User contributions for Jaaches
A user with 100 edits. Account created on 26 December 2007.
19 July 2019
- 12:4912:49, 19 July 2019 diff hist −5 m Oreo →Nutrition: deleted the word "only" because the word adds a judgment about the amount of protein. Maybe, for a cookie, the stated amount of protein is a lot. "Just the facts, Ma'am."
4 September 2018
- 14:5814:58, 4 September 2018 diff hist −4 m Fall of Constantinople Changed from passive voice "had begun" to active voice "began."
15 March 2017
- 14:3014:30, 15 March 2017 diff hist +13 m Beauty and the Beast →Plot: reworded half a sentence
18 February 2016
- 13:2913:29, 18 February 2016 diff hist +2 m Maria Monk Change word "tale" to "claims." Previous version read as though Monk's claims were a deliberate or falsehood, which seems to be the intention of some earlier editor or editors. Keep personal bias out of the article.
- 13:2113:21, 18 February 2016 diff hist +20 m Maria Monk Added qualifier to statement of conjecture. The article's editors should stick to known facts of the subject and her claims. This is not a place to push someone's personal agenda of suggestion, opines, possibilities, and bald-faced claims to discredit.
- 03:1903:19, 18 February 2016 diff hist +16 m Maria Monk →Atmosphere of anti-Catholic sensationalism: Changed unsubstantiated opinions. Previous editor took extreme liberties with personal opinions and declared them as fact. One wonders if this is to discredit Monk and her claims, which may be 100% true.
- 03:1103:11, 18 February 2016 diff hist +5 m Maria Monk Clarified that the claims of Monk have been described as a hoax by SOME scholars, not ALL scholars as a previous editor seems to wish readers to believe. Let's stick with facts.
- 03:0603:06, 18 February 2016 diff hist +16 m Maria Monk Toned down misleading and unsubstantiated claim by previous editor to an alleged claim of brain injury.
- 03:0303:03, 18 February 2016 diff hist +140 m Maria Monk Made neutral the biased opinion of previous editor who attempts to cast Monk in bad light instead of sticking to historical facts.
- 02:5402:54, 18 February 2016 diff hist −61 m Maria Monk Removed sentence alleging an editor's opinion that did not state a known fact about Monk's state of mind. As a source of information, the article should stick to what is known about Monk, not reflect one's personal opinion of her claims 175 years later.
17 February 2016
- 23:0423:04, 17 February 2016 diff hist +16 m Maria Monk The tone and wording of the original sentence was a statement of it's writer concluding absolutely that Monk's story was untrue. The sentence was premature and rewritten to better lead into the ALLEGED "errors" enumerated in the paragraph.
16 February 2016
- 09:4109:41, 16 February 2016 diff hist −24 m Fog →Sound propagation and acoustic effects: No facts changed. Just reworded for ease of understanding.
- 09:3809:38, 16 February 2016 diff hist −10 m Fog →Shadows: Edited wordy sentence. No facts were changed. Grammatical corrections for ease of reading.
- 09:3209:32, 16 February 2016 diff hist +23 m Fog →Visibility effects: Corrected misconception of absolute fact. Extreme fog does not make ALL landing impossible. Neither do airports CLOSE due to fog. They may. However, they WILL for a fact postpone take-offs and landings.
- 09:2909:29, 16 February 2016 diff hist +1 m Fog →Formation: Added comma to non-essential clause.
- 09:2709:27, 16 February 2016 diff hist +1 m Fog →Formation: Corrected misssspelling. Air mass is two words.
- 09:2109:21, 16 February 2016 diff hist −1 m Fog Removed, unnecessary, comma, the, article, is, littered, with, them.
- 09:1509:15, 16 February 2016 diff hist +334 Talk:Fog →Choppy Writing: new section
8 February 2016
- 03:5603:56, 8 February 2016 diff hist +21 m Appropriation (art) →Artists using appropriation: added Graig Kreindler to list.
24 September 2015
- 04:1104:11, 24 September 2015 diff hist +5 m Long Island Corrected "across which are" to "across from which lie" for grammar and clarity.
23 April 2015
- 04:2104:21, 23 April 2015 diff hist 0 m Niccolò Paganini →Late career and health decline: the gerund "wishing" takes the posessive pronoun "his." ~~~~
31 March 2015
- 13:3913:39, 31 March 2015 diff hist +4 m Fear →Fear of death: Changed the words "of" to "that" and "to" to "will" in a confusing dependent clause.
- 13:1013:10, 31 March 2015 diff hist 0 m Fear Reversed two dependent clauses in the same sentence for clarity. Placed the affirmative clause first and the exception to the statement second.
28 March 2015
- 12:3012:30, 28 March 2015 diff hist −5 m Meditation →Christianity: Grammatical correction: deleted two, unnecessary, commas. The sentence is more clear.
- 12:2112:21, 28 March 2015 diff hist +1 m Meditation →Religious and spiritual meditation: comma added to make sentence more clear, but the sentence was so wordy that I can't tell what the writer was trying to say. The comma only makes it SLIGHTLY more understandable.
- 11:3911:39, 28 March 2015 diff hist +664 Talk:Voice frequency →Exceedingly Technical - Please Simplify: new section
27 March 2015
- 15:3515:35, 27 March 2015 diff hist +2 m Book of Jeremiah →Structure: corrected broken link from my previous edit.
- 15:3415:34, 27 March 2015 diff hist +6 m Book of Jeremiah →Structure: replaced antagonistic comparison between Judaism and Christianity (the term "versus"). Used more correct wording.
11 February 2015
- 15:5115:51, 11 February 2015 diff hist +7 m Self-hypnosis →Coué: Added first name Émile to ambiguous last name only. The average layperson will not know that the headlines Baird, Salter, and Coue are proper nouns.
- 15:4815:48, 11 February 2015 diff hist +7 m Self-hypnosis →Salter: Added first name to ambiguous headline "Salter." What is Salter? Someone who salts? A thing that salts? No, it is Andrew Salter, of course.
- 15:4515:45, 11 February 2015 diff hist +6 m Self-hypnosis →Braid: Strengthened headline by adding first name "James" to last name "Braid."
- 01:0601:06, 11 February 2015 diff hist +399 User talk:I dream of horses →A cupcake for you!: new WikiLove message Tag: wikilove
- 00:2900:29, 11 February 2015 diff hist +1 m Lucid dream →Awareness and reasoning
- 00:2800:28, 11 February 2015 diff hist −5 m Lucid dream →Awareness and reasoning: removed the word "has" before the word "found" to make the sentence active instead of passive. Using the passive voice weakens the sentence.
- 00:2400:24, 11 February 2015 diff hist −1 m Lucid dream →Perception of time: changed "which" to "that." The specific study of Sephen LaBerge is a restrictive element and requires the word "that," not "which." The second "that" can be removed, but it does not dictate the using "which."
8 February 2015
- 22:4322:43, 8 February 2015 diff hist +20 m Battle of Yellow Tavern →Background: Reordered Sheridan's three objectives to reflect their importance base on original author's list. I moved the no. 1 and most important objective to the head of the list.
6 February 2015
- 13:5213:52, 6 February 2015 diff hist +813 Talk:Battalion →US Section
20 January 2015
- 20:3120:31, 20 January 2015 diff hist +3 m Oatmeal →Scotland: added word "is."
10 January 2015
- 00:3600:36, 10 January 2015 diff hist +58 m The Magic Circle (Waterhouse paintings) →Description: Identified a significant detail not mentioned in the article. A live snake ouroboros loops around the woman's neck.
- 00:0800:08, 10 January 2015 diff hist −1 m The Magic Circle (Waterhouse paintings) →Description: minor edit...Re-ordered word "female" for clarity. Moved comma.
6 January 2015
- 21:2721:27, 6 January 2015 diff hist +789 m Talk:Polytheism Question about rewriting a paragraph. Also, when referring to God specifically, the word God is capitalized. When referring to a god, as in "any old god" or one chief god, the word is not capitalized. This article is riddled with this error.
1 October 2014
- 22:4622:46, 1 October 2014 diff hist −2 m Kosovo Deleted unnecessary comma. Replaced prououn "which" with "that." The restrictive clause "declared independence...." takes the pronoun "that."
28 September 2014
- 03:1503:15, 28 September 2014 diff hist +6 m Diarrhea changed the word "less" to "younger" so the sentences read n children younger than five..."
26 September 2014
- 04:5504:55, 26 September 2014 diff hist −5 m Owl →Flight and feathers: removed adjective "dark" from dark night. Not all nights are dark, though every night is night.
- 04:5204:52, 26 September 2014 diff hist +2 m Owl →Flight and feathers: replaced "any sign of noise" to "the slightest sound."
17 August 2014
- 05:5705:57, 17 August 2014 diff hist 0 Thirteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution →Slavery in the United States
- 05:5605:56, 17 August 2014 diff hist −3 m Thirteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution →Slavery in the United States: corrected run-on sentence.
- 05:5405:54, 17 August 2014 diff hist −1 m Thirteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution →Slavery in the United States: attempted to grammatically correct (and simplify) a sentence that contained three dependent clauses.
- 05:4705:47, 17 August 2014 diff hist +1 m Thirteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution →Slavery in the United States: added comma
- 05:4605:46, 17 August 2014 diff hist +2 m Thirteenth Amendment to the United States Constitution →Slavery in the United States: Changed "who" to "which." Being a country, Great Britian takes "which," not "who."
