User contributions for Dvalentine
A user with 130 edits. Account created on 18 September 2016.
4 November 2016
- 19:4719:47, 4 November 2016 diff hist +10 m Women in government →Women in national parliaments: Typo Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3816:38, 4 November 2016 diff hist +62 Women in government →Mirror Representation: Moved portions of mirror representation into a new sub-section titled Effects of mirror representation on public policy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1316:13, 4 November 2016 diff hist +378 Women in government →Mirror representation: Thank you snooganssnoogans for the research. I added some clarifications, reworded the initial sentence, and fixed a misspelling of "councilor". Tag: Visual edit
3 November 2016
- 22:5922:59, 3 November 2016 diff hist +24 Women in government Corrected my own erroneous capitalization and further clarified the section title Tag: Visual edit
- 21:3321:33, 3 November 2016 diff hist −126 Women in government →Status of Women's Representation: Removed irrelevant picture Tag: Visual edit
- 21:3221:32, 3 November 2016 diff hist +177 Women in government Changed "National Representation" Section to "Status of Women's Representation" as it reflects its contents better, and moved it to the front of the article. Also modified a paragraph which I moved into that status section. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0021:00, 3 November 2016 diff hist −652 Women in government →Quotas: A large part of this section of the article was made of paragraphs that had nothing to do with quotas or their usage, and I had to move them to other parts of the article. Also miscellaneous grammar errors. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0920:09, 3 November 2016 diff hist +1 m Women in government →Policies to increase women's participation: Inserted period. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0820:08, 3 November 2016 diff hist +7 Women in government No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5219:52, 3 November 2016 diff hist −28 Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Edited balancing work and family paragraph to make sentences less wordy and more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4219:42, 3 November 2016 diff hist −176 Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Removed a sentence because the reasons why the professions of law, business, and education are common professions for politicians are outside the topic of this article. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3919:39, 3 November 2016 diff hist −62 Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Rearranged the sentence order in Political Socialization and cut down on the wordiness of the first sentence in Lack of Preparation For Political Activity Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4803:48, 3 November 2016 diff hist +69 Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Modified political socialization portion of article. We may want some additional citations for the first two sentences detailing the definition of Political Socialization. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5802:58, 3 November 2016 diff hist +64 User talk:Kaldari →You're a really cool person and you should be proud.: new section
- 02:4702:47, 3 November 2016 diff hist −1 Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Changed "Sex Stereotyping" portion order of sentences and changed "the belief is that" to "many insist" in one sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:0100:01, 3 November 2016 diff hist −215 Talk:Women in government →I have made and will continue to make some somewhat significant modifications to this article
2 November 2016
- 21:5521:55, 2 November 2016 diff hist +1 m Women in government →Social and cultural barriers to mirror representation: Missing period. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5321:53, 2 November 2016 diff hist +459 Talk:Women in government →I have made and will continue to make some somewhat significant modifications to this article: new section
- 21:3021:30, 2 November 2016 diff hist −791 Women in government →Mirror Representation: An out of place example of a woman being elected in Morocco is not a good addition to this section of the article on Mirror representation. See Case Studies. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1920:19, 2 November 2016 diff hist +91 Talk:Women in government →Opposition Section
- 20:1820:18, 2 November 2016 diff hist +41 Talk:Women in government →Opposition Section
- 19:5219:52, 2 November 2016 diff hist +148 Talk:Female entrepreneurs →Shouldn't the title be "Female entrepreneurship" or at least "female entrepreneurs"?: new section
- 17:5917:59, 2 November 2016 diff hist +70 Women in government →Mirror representation: Fixed a statement that was incorrect due to a mistake in the wording. Also fixed some incorrect capitalization. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:4217:42, 2 November 2016 diff hist +4 Wikipedia:Assume good faith So many SVO's... Must... Instert... Compound... Sentence...
- 16:2416:24, 2 November 2016 diff hist +22 Wikipedia:WikiProject Feminism/Members →Current WikiProject Feminism members
- 15:4315:43, 2 November 2016 diff hist +1 m Women in government →Women's suffrage movement: It appears someone made a typo, misspelling "and" "ad". Tag: Visual edit
- 15:3915:39, 2 November 2016 diff hist +194 Women in government →Challenges faced by women: Rewrote entire third paragraph. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2715:27, 2 November 2016 diff hist −3 Women in government →Challenges faced by women: Third paragraph first sentence changed to "Additionally, women running for public office typically gain additional, unnecessary scrutiny of their private lives" as opposed to the jumbled mess it was before. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:2315:23, 2 November 2016 diff hist +8 Women in government →Challenges faced by women: Changed "rarely do women hold executive decision-making authority in more powerful domains" to "far less often..." to keep it comparative and objective. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1715:17, 2 November 2016 diff hist +21 Women in government →Challenges faced by women: Added an "or under-represented" to a sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:1015:10, 2 November 2016 diff hist +16 Women in government →Quotas: One sentence was maddeningly hard to decipher, so I rewrote it. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0215:02, 2 November 2016 diff hist −20 Women in government →Legislation: Changed ",in 1989," to ",published by the United Nations in 1989," and removed an inessential clause that did not make sense. Tag: Visual edit
- 14:5514:55, 2 November 2016 diff hist −35 Women in government →Quotas: Changed "Quotas are mechanisms used to get women into power" into the more descriptive "Quotas are explicit requirements on the amount of women in political positions." Tag: Visual edit
- 05:4705:47, 2 November 2016 diff hist +2 Gender equality Changed "treated" to "discussed" in "To avoid complication, genders besides women and men will not be treated in this article." Tag: Visual edit
1 November 2016
- 21:5521:55, 1 November 2016 diff hist +46 User:Dvalentine No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5321:53, 1 November 2016 diff hist −300 User talk:Dvalentine No edit summary current
- 21:5321:53, 1 November 2016 diff hist +192 User talk:Dvalentine →October 2016
- 21:5221:52, 1 November 2016 diff hist +209 User talk:Dvalentine →October 2016
- 16:0916:09, 1 November 2016 diff hist −601 Women in government →Education: More edits. Cut down on some unnecessarily wordy sentences and grammatical errors. Some sentences were so grammatically incorrect they were completely meaningless, so I deleted them. If necessary, rewrite and put back. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4015:40, 1 November 2016 diff hist −371 Women in government →Education: Rewrote several sentences, fixed some grammatical errors, and removed a few sentences which were out of place in this section of the article. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2204:22, 1 November 2016 diff hist +141 Talk:Women and video games →Update to Women in Competitive Gaming Section
- 04:2104:21, 1 November 2016 diff hist +1 m Patriarchy Changed "of modern patriarchies" to "of the modern patriarchy" Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1904:19, 1 November 2016 diff hist 0 Patriarchy →History and Origins of Modern Patriarchies: Changed accidentally uppercase words Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1804:18, 1 November 2016 diff hist +35 Patriarchy Changed "history" to "history and origins of modern patriarchies Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1304:13, 1 November 2016 diff hist +285 Talk:Gender equality →What is the gender biases section supposed to be?: new section
- 04:0204:02, 1 November 2016 diff hist +237 Gender equality Added citation Tag: Visual edit
31 October 2016
- 17:0517:05, 31 October 2016 diff hist −42 Female entrepreneurs Changed a sentence from an awkwardly worded passive voice to an active voice. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:0217:02, 31 October 2016 diff hist +805 Women in government →Women's suffrage movement: Added sentence that details current status of women's suffrage throughout the world (with citations). Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4416:44, 31 October 2016 diff hist 0 Women in government "Low" implies women's participation in contemporary politics is in a slump right now or is down, which is not the case. Also, nothing is "current" on wikipedia. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3416:34, 31 October 2016 diff hist −373 Women in government The lack of preparation for political activity was unusually worded and had two unfinished sentences, so I rewrote it while attempting to keep the general structure of the paragraph. Also removed an out of place sentence. Tag: Visual edit
