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A user with 103 edits. Account created on 12 February 2019.
18 March 2019
- 02:2102:21, 18 March 2019 diff hist +318 Talk:The Little Mermaid →Planned Revisions: Update on status of my revisions
- 02:1802:18, 18 March 2019 diff hist +1,031 Talk:Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Planned Revisions: Update on my revision status; one more recommendation
- 00:5800:58, 18 March 2019 diff hist +445 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) updated lead; minor copy-editing through entire article
- 00:2200:22, 18 March 2019 diff hist +620 The Little Mermaid added "see also" section; updated lead to reflect more sections of the article; light copy-editing of entire article
17 March 2019
- 23:2823:28, 17 March 2019 diff hist +4 List of The Little Mermaid adaptations italicized 'The Little Mermaid' at the end of lead
- 00:5500:55, 17 March 2019 diff hist −10,636 The Little Mermaid →Adaptations: separated comprehensive list into it's own article page (see: Talk:The Little Mermaid#Planned Revisions; added summaries of adaptations from a TV show & the Disney film
- 00:5000:50, 17 March 2019 diff hist +92 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Adaptations: added ellen price image for safe keeping
- 00:4500:45, 17 March 2019 diff hist +4,416 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Adaptations?: added summaries of a TV show adaptation & the Disney film adaptation
16 March 2019
- 23:2723:27, 16 March 2019 diff hist +108 List of The Little Mermaid adaptations Added image to lead section
- 23:2123:21, 16 March 2019 diff hist +325 N Talk:List of The Little Mermaid adaptations New list
- 23:1723:17, 16 March 2019 diff hist +15,084 N List of The Little Mermaid adaptations Pulled adaptations list from The Little Mermaid into this stand-alone list
- 22:2422:24, 16 March 2019 diff hist −590 The Little Mermaid Removed "In Art" section that consisted of only images; Please see: WP:NOTGALLERY
- 22:2022:20, 16 March 2019 diff hist −1 The Little Mermaid →Critical response: repositioned image to format better with images in plot section
- 22:1722:17, 16 March 2019 diff hist +2 The Little Mermaid →Plot summary: repositioned added images
- 22:0222:02, 16 March 2019 diff hist −905 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Performances: revised section; paraphrased block quotes
- 20:2120:21, 16 March 2019 diff hist +10,708 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Performances and reception: revised section; paraphrased block quotes current
- 17:5017:50, 16 March 2019 diff hist −5,340 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Choreography: removed text to make room for last section
- 17:4817:48, 16 March 2019 diff hist −272 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Choreography: revised section focusing on run-on sentences; paraphrased Sokolova quote
- 17:4117:41, 16 March 2019 diff hist −430 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Choreography: paraphrased sokolova quote
- 02:2002:20, 16 March 2019 diff hist +187 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Choreography: revised for run-on sentences
- 01:3501:35, 16 March 2019 diff hist +5,573 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Choreography: added text
- 01:3401:34, 16 March 2019 diff hist −7,194 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Creation: cleared everything out to keep sandbox short/clean
15 March 2019
- 00:3100:31, 15 March 2019 diff hist −37 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →To Do
- 00:3000:30, 15 March 2019 diff hist +181 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Creation: revised 'Conception' section; removed repetition of passive voice
- 00:2100:21, 15 March 2019 diff hist +187 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Conception: revised section; removed repetition of passive voice
14 March 2019
- 23:5523:55, 14 March 2019 diff hist −14 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →To Do
- 23:5423:54, 14 March 2019 diff hist +135 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Difficulties: 3rd paragraph revised for style and clarity
- 23:4823:48, 14 March 2019 diff hist −161 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Difficulties: 2nd paragraph revised for clarity; broke up sentences; had to remove last sentence because it didn't fit contextually and I couldn't look at the ref because the citation is incomplete
- 23:4023:40, 14 March 2019 diff hist +220 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Difficulties: revised 1st paragraph (focused on attributing facts to nijinska's memoir); paraphrased long quote at the end; fixed ref
- 23:3123:31, 14 March 2019 diff hist +138 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Difficulties: 3rd paragraph revised for style and clarity
- 23:2923:29, 14 March 2019 diff hist +68 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Difficulties: 2nd paragraph revised for clarity, broke up sentences; had to remove last sentence because it didn't fit contextually and I couldn't look at ref because it's incomplete
- 23:0923:09, 14 March 2019 diff hist +72 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Difficulties: revised first paragraph (focused on attributing facts to nijinska's memoir); paraphrased 3 line quote
- 22:5822:58, 14 March 2019 diff hist +150 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →Difficulties: updated nijinska ref
- 01:0801:08, 14 March 2019 diff hist −13 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →To Do
- 01:0801:08, 14 March 2019 diff hist +112 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Development: Revised section to remove passive voice and for grammatical clarity
- 00:4900:49, 14 March 2019 diff hist +91 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox →To Do
- 00:4000:40, 14 March 2019 diff hist +88 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox added to do list
- 00:3900:39, 14 March 2019 diff hist +103 Afternoon of a Faun (Nijinsky) →Other art: Revised to remove generality; added "citation needed" to statement about Queen
12 March 2019
- 01:5301:53, 12 March 2019 diff hist −68 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 updated to do list
- 01:3001:30, 12 March 2019 diff hist −170 The Little Mermaid →Debate over ending: P. L. Travers paragraph: removed first sentence because it wasn't NPOV; Took out part of the quote from Travers that was already abbreviated and no longer made sense
- 01:2401:24, 12 March 2019 diff hist −374 The Little Mermaid →Debate over ending: Revised Daughter of Air paragraph and paraphrased block quote
- 01:1601:16, 12 March 2019 diff hist −193 The Little Mermaid →Debate over ending: Revised Boggild & Heegaard paragraph to remove block quote; moved it last for better flow of info; removed redundancy in explaining spirits/their role in the ending
- 01:1101:11, 12 March 2019 diff hist −221 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Debate over ending: fixed up Boggild & Heegaard paragraph and moved it to last for better flow of info; removed redundancy in explaining the spirits/their part in the ending
- 00:5600:56, 12 March 2019 diff hist −100 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Debate over ending: took out part of quote in 3rd paragraph that didn't make sense
- 00:0600:06, 12 March 2019 diff hist −71 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Debate over ending: WP:NPOV; removed generalized sentence about criticism over ending
- 00:0400:04, 12 March 2019 diff hist −406 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 →Critical response: paraphrased Daughters of Air quote
11 March 2019
- 23:3223:32, 11 March 2019 diff hist +247 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 MOS:NOVELS
- 23:1923:19, 11 March 2019 diff hist +5 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 fixed format of to do list
- 23:1823:18, 11 March 2019 diff hist +279 User:Aggiegal19/sandbox2 added to do list
- 23:1023:10, 11 March 2019 diff hist +1,113 Talk:The Little Mermaid →Planned Revisions: responding to Interpretations section discussion