not copy paste the promotional biographies of these people. I have taken quite alot of bulk out of the page also as much of the information is not needed and should be more concise. Feel free to add further info but do not turn this page back into a promotion. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:5411:54, 3 December 2020 diff hist +94 m Clipper Teas Added note saying the tone is too promotional, I will edit it later Tag: Visual edit
15 August 2020
- 18:5218:52, 15 August 2020 diff hist +332 Talk:Roger Waters →Criticism
- 17:4217:42, 15 August 2020 diff hist 0 m Killing of Maria Colwell Changed 'English' to 'British' to be inline with objective and more inclusive langauge Tag: Visual edit
8 August 2020
- 16:1716:17, 8 August 2020 diff hist −708 Dakota Hotels Cleared up cluter and removed sections that were clearly promotional in nature and citations straight from the firms own website. Has an employee or owner of the company been editing this page? Tag: Visual edit
9 January 2020
- 13:2813:28, 9 January 2020 diff hist +2,113 m User talk:That Drunk Monkey 12 Undid revision 934944728 by That Drunk Monkey 12 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 13:2813:28, 9 January 2020 diff hist −2,113 m User talk:That Drunk Monkey 12 No edit summary
- 13:2713:27, 9 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Roger Waters Undid revision 934768679 by ToaneeM (talk) Citizenship is an objective not subjective criteria, Tag: Undo
- 13:2613:26, 9 January 2020 diff hist +1,428 User talk:ToaneeM →January 2020: new section
8 January 2020
- 09:2309:23, 8 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Roger Waters No reason given for revision Tag: Undo
7 January 2020
- 20:1220:12, 7 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Roger Waters Previous revision was based upon a more clear term that is easier for an international audience. It is also a more official term based upon a clear criteria. Tag: Undo
- 10:5110:51, 7 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Roger Waters This is a British citizen, there is no English, Scottish or Welsh citizenship. This would be like labelling a celebrity from Paris a ‘Parisian’ rather than French or someone from Los Angeles a ‘Californian’ rather than American. This is unnecessarily specific, and I see no reason to use the label ‘English’, ‘Scottish’ or ‘Welsh’, outside of specific reasons, e.g, members of the Welsh Assembly or Scottish Football League. Using these terms is confusing for non-British readers.
4 January 2020
- 12:4612:46, 4 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Charlie Watts No explanation for edit, no specific reason for usage. Tag: Undo
3 January 2020
- 09:2309:23, 3 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Charlie Watts This is a British citizen, there is no English, Scottish or Welsh citizenship. This would be like labelling a celebrity from Paris a ‘Parisian’ rather than French or someone from Los Angeles a ‘Californian’ rather than American. This is unnecessarily specific, and I see no reason to use the label ‘English’, ‘Scottish’ or ‘Welsh’, outside of specific reasons, e.g, members of the Welsh Assembly or Scottish Football League. Using these terms is confusing for non-British readers.
- 09:1609:16, 3 January 2020 diff hist −1 m Jonny Buckland This is a British person with British citizenship, there is no English, Scottish or Welsh citizenship. This would be like labelling a celebrity from Paris a ‘Parisian’ rather than French or calling someone from Los Angeles a ‘Californian’ rather than American. This is unnecessarily specific, and I see no reason to use the label ‘English’, ‘Scottish’ or ‘Welsh’, outside of specific reasons, such as members of the Welsh Assembly or Scottish Football League. Using these terms is confusing for non-B
22 December 2019
- 22:0122:01, 22 December 2019 diff hist −129 m James College, York No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:4921:49, 22 December 2019 diff hist −1 m The Rolling Stones No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1421:14, 22 December 2019 diff hist −1 m The Rolling Stones No edit summary
- 21:1421:14, 22 December 2019 diff hist −1 m The Beatles No edit summary
- 21:1221:12, 22 December 2019 diff hist −1 m David Tennant No edit summary
- 21:1121:11, 22 December 2019 diff hist 0 m William Booth No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 21:0921:09, 22 December 2019 diff hist 0 m Jenna Coleman No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
19 December 2019
- 14:3914:39, 19 December 2019 diff hist +90 m Template:British political youth organisations No edit summary current
- 14:2214:22, 19 December 2019 diff hist −90 m Template:Infobox political youth organization/doc You don't need to use the term 'chairperson', just use the term 'chair'. Its less unwieldy, e.g. "Tom is the chair of a company", "Sarah and Ella and the co-chair's of a charity". Chairperson is an unneeded word.
- 14:1314:13, 19 December 2019 diff hist 0 m Labour Students Changed 'Chairperson' to 'Chair', as 'person' is unnecessary. This also makes it consistent with the rest of the article which uses the term 'chair' not 'chairperson'
- 14:1214:12, 19 December 2019 diff hist +6 Labour Students Undid revision 931540510 by That Drunk Monkey 12 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 14:1014:10, 19 December 2019 diff hist −6 m Labour Students Changed 'Chairperson' to 'Chair', as 'person' is unnecessary. Chair is understood the same way and is less
26 November 2019
- 08:0708:07, 26 November 2019 diff hist −42 m Window Rock, Arizona Changed 'Native American' to 'American Indian' as this is term that most of the Navajo Nation residents refer to themselves. It is the official name of 'Indian reservations'; 'native american' refers to any indigenous groups of both Americas, 'American Indians' is specific to the continental United States. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 November 2019
- 21:1221:12, 25 November 2019 diff hist +2 m Window Rock, Arizona No edit summary
- 21:1121:11, 25 November 2019 diff hist +1 m Window Rock, Arizona No edit summary
- 21:1021:10, 25 November 2019 diff hist +90 m Window Rock, Arizona Changed 'Native American' to 'American Indian' as this is the official term, and the term that most of the Navajo Nation residents refer to themselves. It is the official name of 'Indian reservations'; 'native american' refers to any indigenous groups of both Americas, 'American Indians' is specific to the continental United States. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 20:4520:45, 25 November 2019 diff hist +91 m Navajo Nation Changed 'Native American' to 'American Indian' as this is the official term, and the term that most of the Navajo Nation residents refer to themselves. It is the official name of 'Indian reservations'; 'native american' refers to any indigenous groups of both Americas, 'American Indians' is specific to the continental United States. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
9 September 2019
- 19:0319:03, 9 September 2019 diff hist −239 m The Mill (building) Changed country from England to United Kingdom Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 January 2019
- 10:1310:13, 17 January 2019 diff hist −104 m Borough of St Edmundsbury Removed unnecessary text that is not useful. Also removed text that appears as unnecessarily positive and possibly written by someone with undeclared interests in the college.
31 December 2018
- 15:1515:15, 31 December 2018 diff hist −149 m Halifax College, York Removed text that is opinion rather than objective and appears as written by a representative of the university, if it is from a representative it should be in quotations.
- 15:1215:12, 31 December 2018 diff hist −956 m Halifax College, York Removed unnecessary text that is not useful or evidenced well. Also removed text that appears as unnecessarily positive and possibly written by someone with undeclared interests in the college.
- 15:0615:06, 31 December 2018 diff hist −157 m Halifax College, York Removed text that is opinion rather than objective and appears as written by a representative of the university, if it is from a representative it should be in quotations.
- 15:0015:00, 31 December 2018 diff hist −205 m James College, York Removing unnecessarily poetic text that appears to be a students narrative of life which should be in quotation.
- 14:5614:56, 31 December 2018 diff hist −152 m James College, York Removing text that is not objective and to opinionated
11 July 2017
- 18:3818:38, 11 July 2017 diff hist +9 Higgs and Hill No edit summary
- 11:3511:35, 11 July 2017 diff hist +86 Woolpit →Notable residents
2 May 2017
- 18:0818:08, 2 May 2017 diff hist +4 Woolpit →Notable residents
