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13 August 2017
- 05:4205:42, 13 August 2017 diff hist +867 Talk:Tokyo Ghoul (film) is this the correct pronoun for the reviewer? also, article may need updating if film has been released
10 June 2017
- 03:3103:31, 10 June 2017 diff hist +5 The Marriage Plot tweaked final sentence of intro; it was not universally "well-received by critics", so I changed the line to "well received by many critics" to better reflect the balance of reactions the book appears to have received
- 03:2803:28, 10 June 2017 diff hist +2,406 The Marriage Plot →Critical reception: additional material + citation (review from The Atlantic, which is from mainstream publication and appears to have high google ranking in connection to the author/book implying it is commonly/popularly referenced elsewhere)
26 May 2017
- 02:1102:11, 26 May 2017 diff hist +380 Motion graphic design moved "typical motion graphic designer" bit up from Technology section to introduction (where it makes more sense) though also modified to less declarative of what is "typical", given no cite was given for the "typical...is" claim; +'d relevant See Alsos
- 02:0302:03, 26 May 2017 diff hist −88 Motion graphic design →Technology: neutralized some wording (it sounded really puffed-up on first read), rearranged a little, and tweaked for more encyclopedic feel. Some areas could still use better sourcing though.
- 01:2801:28, 26 May 2017 diff hist −44 Motion graphic design Removed and tweaked non-neutral and non-encyclopedic wording from introduction.
- 00:3200:32, 26 May 2017 diff hist +1,006 Talk:Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Series could use clarification on eligibility definition, specifically re: if there is an explicit set differentiation (vs a subjective one) between Supporting and Lead actress
18 March 2017
- 09:3009:30, 18 March 2017 diff hist +1,565 Talk:Islam why does "Arabic mythology" redirect to a general article on Islam when a.) Islam isn't just seen in "Arabic" culture and b- the pages that link to "arabic mythology" are folklore-related not religious-related?
27 February 2017
- 02:2802:28, 27 February 2017 diff hist +98 Wayne Enterprises →Powerless: updated so that it no longer refers to an "upcoming" TV series, as the series is now out
8 February 2017
- 21:3921:39, 8 February 2017 diff hist +248 Talk:Sin (mythology) →Lucifer?: minor correction to my own statement
- 21:3421:34, 8 February 2017 diff hist +9,167 Talk:Sin (mythology) →Lucifer?: No, nope, no, nada, nope, and insert appropriate number of additional "nopes".
12 January 2017
- 04:1104:11, 12 January 2017 diff hist +4,148 Talk:The Debut (2000 film) →Merge of Gene Cajayon: issues with it being a redirect instead
29 November 2016
- 07:4107:41, 29 November 2016 diff hist +2,898 Talk:Oorah →Stupid
1 September 2016
- 03:5603:56, 1 September 2016 diff hist +1,196 Talk:Philippine adobo incorrect link for one of the sources cited?
27 May 2016
- 22:0122:01, 27 May 2016 diff hist +2,843 Talk:Endocannibalism this wording seems a bit too close to a persuasive essay, doesn't it? Is it trying to summarize the study's conclusions and if so, should it not be worded as such?
- 19:2519:25, 27 May 2016 diff hist +626 Talk:Brain fag syndrome →Brain Fag is associated with western classrooms
- 19:1519:15, 27 May 2016 diff hist +1,362 Talk:Ataque de nervios No edit summary
23 May 2016
- 06:5206:52, 23 May 2016 diff hist +3,237 Talk:DC Rebirth lots of announcements of future releases in the charts here are listed as firm past tense as if they have already happened, but at literally future dates? this doesn't seem right
17 December 2015
- 02:4902:49, 17 December 2015 diff hist 0 Heathenry (new religious movement) →Racial issues: flipping the positioning of "universalist" and "folkish" in the "they're called this, respectively", because grammatically in ref to previous sentence it accidentally identifies the positions incorrectly by implication