User contributions for 86.184.161.129

2 May 2015

• 19:0719:07, 2 May 2015 diff hist +1‎ Video Genie ‎ →‎Features: typos
• 17:0817:08, 2 May 2015 diff hist +2‎ Wikipedia:Fringe theories ‎ →‎Identifying fringe theories: grammar: "ideas" are plural, thus it is "their field", not "its field"
• 15:2215:22, 2 May 2015 diff hist −9‎ Rick & Steve: The Happiest Gay Couple in All the World ‎ grammar
• 15:1915:19, 2 May 2015 diff hist +33‎ Miffy ‎ →‎History
• 13:2213:22, 2 May 2015 diff hist +1‎ Svorsk ‎ run-on sentence
• 12:2412:24, 2 May 2015 diff hist −4‎ Maverick (chocolate bar) ‎No edit summary

1 May 2015

• 22:5022:50, 1 May 2015 diff hist +4‎ Castlevania II: Simon's Quest ‎ →‎Reception
• 17:4217:42, 1 May 2015 diff hist −6‎ Waitrose Duchy Organic ‎ grammar etc.
• 14:4214:42, 1 May 2015 diff hist −2‎ Big Red Software ‎ grammar, remove weird italics

30 April 2015

• 22:3622:36, 30 April 2015 diff hist −4‎ Slavoj Žižek ‎ →‎Ambiguity and lack of alternatives: grammar: "him", not "himself", since this is not a reflexive form
• 09:3409:34, 30 April 2015 diff hist +32‎ Home computer ‎ →‎Background: how about this?
• 09:3309:33, 30 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Ronald Frame ‎ bad comma

29 April 2015

• 18:5218:52, 29 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Credit card ‎ remove bizarre hyphen

28 April 2015

• 17:1317:13, 28 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Victor Lustig ‎ →‎Eiffel Tower scam: grammar
• 17:1117:11, 28 April 2015 diff hist −5‎ Victor Lustig ‎ format / grammar
• 16:1016:10, 28 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ Miles Gordon Technology ‎ grammar
• 16:1016:10, 28 April 2015 diff hist +3‎ Miles Gordon Technology ‎ typo
• 16:0516:05, 28 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ 8.3 filename ‎ →‎Overview: you improve, not increase, performance
• 01:1301:13, 28 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Australian Aboriginal languages ‎ →‎Segmental inventory: grammar: "the most striking feature IS", not "are"

26 April 2015

• 11:2811:28, 26 April 2015 diff hist +3‎ Lotus Marketplace ‎ grammar: it's the protesters, not the program, who cited privacy issues
• 01:5001:50, 26 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Home computer ‎ →‎Background: "blinkenlights" -> "diagnostic lights"; we try to avoid slang in a formal encyclopaedia
• 01:3401:34, 26 April 2015 diff hist +4‎ Chop Suey (video game) ‎ grammar
• 01:3001:30, 26 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ Theresa Duncan ‎ comma

25 April 2015

• 12:1012:10, 25 April 2015 diff hist +4‎ Barsoom ‎ grammar

24 April 2015

• 19:1419:14, 24 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Fawful ‎ spacing
• 19:1319:13, 24 April 2015 diff hist −19‎ List of Mario franchise characters ‎ →‎Toadette: style/tense
• 14:3714:37, 24 April 2015 diff hist +2‎ White Settlers ‎ run-on sentence

22 April 2015

• 18:0018:00, 22 April 2015 diff hist +9‎ A Softer World ‎ avoid slangy tone

21 April 2015

• 20:1520:15, 21 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Bob Ross ‎ →‎TV guest appearances: semicolon

20 April 2015

• 05:2305:23, 20 April 2015 diff hist −2‎ Ahura Mazda ‎ bad comma
• 01:1701:17, 20 April 2015 diff hist +12‎ Ego Trip (magazine) ‎ →‎Description: grammar: it's the scene that became commonplace, not the magazine
• 00:0200:02, 20 April 2015 diff hist +23‎ Ama Dablam ‎ the 2006 avalanche proved that this is not *always* the case. it didn't change anything about what is *typically* the case.

19 April 2015

• 23:1223:12, 19 April 2015 diff hist −9‎ Malay orthography ‎ bad comma
• 18:4518:45, 19 April 2015 diff hist +5‎ XKeyscore ‎ grammar
• 18:4218:42, 19 April 2015 diff hist +2‎ Tailored Access Operations ‎ →‎QUANTUM attacks: avoid non-standard slang
• 18:0318:03, 19 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ Richard Jewell ‎ typo
• 16:3116:31, 19 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ Indymedia ‎ grammar
• 15:3515:35, 19 April 2015 diff hist −15‎ Apollo 11 in popular culture ‎ →‎Folklore: what "quote"?

18 April 2015

• 23:5723:57, 18 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Webmention ‎ any of the four typeds
• 22:4122:41, 18 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Barbara Cartland ‎ →‎Posthumous publications: grammar
• 22:3622:36, 18 April 2015 diff hist −1‎ Barbara Cartland ‎ grammar
• 22:1622:16, 18 April 2015 diff hist +370‎ Talk:Mumsnet ‎ →‎Intro sounds spammy: new section
• 22:1422:14, 18 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ Sodium benzoate ‎ commas are like brackets. close what you open.
• 22:0122:01, 18 April 2015 diff hist −8‎ Mapo tofu ‎ you can't have a "combination" of one thing

17 April 2015

• 16:0116:01, 17 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon ‎ grammar
• 15:4615:46, 17 April 2015 diff hist +4‎ Iceman (occupation) ‎ →‎United States: grammar

16 April 2015

• 23:5523:55, 16 April 2015 diff hist +1‎ The Vegetable, or From President to Postman ‎ →‎Plot: comma
• 23:5223:52, 16 April 2015 diff hist 0‎ Captain Blood (video game) ‎ semicolon
• 23:5123:51, 16 April 2015 diff hist +3‎ 360: Three Sixty ‎ grammar
• 23:5023:50, 16 April 2015 diff hist −3‎ Agassi Tennis Generation ‎ grammar