User contributions for AtomikWeasel
A user with 1,742 edits. Account created on 15 June 2007.
14 March 2022
- 19:3519:35, 14 March 2022 diff hist −9 m Every Heartbeat 'Managed to reach' may be thought, in context, to suggest a veiled value judgement. I'm simply attempting a clear objective statement of fact. As always, I'm open to discussion :)
9 March 2022
- 19:1219:12, 9 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Cubby O'Brien Simply added a , for what I'd hope would be a (very) minor improvement in style, readability, and clarity :)
3 November 2021
- 17:1217:12, 3 November 2021 diff hist −1 m Robert Preston (actor) minor stylistic tweak as to clarity/emphasis... if any disagreement happy to discuss :)
14 August 2021
- 13:0513:05, 14 August 2021 diff hist −5 m Battle Chasers minor grammar tweak, any challeneges/differences, happy to discuss :)
31 July 2021
- 03:5803:58, 31 July 2021 diff hist −3 m Island chain strategy I'm suggesting 'focus' rather than 'fixation' simply because the latter seems to me to strongly suggest a value judgement. I am of course open to other thoughts :)
1 May 2021
- 02:5202:52, 1 May 2021 diff hist +5 m Amberjack + 'the' and plural for oceans :)
10 January 2021
- 20:0620:06, 10 January 2021 diff hist −5 m Jerry Schatzberg with respect: deleted 'only' which seems to me a bit subjectively judgemental, hope that's okay :)
19 December 2020
- 12:4112:41, 19 December 2020 diff hist +1 m Merritt Parkway + ,
29 November 2020
- 00:5600:56, 29 November 2020 diff hist −6 m Bonzo Goes to Bitburg Simple attempt at stylistic clarity, no change in meaning or content intended.
26 November 2020
- 08:2708:27, 26 November 2020 diff hist −6 m Violence in art Minor stylistic tweak :)
5 November 2020
- 12:1612:16, 5 November 2020 diff hist −9 m Enrico Fermi i'd respectfually suggest this minor emendation so as to finesse the inevitably pedantic (quasi-pedantic?) old school grammatical normative v contemporaty usage he v him question :)
4 November 2020
- 13:2313:23, 4 November 2020 diff hist +8 m Porsche 928 minor styling tweak
19 October 2020
- 08:3608:36, 19 October 2020 diff hist −2 m Embraer Phenom 300 - 'a'
23 September 2020
- 05:0905:09, 23 September 2020 diff hist +16 m Some Came Running (film) minor sylistic tweak
28 August 2020
- 22:3222:32, 28 August 2020 diff hist +2 m Solfatara (volcano) typo corr > en dash
19 August 2020
- 05:5805:58, 19 August 2020 diff hist +6 m Giovanni Borgia, 2nd Duke of Gandía minor style/clarification(?) tweak
18 August 2020
- 05:4705:47, 18 August 2020 diff hist +15 m House of Borgia minor stylistic tweak
3 August 2020
- 12:0312:03, 3 August 2020 diff hist 0 m Port of Subic Bay minor correction as to tense
19 June 2020
- 07:1707:17, 19 June 2020 diff hist +1 m Albany–Rensselaer station corr typo, add 's'
21 May 2020
- 06:0106:01, 21 May 2020 diff hist −1 m The Sterile Cuckoo an > a
16 April 2020
- 11:1011:10, 16 April 2020 diff hist +1 m Angela Lindvall + ,
26 March 2020
- 15:5815:58, 26 March 2020 diff hist −3 m Washington Park Historic District (Albany, New York) Attempt at improving clarity and flow a bit :)
8 February 2020
- 17:4817:48, 8 February 2020 diff hist +4 m Cornelia Street Cafe No edit summary
2 February 2020
9 January 2020
- 11:0311:03, 9 January 2020 diff hist +1 m Andrew Bergman + ,
27 December 2019
- 14:0814:08, 27 December 2019 diff hist −1 m Ann Wedgeworth change of tense, as both parents are now deceased
10 November 2019
- 07:3607:36, 10 November 2019 diff hist −23 m Wu Kong (film) tighten a bit
5 November 2019
- 22:2422:24, 5 November 2019 diff hist +2 m List of Clannad episodes + -ed
19 October 2019
- 05:3105:31, 19 October 2019 diff hist +1 m Michael Richards + comma
30 September 2019
- 01:3901:39, 30 September 2019 diff hist 0 m Liev Schreiber correct typo
25 September 2019
- 01:5501:55, 25 September 2019 diff hist +3 m Cold fusion Minor grammar/style tweak so as to read as slightly less casually idiomatic.
10 August 2019
- 03:4103:41, 10 August 2019 diff hist −3 m Baton (law enforcement) grammar: being > be
19 July 2019
- 10:4310:43, 19 July 2019 diff hist −3 m Sheridan College delete seemingly redundant 'in'
6 June 2019
- 02:2902:29, 6 June 2019 diff hist +3 m Tommy Kirk + 'was'
31 May 2019
- 13:0113:01, 31 May 2019 diff hist +3 m Steiff + 'is'
2 January 2019
- 19:4419:44, 2 January 2019 diff hist −236 User talk:AtomikWeasel No edit summary
- 19:3919:39, 2 January 2019 diff hist −1 FCC v. Pacifica Foundation Replaced 'claimed' with more neutral 'stated'. 'Claimed' suggests we have reason for doubt as to his statement, and no such reason is provided. The fact that he was active in Morality in Media more than suffices, neutrally and objectively.
- 19:3319:33, 2 January 2019 diff hist −1 m FCC v. Pacifica Foundation correct improper grammar
15 November 2018
- 01:4901:49, 15 November 2018 diff hist +5 m Larry Josephson + 'with'
18 October 2018
- 03:3203:32, 18 October 2018 diff hist +2 m John Simon (critic) tweak ellipsis and spacing
13 October 2018
- 14:3414:34, 13 October 2018 diff hist +3 m Micheletto Corella replace hyphen with proper en dash
1 October 2018
- 09:1109:11, 1 October 2018 diff hist +4 m Killing Them Softly + the
13 September 2018
- 11:1911:19, 13 September 2018 diff hist 0 m Project DELTA Break sentence at this point (seems to make sense, open to discussion if others differ)
- 11:1711:17, 13 September 2018 diff hist +10 m Project DELTA + the direction of
- 11:1311:13, 13 September 2018 diff hist +1 m Project DELTA + d
9 September 2018
- 09:2209:22, 9 September 2018 diff hist +4 m Ida Tarbell + 'the'
1 September 2018
- 05:5405:54, 1 September 2018 diff hist −4 m National Shrine of the North American Martyrs I assume this was originally meant to read 'in the year', but 'year' was deleted at some point, leaving a minor strangeness
18 August 2018
- 06:2406:24, 18 August 2018 diff hist +1 m Jimmy Carter + ,
11 August 2018
- 11:1711:17, 11 August 2018 diff hist 0 m Kim's Convenience . > ,
5 August 2018
- 02:5702:57, 5 August 2018 diff hist −50 Ellen Barkin As noted a year ago in Talk, the characterization of family socio-economic status is at the very least problematic as non-objective. Thus this attempt at a more neutral presentation.
