User contributions for Moonriver1
A user with 49 edits. Account created on 13 August 2022.
2 September 2023
- 02:1702:17, 2 September 2023 diff hist +93 Super Mario Bros. Wonder →Development and release: general fixes Tag: Visual edit
7 August 2023
- 04:2404:24, 7 August 2023 diff hist +396 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together New release noted Tag: Visual edit
11 July 2023
- 16:4116:41, 11 July 2023 diff hist +27 User:Moonriver1 disclosed the new account I moved to current Tag: Visual edit
3 July 2023
- 03:2903:29, 3 July 2023 diff hist +21 Super Mario Bros. Wonder corrected grammar, "Super Mario Bros." is Nintendo's distinction for linear 2D Mario games, included language to specify this and gameplay Tags: Reverted Visual edit
25 May 2023
- 01:0901:09, 25 May 2023 diff hist −142 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Style and accuracy corrections to other characters not in last edit Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5400:54, 25 May 2023 diff hist +161 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Style: redundancies and phrasing. Returned omitted information and corrected inaccuracies. Added some words to make certain passages more specific. Included links to Wikipedia pages for certain concepts. Tag: Visual edit
6 March 2023
- 15:4215:42, 6 March 2023 diff hist −3 m Kishōtenketsu →Japanese: Typo
11 February 2023
- 00:0000:00, 11 February 2023 diff hist +2 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Song title in quotes
8 February 2023
- 21:3321:33, 8 February 2023 diff hist +19 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Clarified global release of Muse Dash content & date.
- 21:3121:31, 8 February 2023 diff hist +42 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Used italics for titles, moved one sentence to the following paragraph, minor text changes
- 21:2221:22, 8 February 2023 diff hist +22 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Katakana for ALyCE （アリス）is used in source material.
7 February 2023
- 18:3918:39, 7 February 2023 diff hist −6 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together There are no references to "high school" in either the text of the game or promotional material, (the game is rated by the EOCS {{ja|コンピュータソフトウェア倫理機構}} which prohibits this and any other term which could imply characters are underage from being used in games) So this was likely included in error.
- 13:4213:42, 7 February 2023 diff hist +4 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
- 13:4113:41, 7 February 2023 diff hist +1,898 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Included information present on the existing Chinese Wikipedia article at zh:多娜多娜 一起幹壞事吧 pertaining to a review on Taiwanese gaming publication "4Gamers" by contributing author 溫帶閒魚. This review talks about impressions of story content. Edit also added Simplified Chinese release of the game. Lastly, lead section was rearranged for relevance.
- 11:2811:28, 7 February 2023 diff hist −17 m Yggdra Union Changed past-tense language to present-tense to reflect that the Windows version released as of today.
11 January 2023
- 17:3717:37, 11 January 2023 diff hist +1 m Mushroom Kingdom No edit summary
- 17:3517:35, 11 January 2023 diff hist −81 User:Moonriver1 ←Blanked the page Tag: Blanking
- 17:3317:33, 11 January 2023 diff hist −120 Mushroom Kingdom "Overview" edited for style and grammar. No information was added, changed, or removed. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
22 December 2022
- 23:1723:17, 22 December 2022 diff hist +5 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Characters: There was an error where the Alice-chan mascot was mistakenly referred to as ALyCE
11 November 2022
- 10:1410:14, 11 November 2022 diff hist +11 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
3 November 2022
- 23:2123:21, 3 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Topics → Themes
- 23:1723:17, 3 November 2022 diff hist +1 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
- 23:1623:16, 3 November 2022 diff hist −5 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Characters
- 23:1323:13, 3 November 2022 diff hist +7 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Characters
- 23:1023:10, 3 November 2022 diff hist −4 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
1 November 2022
- 13:4913:49, 1 November 2022 diff hist +16 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
- 13:4813:48, 1 November 2022 diff hist −16 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
- 13:4113:41, 1 November 2022 diff hist −19 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
- 13:3713:37, 1 November 2022 diff hist 0 Talk:Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Translate from Chinese Version
- 13:3513:35, 1 November 2022 diff hist −241 User:Moonriver1 No edit summary
- 11:2111:21, 1 November 2022 diff hist −1 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Story
- 11:2111:21, 1 November 2022 diff hist +493 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Proofreading in "Story," and added critical detail to paragraph 2.
- 11:0111:01, 1 November 2022 diff hist −8 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together N CO
- 10:5710:57, 1 November 2022 diff hist +68 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Phrasing and clarity
- 10:4410:44, 1 November 2022 diff hist +7 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Fixed tense in "Characters" section & clarity
- 10:0210:02, 1 November 2022 diff hist 0 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Sentence structure
- 09:5909:59, 1 November 2022 diff hist −13 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Fixed redundancies
- 09:4609:46, 1 November 2022 diff hist +637 Talk:Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Translate from Chinese Version: Reply Tag: Reply
- 09:4509:45, 1 November 2022 diff hist −541 Talk:Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Translate from Chinese Version Tag: Manual revert
- 09:4509:45, 1 November 2022 diff hist +541 Talk:Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Translate from Chinese Version Tag: Reverted
- 09:4109:41, 1 November 2022 diff hist +3,475 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together All content in this edit is translated/adapted from the existing Chinese Wikipedia article at zh:多娜多娜 一起幹壞事吧; see its history for attribution. Added the 3 characters included in the Chinese article but missing from this one. This edit seeks to bring the Characters section more in-line with the Chinese article. Also included is location of each in-text reference, Ep. = Episode. Also corrected Katakana for "Zappa" Please seek out the Kanji for ”Hisamitsu” which was missing from CN article.
- 07:4807:48, 1 November 2022 diff hist +1,361 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together Created named reference for the game itself, expanded one sentence with minor detail in light of this
- 07:3807:38, 1 November 2022 diff hist −2 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together No edit summary
30 October 2022
- 20:5220:52, 30 October 2022 diff hist +9 m Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Characters: one missing word
- 20:5020:50, 30 October 2022 diff hist +264 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together →Characters: Improved phrasing and corrected spelling
13 August 2022
- 12:3612:36, 13 August 2022 diff hist +118 User:Moonriver1 No edit summary
- 12:3512:35, 13 August 2022 diff hist +116 User:Moonriver1 No edit summary
- 12:3312:33, 13 August 2022 diff hist +88 N User:Moonriver1 ←Created page with 'I am passionate about literary criticism and active in the Eroge/Visual Novel community.'
- 12:1612:16, 13 August 2022 diff hist +185 Dohna Dohna: Let's Do Bad Things Together In "Development and release," added more specific and professional wording for character designs/artwork sentence. Included missing information about "Deluxe edition" bundle. Clarified the role of Shiravune in translating Properly formatted quotation marks. Removed redundancies. Improved professional verbiage. Changed "Song of Dohna Dohna" to "Dohna Dohna no Uta," which is the offical English title, despite being romaji. https://music.apple.com/us/album/dohna-dohna-no-uta/1588016144?i=1588017455
