User contributions for Alkibiades231
A user with 165 edits. Account created on 22 November 2008.
28 July 2012
- 20:1420:14, 28 July 2012 diff hist +276 Usain Bolt →Average speed: Average speed is an artifact of calculation in the 100m dash: added here is Bolt's actual running speed during the race, which he maintained for 50 meters.
16 June 2012
- 23:5723:57, 16 June 2012 diff hist +1 m Michal Kadlec →Career
- 23:5623:56, 16 June 2012 diff hist +4 m Michal Kadlec →Career
- 23:5423:54, 16 June 2012 diff hist −6 m Michal Kadlec →Career
- 23:5423:54, 16 June 2012 diff hist +432 Michal Kadlec →Career: Added Kadlec's dramatic header off the line for the Czech team in Euro 2012
26 April 2012
- 17:3217:32, 26 April 2012 diff hist −33 m Neanderthal Redacted citation request under "Climate Change" section, as the citation at the end of paragraph is sufficient for the claims of the entire section
17 June 2011
- 18:5518:55, 17 June 2011 diff hist 0 Breguet 14 No edit summary
- 18:5518:55, 17 June 2011 diff hist −49 Breguet 14 No edit summary
- 18:5418:54, 17 June 2011 diff hist +99 Breguet 14 Corrected the wattage per kilogram power/mass ratio; added qualifiers to the ratios
3 February 2011
- 14:3614:36, 3 February 2011 diff hist +5 Talk:SPAD S.VII →Rate of Climb
- 14:3414:34, 3 February 2011 diff hist +749 Talk:SPAD S.VII →Rate of Climb
- 14:2114:21, 3 February 2011 diff hist +633 Talk:SPAD S.VII →Rate of Climb: new section
1 February 2010
- 17:3617:36, 1 February 2010 diff hist +2,361 Talk:Homer →Dating the Homer poems
10 December 2009
- 18:3918:39, 10 December 2009 diff hist +727 Talk:John Keegan →Criticism
30 November 2009
- 22:5122:51, 30 November 2009 diff hist −7 Testudo formation →Description: inserted participle with existing temporal adverb for more lively descriptive style.
- 22:4922:49, 30 November 2009 diff hist −3 m Testudo formation →Tactical Analysis: Corrected errors in comma and word choice.
- 22:4322:43, 30 November 2009 diff hist −10 m Testudo formation →Tactical Analysis: style: brevity in conjunction and preposition use - "as well as by">"and"
- 22:3922:39, 30 November 2009 diff hist +1 m Testudo formation →Tactical Analysis: phalanx>soldiers; "phalanx" is not strictly correct in describing Roman formations in this context
22 November 2009
- 18:3718:37, 22 November 2009 diff hist −69 Jamaal Charles →Track: Removed inaccurate comment concerning Martin's wind-aided 9.76 and its relation to Bolt's world record. A wind-aided 9.76 trails the world record by a good 6 feet, and is not a legal time
18 November 2009
- 22:2122:21, 18 November 2009 diff hist +21 Festliches Nürnberg →Synopsis: The beams, according to Speer, did not converge at 20,000 feet, but "merged into a general glow" (Speer, "Inside the Third Reich," Macmillan 1970 p.58
- 22:1322:13, 18 November 2009 diff hist +35 Cathedral of Light Corrected the biased misquotation of Nevile Henderson, which the article formerly presented as either a neutral or negative assessment. cf. Henderson "The Failure of a Mission" New York 1940, p. 72.
2 November 2009
- 18:2418:24, 2 November 2009 diff hist +172 Luminism Restored previous content, excepting the photography ad
- 18:2018:20, 2 November 2009 diff hist −125 Luminism Removed ad-spam link to the photography studio in Egypt; Wikipedia is not your adspace; do it again and you'll be censured.
26 October 2009
- 14:2914:29, 26 October 2009 diff hist −4 m History of the World (board game) No edit summary
- 14:2714:27, 26 October 2009 diff hist +184 History of the World (board game) Epoch II info
- 14:1914:19, 26 October 2009 diff hist +139 m History of the World (board game) No edit summary
- 14:1614:16, 26 October 2009 diff hist −14 m History of the World (board game) No edit summary
- 14:1614:16, 26 October 2009 diff hist −215 History of the World (board game) cleanup of information, only noting fleets when they are present and capitals when they are not
- 14:1114:11, 26 October 2009 diff hist +14 m History of the World (board game) No edit summary
- 14:1014:10, 26 October 2009 diff hist +365 History of the World (board game) Added information on starting territory, capital, and fleets.
17 June 2009
- 14:4914:49, 17 June 2009 diff hist +264 Talk:Mercedes-Benz 300 SL No edit summary
11 May 2009
- 20:5420:54, 11 May 2009 diff hist −1 m Karen Silkwood →Estate of Karen Silkwood v. Kerr-McGee: Grammar: relative pronoun: whom>who, as it refers to the subject of the sentence. Use obliques for object.
30 April 2009
- 18:3618:36, 30 April 2009 diff hist +2 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2009: Renault: Puntuation: commas to set off prep phrase, otherwise, we might wonder if Piquet had a second race in Australia
- 18:3218:32, 30 April 2009 diff hist −6 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2008: Renault: Grammar: verb tense
- 18:3118:31, 30 April 2009 diff hist −2 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2008: Renault: Usage in preposition: "by">","
- 18:3018:30, 30 April 2009 diff hist −25 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2008: Renault: Style: cliche "rumours and speculation" replaced; also hypotactic "however" is postpositive in English: replaced with "despite"
- 18:2318:23, 30 April 2009 diff hist +1 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2008: Renault: Grammar: verb tense
- 18:2018:20, 30 April 2009 diff hist −4 m Nelson Piquet Jr. →2008: Renault: Style: cliche "up his game">"improve"
- 17:4117:41, 30 April 2009 diff hist −4 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Aftermath: Grammar: eliminated def. article artifact in P. Harten section
- 17:3017:30, 30 April 2009 diff hist +1 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Awards: Parallelism: corrected my own last edit
- 17:2917:29, 30 April 2009 diff hist +3 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Awards: Syntax: dropping another conjuctive phrase for a more appropriate participle
- 17:2517:25, 30 April 2009 diff hist +1 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Awards: Punctuation: comma added for semantic clarification
- 17:2317:23, 30 April 2009 diff hist −5 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Accident investigation: Grammar: redundancy - "Of those" makes "also" unnecessary
- 17:2217:22, 30 April 2009 diff hist −19 US Airways Flight 1549 →Accident investigation: Syntax: commas, phrasing
- 17:1417:14, 30 April 2009 diff hist −18 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Accident investigation: Style/brevity: eliminated restatement
- 17:1317:13, 30 April 2009 diff hist +14 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Accident investigation: Punctuation: comma for clause separation; Syntax unnecessary split inf corrected; Grammar: ambig. pronoun
- 17:0517:05, 30 April 2009 diff hist −1 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Aftermath: Syntax: clarified and simplified modifier complex concerning P. Harten; replaced conjuctive phrase with participle
- 17:0117:01, 30 April 2009 diff hist −8 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Aftermath: Syntax: run-on sentence split; added comma to second sentence
- 16:5816:58, 30 April 2009 diff hist −23 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Aftermath: Style: eliminated write off restatement; moved link to correspond
- 16:5516:55, 30 April 2009 diff hist +5 m US Airways Flight 1549 →Aftermath: Prepositional Usage: better to add "with" in parenthetic explanation
