User contributions for 96.227.230.57

1 May 2011

• 03:4303:43, 1 May 2011 diff hist +604‎ Talk:Criticism of Pope John Paul II ‎ →‎"Traditional" / "Traditionalist": not really
• 03:4203:42, 1 May 2011 diff hist −3‎ Criticism of Pope John Paul II ‎ →‎Birth control and gender roles: revert and discussing

30 March 2011

• 03:0603:06, 30 March 2011 diff hist −1,662‎ St. Charles Borromeo Seminary ‎ →‎Mission: delete section copied verbatim from http://www.scs.edu/about-saint-charles-seminary.htm - its web page Tag: section blanking

20 March 2011

• 01:2001:20, 20 March 2011 diff hist +34‎ Charles Borromeo ‎ →‎Veneration: there's an article for that

11 February 2011

• 03:4303:43, 11 February 2011 diff hist +17‎ Lila Rose ‎ Undid revision 413236513 by WikiManOne (talk) one says Sept one says Nov so lets do this
• 03:0703:07, 11 February 2011 diff hist +541‎ Talk:Live Action (organization) ‎ →‎Title: self id conventions
• 02:5602:56, 11 February 2011 diff hist −50‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Awards and accolades: delete UNDUE quote but qualify org to convey same info
• 02:5402:54, 11 February 2011 diff hist +58‎ Lila Rose ‎ Undid revision 413230831 by WikiManOne (talk) summary of awards etc part of article, and its not promotional if you're not pro-life lol
• 02:5202:52, 11 February 2011 diff hist +1‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: move ed stuff togheter
• 02:4802:48, 11 February 2011 diff hist −7‎ Lila Rose ‎ tweak for neutrality: "unborn" here is problematic
• 02:4602:46, 11 February 2011 diff hist −78‎ Lila Rose ‎ this is too POV pushing, although the effort is reasonable
• 02:4402:44, 11 February 2011 diff hist +9‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: ??? this is totally straightforawrd
• 02:4102:41, 11 February 2011 diff hist −8‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: shorter better no repeat clinic
• 02:4002:40, 11 February 2011 diff hist +76‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: change back to better sentence but concede to say asserting not believing, although how fine can you split a hair?
• 02:3202:32, 11 February 2011 diff hist −7‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: not sure how "fellow" makes this better or even neutral
• 02:3102:31, 11 February 2011 diff hist −46‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: delete Life Prizes above, its already in section below
• 02:2902:29, 11 February 2011 diff hist −38‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: are you serious? this is just a summary of the following sourced section
• 02:2802:28, 11 February 2011 diff hist −1‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: ugh
• 02:2702:27, 11 February 2011 diff hist −83‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: rephrase polemic quote
• 02:2102:21, 11 February 2011 diff hist −93‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎2011 undercover videos: restate polemic quote
• 02:1902:19, 11 February 2011 diff hist +51‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: I honestly could not find the"technical violation" in either source. Since both PP and Rose would think this new statemnet inadequate it should be NPOV lol
• 02:0902:09, 11 February 2011 diff hist −28‎ Lila Rose ‎ streamline PP descrption in lead. Seemed POV although maybe a good reword could be found?
• 02:0802:08, 11 February 2011 diff hist +3‎ Lila Rose ‎ move Life Prizes out of lead into Bio for due weight, oh, and fix spelling lol

10 February 2011

• 06:0806:08, 10 February 2011 diff hist +42‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: streamline, better w/o "bend the rules" posturing
• 06:0506:05, 10 February 2011 diff hist −347‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: neutral and fair means exactly NOT overemphasizing something, see UNDUE, and its redundant and awkward anyway
• 04:1204:12, 10 February 2011 diff hist +5‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: more specific
• 04:1104:11, 10 February 2011 diff hist −43‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: take out weaselly phrase, it's only an editorial
• 04:0904:09, 10 February 2011 diff hist +8‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: paraphrase paralysis
• 04:0504:05, 10 February 2011 diff hist +618‎ Talk:Lila Rose ‎ →‎This is a horrible article: Well you should have seen the cover they wanted to do
• 03:5003:50, 10 February 2011 diff hist +36‎ Live Action (organization) ‎ The previous version makes absolutely no sense, no way in the Queen's English "hoax" is accurate, so I think this is what is meant
• 03:4703:47, 10 February 2011 diff hist +9‎ Live Action (organization) ‎ oops adapt content to article
• 03:4603:46, 10 February 2011 diff hist −108‎ Live Action (organization) ‎ summarize position without rabid quote
• 03:4403:44, 10 February 2011 diff hist −139‎ Live Action (organization) ‎ I don't get this, this denied something the rest of the article never posited
• 03:3603:36, 10 February 2011 diff hist +753‎ Talk:Lila Rose ‎ →‎Debate over Rose's/LiveAction tactics: new section
• 03:2203:22, 10 February 2011 diff hist +57‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: re-add religious affiliation to bio chapter with source
• 03:1803:18, 10 February 2011 diff hist −52‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: put Birmingham stuff in sctivism section. Seems UNDUE in its own header
• 03:1603:16, 10 February 2011 diff hist +12‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: slighty more neutral and less dramatic; we should use Salon as a reference, not an example!
• 03:1403:14, 10 February 2011 diff hist −2‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: no "scare" quotes
• 03:1303:13, 10 February 2011 diff hist −15‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: English please, with no extra-source exaggeration
• 03:0903:09, 10 February 2011 diff hist +3‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: restructure sentence for logic.
• 03:0603:06, 10 February 2011 diff hist +9‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: paraphrase quote to give least chance of misleading as possible -- maybe the full quote is best??
• 03:0403:04, 10 February 2011 diff hist −3‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: tdelete "and" in quote because ellipses mask what "that" really was
• 03:0103:01, 10 February 2011 diff hist −127‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: 1- fix content to match source (5 incidents in 2011) 2- rewrite declaratively (SOAPBOXs'R'nt'US)
• 02:4802:48, 10 February 2011 diff hist −22‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: streamlliine
• 02:4602:46, 10 February 2011 diff hist −10‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: streamline
• 02:4402:44, 10 February 2011 diff hist −5‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Activism: c'mon how would you like this prose on an article about you?
• 02:3902:39, 10 February 2011 diff hist −2‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: rephrase to say the same thing without source's slant
• 02:3202:32, 10 February 2011 diff hist +9‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: more precise
• 02:3202:32, 10 February 2011 diff hist −9‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: more precise
• 02:2402:24, 10 February 2011 diff hist +118‎ Lila Rose ‎ →‎Biography: if we're going to be POV, let's be spefically about the content of the article, the prize, rather than about the org