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A user with 861 edits. Account created on 11 May 2007.
15 June 2024
- 00:4900:49, 15 June 2024 diff hist −4 m Fallout (American TV series) →Guest: Replaced slightly awkward phrase with a more conventional one.
- 00:4400:44, 15 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Fallout (American TV series) →Premise: To clearly indicate that the squire is not a bounty hunter and avoid the reader having to read the sentence again. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3800:38, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0 Fallout (American TV series) →Premise: Correction of tense. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3400:34, 15 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Fallout (American TV series) →Guest: Copy edit.
13 June 2024
- 22:1622:16, 13 June 2024 diff hist −1 m The Sopranos season 1 →Episodes: "exposes" was probably meant here and not "espouses".
5 June 2024
- 21:2721:27, 5 June 2024 diff hist +3 m Time Variance Authority Copy edit - adjusted a sentence in the lede. current Tag: Visual edit
3 June 2024
- 00:1700:17, 3 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Musidora →Other works: “Relegate” is not quite the right word: it has elements of a kind of exile, a sending away “Confine” or “restrict” would be better – a sense of keeping in the same place. current Tag: Visual edit
29 May 2024
- 12:1312:13, 29 May 2024 diff hist −3 m The Gentlemen (2024 TV series) Groundskeeper, an American term. In a British setting, the appropriate term for a man such as Geoffrey, portrayed patrolling the estate with a shotgun, is a gamekeeper. He calls himself a gamekeeper in episode 8.
21 May 2024
- 14:1914:19, 21 May 2024 diff hist +6 m Criticism of Muhammad →Psychological and medical condition: Resolved the singular and plural clash of “those who suffered” and “was … a wretch”. Also the poor English that “perception” was a “wretch”. Tag: Visual edit
- 12:5812:58, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Muhammad →Invasion of Khaybar: The correct English phrase is "that very night" and not "the very night", a phrase that makes no sense. Tag: Visual edit
20 May 2024
- 18:1518:15, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Hagarism →Methodology: You 'give' or 'provide' an account, rather than 'tell' an account. Tag: Visual edit
19 May 2024
- 04:2204:22, 19 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Papal infallibility →Ordinatio sacerdotalis: Copy edit apostrophe. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5700:57, 19 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Shola Mos-Shogbamimu →Death threats: Incorrect use of reflexive pronoun. Tag: Visual edit
12 May 2024
- 17:1217:12, 12 May 2024 diff hist +20 m MAC address →Address details: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit
5 May 2024
- 22:4722:47, 5 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Temporal paradox →Logical impossibility: Remove unnecessary "they". Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3022:30, 5 May 2024 diff hist +8 m Temporal paradox →Grandfather paradox: Copy edit - replace pronoun with a noun. Tag: Visual edit
30 April 2024
- 01:2501:25, 30 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Paulie Gualtieri →Season 4: Copy edit. "Restores" is a more suitable verb than "rejuvenates". Tag: Visual edit
21 April 2024
- 22:0422:04, 21 April 2024 diff hist −1 m 3 Body Problem (TV series) →Episodes: Copy edit. 'Get' is a poor verb to use here.
17 April 2024
- 18:4918:49, 17 April 2024 diff hist −6 m Prion →History: Copy edit. 'Go' is unnecessary in this sentence. Colloquial rather than encyclopaedic English. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2904:29, 17 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Margaret Howe Lovatt →Personal life: Copy edit. Change to correct tense.
15 April 2024
- 23:4123:41, 15 April 2024 diff hist +21 m 1936 Tulkarm shooting →Incident: Copy edit. current Tag: Visual edit
10 April 2024
- 22:0222:02, 10 April 2024 diff hist +69 Arrival (film) →Plot: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit
1 April 2024
- 12:2512:25, 1 April 2024 diff hist −1 m The Gentlemen (2024 TV series) →Episodes: This is a plural, not a possessive.
27 March 2024
- 17:5817:58, 27 March 2024 diff hist +39 m Bodies (2023 TV series) Moved the link for Metropolitan Police in the Episodes section up to a more suitable position.
- 17:4617:46, 27 March 2024 diff hist +277 m Bodies (2023 TV series) →Episodes: Copy edit to clarify some details. S01E01.
14 March 2024
- 13:0813:08, 14 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Netley Hospital →Decline: Copy edit. current Tag: Visual edit
3 March 2024
- 02:1902:19, 3 March 2024 diff hist −11 m Ludwig Rabus →Works: Copy edit. current Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1602:16, 3 March 2024 diff hist +25 Ludwig Rabus Copy editing to improve some phrasing and correct a typo. Tag: Visual edit
1 March 2024
- 18:5518:55, 1 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Last universal common ancestor →Root of the tree of life: Insert missing comma. Tag: Visual edit
29 February 2024
- 00:2300:23, 29 February 2024 diff hist −4 m Joint European Torus →Background: This word is unnecessary and contributes nothing to the sense of the sentence. Tag: Visual edit
28 February 2024
- 03:0103:01, 28 February 2024 diff hist +4 m Big Sky (American TV series) →Season 1 (2020–21): "Accomplices" is a better word to describe two individuals and avoids confusion over conflicting meanings of "cohorts".
- 01:4601:46, 28 February 2024 diff hist −2 m Joe Pickett (TV series) →Recurring: Here, where there are two sons, they are described as "elder" and "younger". You only use "eldest" and "youngest" when there are three or more sons. Very common error. Tag: Visual edit
13 February 2024
- 06:0806:08, 13 February 2024 diff hist +7 Coco Chanel →World War II: Copy edit Tag: Visual edit
26 January 2024
- 18:5618:56, 26 January 2024 diff hist 0 m National Service (Armed Forces) Act 1939 A more suitable word than "impacts". Tag: Visual edit
18 January 2024
- 01:2201:22, 18 January 2024 diff hist +59 m The 39 Steps (1935 film) →Plot: Add details of the closing frames. Tag: Visual edit
10 January 2024
- 02:1602:16, 10 January 2024 diff hist 0 m British Post Office scandal →Reactions: Move link for SRA to the first occurrence of the initials instead of the second. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4701:47, 10 January 2024 diff hist −1 m British Post Office scandal →Permission to appeal Judgment No 4 – May 2019: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit
5 January 2024
- 16:1716:17, 5 January 2024 diff hist −2 m Belinus →Comments on historicity
3 January 2024
- 18:0418:04, 3 January 2024 diff hist −8 m German cruiser Admiral Graf Spee →Scuttling: "Multiple" is unnecessary. The plural "explosions" is sufficient. Tag: Visual edit
20 December 2023
- 22:2322:23, 20 December 2023 diff hist +19 m Chicken Run: Dawn of the Nugget →Plot: Wow, a play area for chickens and for security systems …?! Tag: Visual edit
6 December 2023
- 15:5415:54, 6 December 2023 diff hist +39 m The Witcher (TV series) →Season 3 (2023): Copy editing to clarify some phrasing.
25 November 2023
- 17:1917:19, 25 November 2023 diff hist −1 m Eva Victor →Early life and education: Copy edit. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1217:12, 25 November 2023 diff hist +9 m Billions (TV series) →Recurring: Copy edit
24 November 2023
- 12:2112:21, 24 November 2023 diff hist −8 m Basque witch trials “other similar”. Either one word or the other is sufficient. As “similar” is used in previous sentence, let’s opt for “other” here.
22 November 2023
- 00:3200:32, 22 November 2023 diff hist +1 Paraguayan War →Afro-Brazilians: Removal of incorrect apostrophe. Tag: Visual edit
19 November 2023
- 05:4505:45, 19 November 2023 diff hist +24 m Mea culpa Copy edit to point out that the "beating" is only symbolic. current Tag: Visual edit
- 00:2900:29, 19 November 2023 diff hist +6 m Unauthorized Living →Cast: Clarification of ambiguous sentence.
- 00:1700:17, 19 November 2023 diff hist +99 m File:Meeting at Hendaye (en.wiki).jpg →{{int:filedesc}}: Clarifying details added.
15 November 2023
- 22:2322:23, 15 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Kiowa language →Revitalization efforts: Removal of incorrect apostrophe. Should be "2010s", the plural of several years in that decade, not "2010's", a possessive. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0817:08, 15 November 2023 diff hist −11 m Francoist Spain Let's use a simpler, more direct verb.