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A user with 110 edits. Account created on 12 February 2019.
17 March 2019
- 17:5417:54, 17 March 2019 diff hist −120 Public speaking →Techniques and trainings: Edited sentences for clarity. Copyedited.
- 17:5017:50, 17 March 2019 diff hist +2 Public speaking →Women and public speaking: Edited sentence structure and grammar for clarity.
- 17:1817:18, 17 March 2019 diff hist −2 m Public speaking →Technology
- 16:3816:38, 17 March 2019 diff hist +59 Public speaking →Modern: Added image of a speaker giving a Ted Talk to the technology section.
- 16:3316:33, 17 March 2019 diff hist +107 Clueless →Adaptations: Added picture of Dove Cameron who played Cher in the ""Clueless"" Musical.
- 16:2916:29, 17 March 2019 diff hist +84 Talk:Clueless →Update
- 16:2816:28, 17 March 2019 diff hist +57 Clueless →Cultural impact and legacy: Added image of Brittany Murphy to the cast section under the Cultural impact and legacy heading.
- 16:1916:19, 17 March 2019 diff hist +105 Clueless →Production: Added image of the Westfield Fashion Square, which was where the mall scene of ""Clueless"" was filmed.
- 16:0316:03, 17 March 2019 diff hist +49 Clueless →See also: Added Cult Following to see also . Also added columns.
- 16:0016:00, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1 m Clueless →See also
- 16:0016:00, 17 March 2019 diff hist +24 Clueless →See also: Added musical link to See Also in hopes of adding more content to this page by interested editors or readers.
- 15:5815:58, 17 March 2019 diff hist +31 Clueless →Books: Added a see also link to the novels Wiki page under the corresponding Books section.
- 15:5415:54, 17 March 2019 diff hist +34 Clueless →See also: Added List of Clueless characters link to the see also section.
- 15:4515:45, 17 March 2019 diff hist +13 Clueless →Popular culture and society: Edited words for clarity.
- 15:4015:40, 17 March 2019 diff hist −27 Clueless →Plot: Took out some of the quoted material and reworded it. There were far too many quotes in this section. Also edited certain words and phrases for clarity.
- 15:3215:32, 17 March 2019 diff hist 0 Clueless Webstory should be under the adaptations heading.
- 15:3115:31, 17 March 2019 diff hist 0 Clueless The adaptations and remake should follow the Cultural impact and legacy section.
- 15:2915:29, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1,540 Clueless →Popular culture: After studying Good Articles, I think that creating a Cultural impact and legacy section with cast and popular culture sections will work best. The original Legacy section was unstructured and unorganized. I am wondering if the cast information is even necessary to the article. However, other articles have this information so I added it back.
- 04:1404:14, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1 m Talk:Clueless →Update
- 04:1304:13, 17 March 2019 diff hist +102 Talk:Clueless No edit summary
- 04:1204:12, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1,295 Talk:Clueless No edit summary
- 04:0404:04, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1,847 Talk:Public speaking No edit summary
- 03:5203:52, 17 March 2019 diff hist −342 Public speaking →Telecommunication: Deleted opinions/ original and unsupported research. Clarified sentence structure and fixed grammar. Added telecommunication link.
- 03:4803:48, 17 March 2019 diff hist −182 Public speaking →Technology: Deleted and altered original research sentences. Added citation needed tags.
- 03:4403:44, 17 March 2019 diff hist −27 Public speaking →Technology: Embedded YouTube link. Edited entire section for grammar clarity and changed to follow proper sentence structure/grammar rules. It used very poor grammar previously.
15 March 2019
- 20:2320:23, 15 March 2019 diff hist −5 Clueless →See also
- 20:1720:17, 15 March 2019 diff hist +22 Toastmasters International →See also: Added relevant link to Public speaking article
- 20:1520:15, 15 March 2019 diff hist +22 Debate →See also: Added relevant link to Public speaking article
- 20:1420:14, 15 March 2019 diff hist +22 Audience response →See also: Added public speaking link
- 20:1220:12, 15 March 2019 diff hist +21 Discourse →See also
- 20:1120:11, 15 March 2019 diff hist +17 Public speaking →See also: Added persuasion link to see also
- 20:0420:04, 15 March 2019 diff hist −4 Public speaking →Historical speeches: Italicizing years added undue, original emphasis.
- 19:5519:55, 15 March 2019 diff hist −175 Public speaking Deleted Ezra image that did not relate to any content on the page.
- 19:4619:46, 15 March 2019 diff hist +192 Public speaking →Modern: Added back applicable technology to this section.
- 19:3819:38, 15 March 2019 diff hist +344 Public speaking →Notable modern theorists: Added a modern theorist that is important to public speaking.
- 19:2819:28, 15 March 2019 diff hist −1 m Public speaking →Glossophobia=
- 19:2719:27, 15 March 2019 diff hist +939 Public speaking Added back technique content. Created a new section for the fear of public speaking, which links to another Wiki page
- 19:1819:18, 15 March 2019 diff hist −87 Public speaking The previous lead discussed information that was not in the article. Now, the lead provides an overview of the article. It discusses components beyond the history of public speaking as well. Now, the women, technology, and modern sections are accounted for within the lead. Irrelevant information was moved into different sections and/or deleted.
- 19:1519:15, 15 March 2019 diff hist +21 Public speaking Added a link to the Rhetoric page. Rhetoric is discussed already in this page in detail. I think that providing a link will facilitate the addition of content as well.
- 18:4518:45, 15 March 2019 diff hist +431 Public speaking →Uses: Added back previously deleted content that is very applicable to this page.
- 18:1518:15, 15 March 2019 diff hist +19 m Public speaking →Historical speeches
- 18:1318:13, 15 March 2019 diff hist +67 Public speaking →Historical speeches: Added a List of speeches internal link to this section.
- 18:0818:08, 15 March 2019 diff hist 0 Public speaking No edit summary
- 18:0618:06, 15 March 2019 diff hist 0 Public speaking →History
- 17:4617:46, 15 March 2019 diff hist −2 Public speaking →Historical speeches
- 17:3317:33, 15 March 2019 diff hist −4 Public speaking "Historical speeches" deserves its own section. Additionally, the list format is appropriate because it is chronologically ordered and the list will allow for easier navigation.
- 17:2617:26, 15 March 2019 diff hist +32 Public speaking →Modern: I think that adding a "Notable modern theorists" section will allow for appropriate content to be inserted into the page. As is, the article is too heavily skewed to be about the history of the public speaking instead of also discussing public speaking in the modern world.
- 17:2517:25, 15 March 2019 diff hist −1 m Public speaking No edit summary
- 17:2417:24, 15 March 2019 diff hist −17 Public speaking →Technology: Changing the structure/title of the "technology" section. I think that renaming this section as "Modern" will allow for more edits and information to be added beyond technology. This is a field of academia that has been studied, refined, and explored. A "modern" section will allow for this content to be inserted and expanded.
- 17:1817:18, 15 March 2019 diff hist −3 Public speaking →Purpose: Changed section title from "purpose" to "uses"