User contributions for DAHall
A user with 80 edits. Account created on 16 January 2018.
11 August 2021
- 08:2208:22, 11 August 2021 diff hist −1,707 Ayers House (Adelaide) Undid revision 1038193999 by 203.122.217.97 (talk). Unreferenced text. Tag: Undo
28 June 2021
- 12:3312:33, 28 June 2021 diff hist +116 m User talk:Thryduulf Thanks
27 June 2021
- 13:3713:37, 27 June 2021 diff hist +487 User talk:Thryduulf →Use of: new section
- 06:1306:13, 27 June 2021 diff hist +3,400 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Steam locomotive components Further comment
25 June 2021
- 10:4710:47, 25 June 2021 diff hist +489 m Steam locomotive components →Further reading: Delete dead link, add Fowler
24 June 2021
- 11:0211:02, 24 June 2021 diff hist +9 m Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Steam locomotive components Corrected my format
- 11:0011:00, 24 June 2021 diff hist +1,674 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Steam locomotive components →Steam locomotive components: Response
23 December 2020
- 05:2905:29, 23 December 2020 diff hist +15 m Yalata, South Australia image and caption added
12 September 2020
- 02:4202:42, 12 September 2020 diff hist −213 m Budd Rail Diesel Car Unsourced. Also, no reference to dates (including "are still active"). Wikipedia's role as an encyclopedia imposes certain requirements -- it's best to refer to this article and others, and open an account. Tag: Manual revert
11 August 2020
- 22:1922:19, 11 August 2020 diff hist −135 Eyre Peninsula Railway Undid revision 972330662 by 2001:8003:AC13:5501:A8C0:B1D2:E51B:B18A (talk). Unsourced. Tag: Undo
- 22:1822:18, 11 August 2020 diff hist −74 m Eyre Peninsula Railway Undid revision 972330199 by 2001:8003:AC13:5501:A8C0:B1D2:E51B:B18A (talk). Unsourced. Tag: Undo
3 August 2020
- 08:4608:46, 3 August 2020 diff hist −82 m Ayers House (Adelaide) →Gallery: Removed duplicate photo.
8 July 2020
- 10:1610:16, 8 July 2020 diff hist −468 Act of parliament Deleted very specific reference in sentence 2 to one parliament. Deleted next sentence because (a) it is also a point of detail (b) what was meant by "it" was unclear (c) the reference didn't support the assertion re the US.
12 June 2020
- 03:2603:26, 12 June 2020 diff hist +268 m Talk:Reigate St Mary's School No edit summary
- 03:2303:23, 12 June 2020 diff hist +207 N Talk:Reigate St Mary's School ←Created page with ' This is the Talk page for the Wikipedia article on Reigate St Mary's School. Please use it for any discussion of the article. ~~~~'
- 01:2501:25, 12 June 2020 diff hist +222 m Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Reigate St Mary's School Response.
19 May 2020
- 08:3808:38, 19 May 2020 diff hist −1 m Gulf St Vincent Typo.
- 08:3508:35, 19 May 2020 diff hist −3 m Gulf St Vincent Changed category.
20 April 2020
- 12:3812:38, 20 April 2020 diff hist +3 m Temple Grandin Corrected title of website.
- 12:3412:34, 20 April 2020 diff hist −4 m Temple Grandin Reversed another instance of subtle but infantile vandalism by 2603:9000:7a1b:8e00:90c9:398d:97df:a428
- 12:1412:14, 20 April 2020 diff hist −5 m Temple Grandin Reversed another instance of vandalism by 2603:9000:7a1b:8e00:90c9:398d:97df:a428
- 11:5011:50, 20 April 2020 diff hist −3 m Temple Grandin Deleted "yay" — the second instance of vandalism perpetrated in consecutive edits by 2603:9000:7a1b:8e00:90c9:398d:97df:a428
30 March 2020
- 01:5201:52, 30 March 2020 diff hist +17 m Philip Nitschke →Nitrogen canisters: Update tag added.
29 March 2020
- 23:4523:45, 29 March 2020 diff hist +50 m Australian English Specified language of "Canberra", clarified re Burgess and cossies; typo.
2 March 2020
- 11:4111:41, 2 March 2020 diff hist −4 m Bettina Arndt Changed double quotation marks to single because they were encompassed by doubles.
1 March 2020
- 23:1023:10, 1 March 2020 diff hist −38 m Bettina Arndt The source for "rigid", which I have deleted ("Her work revealed her to be surprisingly socially conservative, with rigid ideas about relationships and family structures") is Mama Mia, which promotes (as it's entitled to do) a particular viewpoint. However, I believe Mama Mia is not a sufficiently neutral source to justify a direct quote in this context. Far more important is her social conservatism.
3 February 2020
- 03:3303:33, 3 February 2020 diff hist −103 m Tasmanian Government Railways K class Undid revision 938838905 by Terry Boardman (ta)lk. Reason: "Postings in early 2020 on FaceBook" don't constitute a reputable published source, only a rumour. A reference to a WHR source or similar could convey the information authoritatively. Tag: Undo
30 January 2020
- 22:4522:45, 30 January 2020 diff hist −1,087 m Track gauge →Terminology: Moved description of sg from conceptual to common international usage. Deleted text re "medium gauge" in Australia: in the cited paper it is used as a comparative term appropriate to the subject, but the term is not used.
22 December 2019
- 22:0022:00, 22 December 2019 diff hist +26 m Eyre Peninsula Railway Corrected spelling, added citation requirement.
20 December 2019
- 03:2403:24, 20 December 2019 diff hist −353 m User talk:DAHall Deleted opinionated comment.
- 03:2303:23, 20 December 2019 diff hist +1,237 User talk:Stepho-wrs →The re-formatted table in the "Long combination vehicle" article: new section
6 December 2019
- 12:1112:11, 6 December 2019 diff hist +455 m Talk:Long combination vehicle →Potential merge candidate: Commented.
- 12:0112:01, 6 December 2019 diff hist +1,415 m Long combination vehicle Reduced "US Federal bridge weight formula" table's domination of the article by making it collapsed.
- 09:0409:04, 6 December 2019 diff hist +34 m Road train Added "overly detailed" tag and clarified wording in lead sentence.
- 08:4908:49, 6 December 2019 diff hist +28 m Road train Clarified heading wording and followed Wikipedia recommended practice for sentence case.
- 06:5606:56, 6 December 2019 diff hist +14 m Road train →Interstate Road Transport registration
3 December 2019
- 07:5707:57, 3 December 2019 diff hist −262 m The Overland Wikipedia is an encyclopaedia that is quite different from a fanzine. It requires article text to be supported by a reputable published source. Regrettably the text I've had to delete isn't supported -- and it includes both an author's opinion and prediction, neither of which is accepted.
29 November 2019
- 08:0308:03, 29 November 2019 diff hist −138 m The Overland Undid revision 928430354 by 203.37.236.12 (talk). Sorry, but Wikipedia requires a reputable published source to be cited for such an addition. If/when obtained, "at this time" should be avoided – something like "as of late 2019" would not date. Tag: Undo
7 October 2019
- 03:2203:22, 7 October 2019 diff hist +14 m Pulteney Grammar School →History of the Pulteney Old Scholars' Association: Added copypaste tag.
11 June 2019
- 13:2613:26, 11 June 2019 diff hist +1,029 m Charles Sturt In the two short amendments the deleted words are not in the cited source; the added words are. Also added his life summary from ADB.
6 February 2019
- 10:5010:50, 6 February 2019 diff hist +246 User talk:Nick-D No edit summary
- 10:3410:34, 6 February 2019 diff hist −79 m Military history of Australia during World War I Undid revision 882024541 by Nick-D (talk). Wikipedia content needs to be independently verifiable from a reputable source. What immediately struck me when I saw it was that the passage was an unsupported expression of opinion. That's undoubtedly prompted its deletion -- but a reason should have been left. What you should do now is to get a source for the text; but I advise you not to start an edit war. ;-) Tag: Undo
2 February 2019
- 06:3306:33, 2 February 2019 diff hist +34 m Aurecon Refimprove tag added because the article has only two references
29 January 2019
- 12:0812:08, 29 January 2019 diff hist −205 m Victor Harbor Horse Drawn Tram Undid revision 880728313 by PabloZ (talk). Your addition, like any other, must cite a verifiable source. Please come up with one and feel free to undo my undo. Tag: Undo
13 January 2019
- 03:4803:48, 13 January 2019 diff hist −194 m Conscription in Australia Undid revision 877952611 by 49.183.49.125 (talk). This addition is only an assertion of opinion because it lacks a verifiable published source. I would also suggest that "While this means Conscription is Banned" [sic, idiosyncratic use of capitals] be made explicit – what is "this" and does "this" actually "ban" conscription? Tag: Undo
13 December 2018
- 23:2423:24, 13 December 2018 diff hist +948 m Talk:Road train No edit summary
- 23:2223:22, 13 December 2018 diff hist −298 m Road train Undid revision 873523806 by 85.76.32.82 (talk) for reasons shown on the Talk page under the heading "Reverted addition of unsourced material". Tag: Undo
15 October 2018
- 00:5800:58, 15 October 2018 diff hist +375 m Canberra Railway Museum Clean-up following insertion of a "citation needed" tag for the recently added sentence "As of 14th October 2018...". More importantly I also inserted another "citation needed" tag with the reason "Without verification the end of the sentence is an anonymous opinion that may affect the reputation of the company; if a verifiable source cannot be provided the words need to be deleted".
18 September 2018
- 06:0306:03, 18 September 2018 diff hist +1 m GCSE Substituted "in 2012" for "recently".
15 September 2018
- 15:5115:51, 15 September 2018 diff hist +1,176 m Canberra Railway Museum General clean-up. Added new content to cover recent developments. Added photo and caption.
