User contributions for Kabocha
A user with 347 edits. Account created on 6 April 2008.
9 November 2020
- 21:0221:02, 9 November 2020 diff hist +2,517 Talk:Toyota →Organization and Corporate History Issues
8 November 2020
- 16:1716:17, 8 November 2020 diff hist +1,569 Talk:Toyota →Organization and Corporate History Issues: new section
- 15:5415:54, 8 November 2020 diff hist +1 m Toyota →1920s{{ndash}}1930s
7 November 2020
- 16:2116:21, 7 November 2020 diff hist +17 Toyota →Japan: moving the para. about Diesel Stores ahead of the Publica Stores, because Diesel Stores were established before Publica Stores.
- 16:1316:13, 7 November 2020 diff hist −68 Toyota →Japan: Removing citation that does not support the statement preceding it. The cite was to <ref>{{cite web|title=List of Toyota Dealerships in Japan|url=http://www.toyota-global.com/company/history_of_toyota/75years/data/automotive_business/sales/dealerships/japan/index.html|website=Toyota Japan|publisher=Toyota Motor Corporation|accessdate=January 15, 2014|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20140116060621/http://www.toyota-global.com/company/history_of_toyota/75years/data/automotive_
- 15:3215:32, 7 November 2020 diff hist −38 Toyota →Japan: Fixing incomplete citation to the Marco Ruiz book, The Complete History of the Japanese Car, 1907 to the Present.
- 15:1715:17, 7 November 2020 diff hist +155 Toyota →Japan: Clarifying where the 47 sales outlets were, and adding a cite to Toyota's web site where that figure is displayed.
- 14:5814:58, 7 November 2020 diff hist +94 Toyota →Japan: Adding a citation to Toyota's web site, where we see that passenger car sales were the minority in the late 1940s and early 1950s.
- 14:4414:44, 7 November 2020 diff hist +106 Toyota →Japan: Added a sentence to state that there was no need for consumer-oriented branding or fancy product names in the immediate postwar period.
- 01:3101:31, 7 November 2020 diff hist +842 Toyota →Japan: I have added historical context for the late 1940s and early 1950s, using the Toyota web site. (It is written in Japanese.) I have also introduced the name of the sales corporation, which is shown on that site.
6 November 2020
- 21:0421:04, 6 November 2020 diff hist −17 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:5518:55, 6 November 2020 diff hist −12 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:5418:54, 6 November 2020 diff hist 0 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:5018:50, 6 November 2020 diff hist +1 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:4718:47, 6 November 2020 diff hist −8 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:4518:45, 6 November 2020 diff hist −4 m Toyota →Japan
- 18:4418:44, 6 November 2020 diff hist +15 Toyota →Japan: I have edited this to put the Crown and Century into chronological order. In the 1950s, Crown was considered a "luxury" car only in Japan, where private ownership of cars was still unusual.
- 18:3718:37, 6 November 2020 diff hist +132 Toyota →Japan: I have rewritten some of the first five paragraphs to reduce unnecessary words, such as "locations", when what is meant is "dealership" in the sense of a place. The Japanese word "店" (mise, ten) should be translated in the plural, "stores", to emphasize multiple dealerships that are limited to certain models of Toyota, just as General Motors limits certain dealerships to certain GM brands.
6 December 2018
- 16:1616:16, 6 December 2018 diff hist +1,019 Talk:Automotive paint →"History" section needs more history.: new section
24 November 2018
- 14:3714:37, 24 November 2018 diff hist +213 Talk:Kamikaze →There is confusion in this article about what "Kamikaze" means. There is a narrow Japanese interpretation and a broad, perhaps overly broad, Western interpretation.
- 14:3214:32, 24 November 2018 diff hist +2,544 Talk:Kamikaze →There is confusion in this article about what "Kamikaze" means. There is a narrow Japanese interpretation and a broad, perhaps overly broad, Western interpretation.: new section
- 12:5712:57, 24 November 2018 diff hist +332 Talk:Nakajima J5N →Needs revision of footnotes 1 and 3, please. The prolific aviation writer's name is Mr. Shigeru Nohara, with Nohara being the family name.: new section
14 July 2018
- 19:3719:37, 14 July 2018 diff hist +4 m 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Adding "Its" to indicate that 261 Kaigun Kōkūtai was part of 61st Air Flotilla.
13 June 2018
- 23:5523:55, 13 June 2018 diff hist −17 m 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Changing "defense of the Marianas" to "battle".
- 23:5223:52, 13 June 2018 diff hist +5 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea
- 23:5223:52, 13 June 2018 diff hist +399 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Adding one sentence about 261 Kaigun Kōkūtai.
12 June 2018
- 20:1820:18, 12 June 2018 diff hist 0 m 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Relocating link within sentence.
- 20:1720:17, 12 June 2018 diff hist +26 m 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Linking to Wikipedia article on "Operation Hailstone" re: Truk air raids of February 1944.
- 18:5218:52, 12 June 2018 diff hist −679 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Philippine Sea: Deleting all references to Japanese aircraft carriers because First Air Fleet no longer had aircraft carriers. Starting essay on First Air Fleet in the Battle of the Philippine Sea.
10 June 2018
- 21:3621:36, 10 June 2018 diff hist 0 1st Air Fleet →Commanders: Changing starting date for Miwa from 1 June 1943 to 1 July 1943, matching the date the second generation of this fleet was formed.
- 21:3421:34, 10 June 2018 diff hist 0 1st Air Fleet →Commanders: Changing starting date for Kakuta from 1 June 1943 to 1 July 1943, matching the date the second generation of this fleet was formed.
2 June 2018
- 13:0213:02, 2 June 2018 diff hist −990 1st Air Fleet →Battle of Santa Cruz Islands: Deleting entire paragraph. The Battle of the Santa Cruz Islands occurred in October 1942, when the First Air Fleet did not exist.
- 13:0013:00, 2 June 2018 diff hist −928 1st Air Fleet →Battle of the Eastern Solomons: Deleting entire paragraph. The Battle of the Eastern Solomons occurred in August 1942, when First Air Fleet did not exist.
25 May 2018
- 14:0514:05, 25 May 2018 diff hist +4 m 1st Air Fleet →As a Carrier-Based Fleet: Italicizing "Rengō Kantai" to parallel italics earlier in the sentence.
- 13:5813:58, 25 May 2018 diff hist +1 m 1st Air Fleet →As a Carrier-Based Fleet: Liking the name "Gordon Prange" to Wikipedia article about him.
- 13:5213:52, 25 May 2018 diff hist −63 1st Air Fleet →As a Carrier-Based Fleet: Changing "handful of" to "approximately two dozen" to more precisely indicate the number of aircraft on light aircraft carriers; deleting incorrect statement that there were 1,500 aircraft in this carrier-based fleet. Had that been so, then a great many more aircraft would have attacked Pearl Harbor than actually did.
- 13:4613:46, 25 May 2018 diff hist +170 1st Air Fleet →As a Carrier-Based Fleet: Adding Gordon Prange's comment about the unprecedented nature of this fleet. Deleting statement that it initially consisted of seven aircraft carriers and 474 aircraft, which was incorrect. First Air Fleet started with five aircraft carriers. Placing paragraphs in chronological order.
- 13:3013:30, 25 May 2018 diff hist +31 1st Air Fleet →Organization: Adding sub-heading "As a Carrier-Based Fleet" to "ORGANIZATION".
- 13:2813:28, 25 May 2018 diff hist −27 1st Air Fleet →As Carrier Task Force: Moving sub-heading "As a Carrier Task Force" to a place immediately below heading "ORGANIZATION". This to help distinguish the aircraft carrier fleet from the later land-based air fleet.
- 13:2413:24, 25 May 2018 diff hist −9 m 1st Air Fleet →Organization: Improving footnote 14 and incorporating old footnote 15, a citation to Japanese Wikipedia, into it as a "see also".
- 13:1813:18, 25 May 2018 diff hist 0 m 1st Air Fleet →Battle of Midway: Changing "sunk" to "sank" to improve the grammar.
20 May 2018
- 17:4717:47, 20 May 2018 diff hist +19 1st Air Fleet →Organization: adding "(first generation)" to explain the end of 2nd Carrier Division on 14 July 1942. It was replaced by a new 2nd Carrier Division, second generation.
- 17:3517:35, 20 May 2018 diff hist +9 1st Air Fleet →Organization: Changing 23rd Destroyer Squadron to the Japanese name, "kuchikutai", adding direct translation of that word, and avoiding the distinction between a destroyer division and a destroyer squadron.
- 14:2914:29, 20 May 2018 diff hist +4 Talk:1st Air Fleet →Bibliography Problems
- 14:2714:27, 20 May 2018 diff hist +784 Talk:1st Air Fleet →Bibliography Problems: new section
- 14:1414:14, 20 May 2018 diff hist +1 m 1st Air Fleet →Bibliography: Adding a comma between last and first name.
- 14:1214:12, 20 May 2018 diff hist +7 m 1st Air Fleet →Bibliography: Moving year of publication to the preferred position for the Thorpe book.
- 13:5913:59, 20 May 2018 diff hist +40 m 1st Air Fleet →As a Land-Based Air Fleet: Making footnote 21 consistent with footnote 13.
- 13:5613:56, 20 May 2018 diff hist +43 m 1st Air Fleet →Organization: Editing two footnotes.
- 13:4813:48, 20 May 2018 diff hist +8 m 1st Air Fleet →Bibliography: Italicizing titles.
