User contributions for 85.193.252.33

6 September 2016

• 17:1217:12, 6 September 2016 diff hist 0‎ Wide-angle lens ‎ →‎Angle of view: Misleading order: 24mm means 84°, not 64°

5 September 2016

• 19:4419:44, 5 September 2016 diff hist −12‎ Heterotopia (space) ‎ "neither here nor there" -> "irrelevant"; Use plain English - readability counts.
• 16:3816:38, 5 September 2016 diff hist +94‎ Wi-Fi ‎ pronunciation
• 16:3116:31, 5 September 2016 diff hist +86‎ Teresa ‎ English pronunciation
• 12:2812:28, 5 September 2016 diff hist −138‎ Opera Mini ‎ →‎External links: Some external links removed. They are good for Vietnamese Wikipedia, not here.

30 August 2016

• 15:2015:20, 30 August 2016 diff hist −3‎ LTE (telecommunication) ‎ a better word
• 08:0408:04, 30 August 2016 diff hist −3‎ IPhone 5c ‎ Undid revision - "instead of" is closer to plain English; Besides, look at WP:GUIDELINE; Readability counts - right?
• 07:5707:57, 30 August 2016 diff hist +3‎ Samsung Galaxy ‎ Undid revision 736844809 by 172.58.28.59 (talk) too big photo
• 01:0601:06, 30 August 2016 diff hist −3‎ IPhone 5c ‎ "eschewing" (?) No such word in my 20k vocabulary. Is this wiki for native speakers only?

28 August 2016

• 17:3217:32, 28 August 2016 diff hist +162‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎Casting (metalworking)
• 02:3402:34, 28 August 2016 diff hist +926‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎Casting (metalworking): answer 2

27 August 2016

• 21:3121:31, 27 August 2016 diff hist −1‎ Proof (truth) ‎ typo: an -> a
• 21:2821:28, 27 August 2016 diff hist −1‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎My purely linguistic problem.
• 21:2821:28, 27 August 2016 diff hist +416‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎My purely linguistic problem.: new section
• 20:4920:49, 27 August 2016 diff hist +11‎ Proof (truth) ‎ ambiguous definition
• 19:3419:34, 27 August 2016 diff hist +219‎ Thermite ‎ pronunciation - contradictory information online

26 August 2016

• 21:5721:57, 26 August 2016 diff hist +160‎ Exoplanet ‎ pron.
• 18:1018:10, 26 August 2016 diff hist +7‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎Casting (metalworking): ce
• 18:0018:00, 26 August 2016 diff hist +1,169‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎Casting (metalworking): slang?

25 August 2016

• 02:2202:22, 25 August 2016 diff hist −1‎ GUID Partition Table ‎ http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/misplaced-modifiers; "either - or" => "both - and"

24 August 2016

• 05:1005:10, 24 August 2016 diff hist +188‎ User talk:MjolnirPants ‎ →‎Your MediaWiki.xml script is very useful.: new section
• 02:2202:22, 24 August 2016 diff hist +288‎ User talk:FoCuSandLeArN ‎ →‎Thanks for the invitation.: new section
• 01:3401:34, 24 August 2016 diff hist +12‎ Metal casting ‎ "is being poured" -> "is poured", "prior to" -> "before"
• 01:2001:20, 24 August 2016 diff hist +499‎ User talk:Andy Dingley ‎ →‎Casting (metalworking): new section
• 00:5500:55, 24 August 2016 diff hist −30‎ Casting ‎ ce: You are right about "being", but what about the rest? Any caveats?

23 August 2016

• 23:3223:32, 23 August 2016 diff hist +24‎ Metal casting ‎ Not only "involves" but even means; keep it simple, and use plain English
• 23:0223:02, 23 August 2016 diff hist +2‎ Casting ‎ →‎Metal: ce: "allowing it" -> "it is allowed"
• 21:5921:59, 23 August 2016 diff hist −12‎ Casting ‎ keep it simple and use plain English; "which" -> "that" (restrictive clause)