User contributions for 86.132.141.139

14 March 2008

• 23:5923:59, 14 March 2008 diff hist −11‎ Ali Dizaei ‎ now promoted from Ch. Supt. to Commander
• 21:4821:48, 14 March 2008 diff hist +507‎ Talk:Micropayment ‎ →‎The youth market: new section
• 05:0505:05, 14 March 2008 diff hist +22‎ Roger Twose ‎ weasel words note
• 04:4004:40, 14 March 2008 diff hist +17‎ Canon PowerShot A ‎ →‎Models: qualify comment - the A10/20, for example, did not have manual controls
• 04:2204:22, 14 March 2008 diff hist +9‎ Press Gang ‎ →‎Critical reception: fix English - it wasn't the critical reception being praised!

13 March 2008

• 21:1521:15, 13 March 2008 diff hist +103‎ GROMACS ‎ F@H version is non-GPL
• 17:1917:19, 13 March 2008 diff hist −26‎ Copywriting ‎ tidy
• 15:4615:46, 13 March 2008 diff hist 0‎ Ski jumping ‎ →‎Women's ski jumping: I assume Canada has more than one taxpayer!

12 March 2008

• 20:3220:32, 12 March 2008 diff hist +109‎ Zebra patterning ‎ CHDK
• 20:0320:03, 12 March 2008 diff hist +92‎ Olympia, Washington ‎ this isn't the only use of "Oly", you know!

11 March 2008

• 20:3420:34, 11 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Foreign concessions in Tianjin ‎ →‎British concession: update (presumably) 1911 text; the British left Hankow in 1927
• 20:3220:32, 11 March 2008 diff hist −4‎ Foreign concessions in Tianjin ‎ →‎Austro-Hungarian concession: corrected four examples of "it's" to "its"
• 20:2020:20, 11 March 2008 diff hist +1‎ Deputy Dawg ‎ insert space after comma
• 18:4318:43, 11 March 2008 diff hist −16‎ DPD ‎ cleanup
• 16:0216:02, 11 March 2008 diff hist +345‎ Talk:Precious Ramotswe ‎ →‎Mma Ramotswe?: new section
• 03:2703:27, 11 March 2008 diff hist +13‎ Talk:Bingley Hall ‎ anyone got a photo (of the hall itself, not Bingley House)?
• 02:1402:14, 11 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Tim Pagnotta ‎ →‎Equipment: copyedit

10 March 2008

• 15:0915:09, 10 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Player versus environment ‎ its, not it's
• 14:0114:01, 10 March 2008 diff hist −2‎ GWR 4900 Class 5952 Cogan Hall ‎ its, not it's
• 11:4111:41, 10 March 2008 diff hist −210‎ Mr Midshipman Easy ‎ →‎Plot summary: remove passage reading like a book review

9 March 2008

• 21:1421:14, 9 March 2008 diff hist +9‎ John Farnham & Tom Jones – Together in Concert ‎ best to have the year in the main text too, not just the infobox
• 14:4714:47, 9 March 2008 diff hist +7‎ Plus-size clothing ‎ "most people agree" is not good enough; some sort of ref is needed

8 March 2008

• 04:4604:46, 8 March 2008 diff hist +1‎ Intervalometer ‎ →‎Photography: typo
• 03:0303:03, 8 March 2008 diff hist +740‎ Talk:Cultural Revolution ‎ →‎Query about language in the "1976" section: new section
• 02:5502:55, 8 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Down to the Countryside Movement ‎ its, not it's

7 March 2008

• 00:1000:10, 7 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Waitematā railway station ‎ typo

6 March 2008

• 20:4320:43, 6 March 2008 diff hist −1‎ Henry Norris (courtier) ‎ →‎Life in court: fix wikilink
• 18:5518:55, 6 March 2008 diff hist +326‎ Talk:Canon PowerShot S2 IS ‎ →‎Sensor?: yes
• 17:2117:21, 6 March 2008 diff hist +243‎ Talk:Pak'nSave ‎ →‎Why the N/S difference?: new section
• 16:3916:39, 6 March 2008 diff hist +799‎ Talk:Russian Business Network ‎ →‎Requesting guidance: original research, so not useable - needs verifiable sourcing
• 03:3403:34, 6 March 2008 diff hist +1‎ Chris Martin (cricketer) ‎ we should call him Martin, not Chris (encyclopedic tone)

5 March 2008

• 04:1804:18, 5 March 2008 diff hist −166‎ Sweet Sensation (group) ‎ →‎Discography: remove POV
• 03:3603:36, 5 March 2008 diff hist −5‎ Amber alert ‎ We don't say "Mr. George Bush" in a caption, so shouldn't say "Mrs. Laura Bush" either. Her name is enough

4 March 2008

• 04:2104:21, 4 March 2008 diff hist +2‎ Kate Adie ‎ proper wikilink to Plymouth
• 02:4002:40, 4 March 2008 diff hist −4‎ The Mod Squad ‎ →‎Plot: can't see why "hip" should be italicised; removing that formatting
• 00:0900:09, 4 March 2008 diff hist +219‎ N Talk:The Life Collection ‎ Australian release

3 March 2008

• 20:1920:19, 3 March 2008 diff hist +6‎ Taygetus ‎ →‎Miscellaneous: "Most likely" looks like OR; please cite a reference
• 15:5615:56, 3 March 2008 diff hist +395‎ Hasnat Khan ‎ update, with BBC link
• 14:4414:44, 3 March 2008 diff hist +14‎ First Arsch ‎ reference for alternative name please; "this was probably done" with no ref looks like original research
• 14:4314:43, 3 March 2008 diff hist +324‎ Talk:Ray Stubbs ‎ →‎Fair use rationale for Image:Ray Stubbs MOTD.jpg: the image has now been tagged for deletion anyway
• 13:0513:05, 3 March 2008 diff hist +36‎ Level 42 ‎ →‎Trivia: trivia, and unreferenced too

2 March 2008

• 21:0521:05, 2 March 2008 diff hist −329‎ Werther's Original ‎ it is clear copyvio to quote the entire lyrics of a copyrighted song; removed all but the last two lines
• 05:2905:29, 2 March 2008 diff hist 0‎ Snap-on ‎ →‎History: remove TM symbols per Manual of Style; wikilink King's Lynn
• 05:1305:13, 2 March 2008 diff hist +46‎ Artificial intelligence ‎ the redirect is from AI (caps) but the disambig is at Ai; hence redoing hatnote manually
• 04:4204:42, 2 March 2008 diff hist +1‎ Toyota Yaris ‎ →‎Options: typo
• 01:5601:56, 2 March 2008 diff hist +405‎ Talk:National Geographic ‎ →‎"...the United States, where membership ... was until recently the only way to receive the magazine...": new section
• 00:2300:23, 2 March 2008 diff hist +18‎ Adaptive cruise control ‎ →‎Available systems: A single sentence with over 30 examples is silly; changing to a subsection
• 00:1700:17, 2 March 2008 diff hist +528‎ Talk:Nuclear electromagnetic pulse ‎ →‎Just a thought...: new section
• 00:1600:16, 2 March 2008 diff hist +5‎ Nuclear electromagnetic pulse ‎ →‎Modern scenarios: copyedit

1 March 2008

• 21:2821:28, 1 March 2008 diff hist −182‎ Potteries dialect ‎ →‎Potteries Dialect websites: removed Port Vale chatroom link, as it is now gone