User contributions for Heduanna
A user with 46 edits. Account created on 31 December 2007.
23 September 2022
- 03:2103:21, 23 September 2022 diff hist +2 m Salvo D'Acquisto →Life: Changed "the death was an accident" to "the deaths were an accident" (since previous paragraph established that two people had died).
30 September 2020
- 20:4120:41, 30 September 2020 diff hist −2 The Hamptons →Description: Changed "stronger" to "strong" (since "stronger" would require a "than" which is missing).
30 July 2020
- 04:5304:53, 30 July 2020 diff hist 0 m Hélder Câmara De-capitalised "Human Rights" to "human rights".
12 July 2020
- 01:1401:14, 12 July 2020 diff hist +6 m Maximilian Kolbe →Missionary work in Asia: Changed tense "being" to "having been" for obvious reasons.
- 01:1301:13, 12 July 2020 diff hist −5 m Maximilian Kolbe →Missionary work in Asia: Clarified which building was destroyed in Nagasaki building, slightly formalised the mention of the monastery in India ("which has since closed" is still just as frustratingly vague, though).
20 June 2020
- 17:2317:23, 20 June 2020 diff hist +788 Talk:Deuterocanonical books →How many Deuterocanonical Books are there?: new section
- 17:1617:16, 20 June 2020 diff hist +11 Deuterocanonical books Edited for readability.
- 17:0917:09, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 m Deuterocanonical books Grammar: "some scholars holds" to "some scholars hold" - I think official term is subject-verb agreement?
8 June 2020
- 19:5919:59, 8 June 2020 diff hist +19 Sundance, Calgary Adjusted description (more descriptive, clarified that Stoney Trail is South of Sundance, rather than the other way 'round). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 May 2020
- 17:4217:42, 24 May 2020 diff hist −37 Naomi Osaka →Early life and background: Adjusted awkward sentence about the koseki. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 May 2020
- 19:1919:19, 7 May 2020 diff hist −24 The Oven of Akhnai →Story: Removed "after this incident" from beginning of paragraph (repetitive, was used two paragraphs earlier). Moved detail about Ima Shalom being Gamaliel's sister to parenthesis to clarify that one woman is being discussed, not two. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 January 2020
- 23:2623:26, 22 January 2020 diff hist +10 Wuhan →Early Imperial China: Replaced "the building" with "the Yellow Crane Tower" for clarity, which is a minor edit unless I'm wrong about which building is being referred to.
1 June 2019
- 17:5717:57, 1 June 2019 diff hist +1 Killing of Colten Boushie Added space between words Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 February 2019
- 14:4714:47, 11 February 2019 diff hist +17 X-Men: Days of Future Past →Plot: Several grammatical changes (minor, I think), and I put the last line of the second paragraph (detailing why Wolverine volunteered) into parenthesis - it felt like it was becoming a run-on sentence, and many readers will already be familiar with this detail.
- 14:3814:38, 11 February 2019 diff hist +1 m X-Men: Days of Future Past →Plot: Changed "Feared by Trask's death" to "Alarmed by Trask's death" (the former just doesn't quite work in English)
16 February 2018
- 03:4103:41, 16 February 2018 diff hist +295 Talk:Winter guard Added "Performance Elements" section
- 03:3503:35, 16 February 2018 diff hist −8 m Winter guard →Rifles: replace "rifle firearms" with "rifles" (much more common term)
- 03:3403:34, 16 February 2018 diff hist +5 m Winter guard →Flags: "more as" replaced with "generally" (tone)
- 03:3003:30, 16 February 2018 diff hist +8 m Winter guard →Team roles: replaced 'about' with 'approximately' (tone)
- 03:2603:26, 16 February 2018 diff hist −21 Winter guard "where to date is still by far the most predominant scene for the sport" to "which remains the predominant scene for the sport" - the previous seemed redundant & over-enthusiastic for an encyclopedia entry.
29 October 2017
- 19:0719:07, 29 October 2017 diff hist +871 Talk:Lake Peigneur →UTM vs Transverse Mercator: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 October 2017
- 15:0415:04, 6 October 2017 diff hist −7 Ray Dalio →Personal life: Changed "eldest son" to just "son" for Paul Dalio. (I'm not sure where Paul is in the birth order, but Ray Dalio's oldest son is Devon.) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 September 2017
- 02:2702:27, 4 September 2017 diff hist +8 Pinocchio →Literary analysis: Changed "meta" (fragment/slang) to "metaphysical" (most likely intended long form). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:2502:25, 4 September 2017 diff hist −2 Pinocchio →Literary analysis: Minor grammatical fixes. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 September 2017
- 20:1520:15, 2 September 2017 diff hist 0 Proud Boys Removed hyphen from "full approval" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4815:48, 2 September 2017 diff hist −3 Lucille Teasdale-Corti →Uganda: replaced "heroic dedication... *would go* on for years" with "*went* on for years" ("would go on" is more narrative & poetic, but jumped out at me as inappropriate for an encyclopedia).
20 July 2017
- 04:2204:22, 20 July 2017 diff hist +11 Murray Head →Personal life: Fixed commas missed earlier (still not liking that comma splice in front of "for example", but not sure how best to restructure the sentence). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1904:19, 20 July 2017 diff hist −1 m Murray Head →Personal life: Grammar (the ", who" implied there would be another clause after the mention of specific songs). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 May 2017
- 05:1805:18, 23 May 2017 diff hist 0 Eric Weinstein →Early life and education: Merged the three items of experience into one sentence.
- 05:1605:16, 23 May 2017 diff hist +3 m Eric Weinstein →Early life and education: replaced comma with 'and' between items in a two-item list (comma alone had me looking for third item), and set this off into a separate sentence to avoid multiple "and's"
14 May 2017
- 15:3415:34, 14 May 2017 diff hist −1 Shabbat elevator →Energy waste from continuous operation: Minor grammar ("users who" preferred over "users that"). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 February 2009
26 January 2009
- 01:2201:22, 26 January 2009 diff hist 0 m Foothills Medical Centre Changed South*eastern* Sask to South*western* Sask (Southeastern Sask gets served by... Manitoba?)
17 October 2008
- 03:1203:12, 17 October 2008 diff hist −236 User:Heduanna Trying to delete user page (if anybody can change it, what's the point?)
- 03:1103:11, 17 October 2008 diff hist +236 N User:Heduanna Created my user page
- 03:0603:06, 17 October 2008 diff hist −1 m The Pointer Sisters →The quartet becomes a trio: punctuation
- 03:0303:03, 17 October 2008 diff hist +1 m The Pointer Sisters →The quartet becomes a trio: punctuation
- 03:0303:03, 17 October 2008 diff hist +2 m The Pointer Sisters →The quartet becomes a trio: Grammar/readability
- 03:0103:01, 17 October 2008 diff hist +1 m The Pointer Sisters →Early days: Readability changes to last sentence in first paragraph
- 02:5802:58, 17 October 2008 diff hist −108 The Pointer Sisters →Early days: Removed last sentence from "Sesame Street" paragraph (Influences are drawn heavilly from this group towards Priscilla Queen of the Desert. - Keith Nuttal, Morwell) - unclear meaning.
- 02:5702:57, 17 October 2008 diff hist −17 The Pointer Sisters →Early days: Broke first sentence into two sentences for better flow. Changed last sentence of first paragraph to reflect that June is female.
5 August 2008
- 05:0705:07, 5 August 2008 diff hist +218 Talk:Mariah Carey →Grammar for Grammys!: new section
14 May 2008
- 22:3022:30, 14 May 2008 diff hist 0 Talk:Calgary →Calgary's Communities
- 22:2822:28, 14 May 2008 diff hist +797 Talk:Calgary \* Calgary's Communities *\ Added new question about this section.
31 December 2007
- 23:2223:22, 31 December 2007 diff hist −299 Orang Rimba people Revised for spelling, grammar & style (fairly extensively, but trying not to alter any facts or overall tone).
