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30 October 2010

• 03:0903:09, 30 October 2010 diff hist +559‎ User:SummerPhD ‎ →‎Articles I've created: I'm the director. Jed Eno. Fuck YOU. Tag: possible vandalism
• 01:3301:33, 30 October 2010 diff hist +53‎ Talk:Trevor Einhorn ‎No edit summary

28 October 2010

• 06:4106:41, 28 October 2010 diff hist +11‎ Trey Parker ‎ →‎Career: they came down "with two worthwhile ideas" not - "down to two ideas" - very poor english, Thanks
• 06:3806:38, 28 October 2010 diff hist +58‎ Trey Parker ‎ →‎Early life: corrected some commas, lack of last names for Trey's parents, etc. - thank you, again, appreciated, Jed Eno. : ) !
• 05:0505:05, 28 October 2010 diff hist +6‎ Thom Yorke ‎ →‎Early years: leaving him with - a drooping eyelid, rather than - "giving him" one - sounds better, Thanks, jed and noah eno
• 05:0305:03, 28 October 2010 diff hist −2‎ Thom Yorke ‎ →‎Early years: slight changes regarding early diagnosis, - to make it more child-friendly, Thanks, Noah Yorke
• 04:5604:56, 28 October 2010 diff hist +34‎ Lou Reed ‎ →‎Early life
• 02:4302:43, 28 October 2010 diff hist +44‎ Joy Division ‎ →‎History

27 October 2010

• 20:4220:42, 27 October 2010 diff hist −1‎ Billy Corgan ‎ →‎Personal life: endured already appears, it is the abuse he tasted = "bad taste" - thank you, Jed Eno, :)
• 20:4120:41, 27 October 2010 diff hist +10‎ Billy Corgan ‎ →‎Personal life: Corgan attributes this --? Corbin attributes these problems - again, I think it's just ambiguously weak, "this" - thanks, Jed ENo
• 20:3820:38, 27 October 2010 diff hist −5‎ Billy Corgan ‎ →‎Personal life: if this is to read like a magazine article on depression "he (has) struggled... NOT including BUT 'enduring' bouts" - ed.'s in (
• 20:3220:32, 27 October 2010 diff hist +2‎ Billy Corgan ‎ →‎Childhood and formative years: born in XXX, Illinois, the eldest --? born in XXX, IL as the eldest, reads more classically to me (for younger audiences) Jed Eno
• 00:3700:37, 27 October 2010 diff hist −5‎ Andrew Wiles ‎ →‎Early life and education: changed "once again" to "again" - the former being too sensationally morbid - Thanks, Jed Eno

25 October 2010

• 05:2305:23, 25 October 2010 diff hist +7‎ American English ‎ →‎Phonology: i think this page is a goldmine for the reconsideration of velvet.
• 05:2005:20, 25 October 2010 diff hist +13‎ Peter O'Toole ‎ →‎Personal life: This is juvenile rubbish.
• 05:1705:17, 25 October 2010 diff hist +36‎ Peter O'Toole ‎ →‎Personal life: Perfection. ;) merci beauCOUP
• 05:1505:15, 25 October 2010 diff hist +4‎ Peter O'Toole ‎ →‎Personal life: der
• 05:1405:14, 25 October 2010 diff hist +1‎ Peter O'Toole ‎ →‎Early life: Upon leaving school ~comma~ - i think the comma's more relaxed? Mersi bocu - diversifions... Jed Eno (3 Nev. st. syosset, ny 117911)

21 October 2010

• 00:5400:54, 21 October 2010 diff hist −2‎ Brian Eno ‎ →‎1990s: One word - spumanti... nerve nej, nej, nej... Jed Eno :)

14 October 2010

• 12:5112:51, 14 October 2010 diff hist +15‎ Phil Manzanera ‎ →‎Early years (1951–1970): Changed first line, second paragraph to read: (more interestingly) - "as a skyentist" - Jed :)
• 02:0202:02, 14 October 2010 diff hist +10‎ Maynard James Keenan ‎ →‎Personal life

12 October 2010

• 15:2415:24, 12 October 2010 diff hist 0‎ Dave Rowntree ‎ →‎Equipment: Corrected words out of order: "There's also a Roger's Dave kit" from "There's also a Roger's kit Dave used ..." Thanks, Jed Eno : )
• 14:2814:28, 12 October 2010 diff hist +1‎ Damon Albarn ‎ →‎Early life: Changed commas in bottom paragrpha, thanks again. Jed
• 14:2714:27, 12 October 2010 diff hist −2‎ Damon Albarn ‎ →‎Early life: No coommass - vice "His father, Keith Albarn" versas "His father Keith Albarn" - d.s. Jed E. :)

10 October 2010

• 15:4615:46, 10 October 2010 diff hist +2‎ Textile ‎ →‎Synthetic textiles: been, have been - from can - milk proteins have also been used.. thanks, Jed
• 15:4515:45, 10 October 2010 diff hist +1‎ Textile ‎ →‎Synthetic textiles: changed "can" to "have" - unsure of the value of Milk protein clothing - THanks, Jed E.

7 October 2010

• 19:5919:59, 7 October 2010 diff hist +1‎ John Waters ‎ →‎Other interests: "was a supporter" - not is, this is an encyclopedia, not an advertisement. Thanks, Jed

3 October 2010

• 21:5821:58, 3 October 2010 diff hist +1‎ Fountains of Wayne ‎ →‎Early years: I suggest that "The group" was formed, in the first paragraph, because the second paragraph begins, "The band" - & it is more intricate, thanks, Jed E.~
• 18:4718:47, 3 October 2010 diff hist 0‎ Alec Guinness ‎ →‎Early years: it is "shell-shock" - not shell shock, pay attention to the hyphen, s0rry - jed e.
• 18:4318:43, 3 October 2010 diff hist +15‎ Alec Guinness ‎ →‎Early years: changed "hated" to "was disinterested in" - where Guinness was disinterested in his mother, who married a so and so, - d.s. ac Jed Eno
• 18:2818:28, 3 October 2010 diff hist +2‎ Asa Butterfield ‎ →‎Life and career: changed "2 awards" to "two awards" - please, numerals 1-10 should be illuminated in word form most always... Jed Eno, zzz

1 October 2010

• 20:0820:08, 1 October 2010 diff hist −4‎ Daniel Craig ‎ →‎Personal life: "an apartment close to" I changed to "an apartment near" - it is that an apartment is not close to anything, but near many things. Thanks, Jed E.
• 20:0620:06, 1 October 2010 diff hist −6‎ Daniel Craig ‎ →‎Early life: "after a brief stay at Calday" changed to "after a stay at Calday" - too many words, I think. Thanks, Jed

26 September 2010

• 21:5421:54, 26 September 2010 diff hist +47‎ Thom Yorke ‎ →‎Solo work: Thom Yorke prefers not to spin himself as a "solo" artist, d.S. Jed E~
• 21:4421:44, 26 September 2010 diff hist +10‎ Peter Murphy (musician) ‎ →‎Personal Life: Murphy is a muslim who has lived in turkey for twenty years, day after day.
• 21:4021:40, 26 September 2010 diff hist −28‎ Peter Murphy (musician) ‎ →‎1990s: There being no source for verification - the question of "Islam" viewing this as objectionable, is not confirmed. Read (last sent.) "the Christian doctrine of the Trinity" Jed Eno
• 21:3621:36, 26 September 2010 diff hist −3‎ Peter Murphy (musician) ‎ →‎1990s: I think this sounds a little more zippy "an Irish catholic family" rather than an "Irish catholic household" - because, he converted in the 1990s... it is more egalitarian. THanks, Jed Eno
• 20:5420:54, 26 September 2010 diff hist +4‎ Morrissey ‎ →‎The Smiths, 1982–1987: If it's "the guitarist" Johnny Marr then it should be the "two of them" rather than the "two men" - sounds nice, for any age. Thanks, Jed Eno : )
• 20:5320:53, 26 September 2010 diff hist +4‎ Morrissey ‎ →‎The Smiths, 1982–1987: I suggest "the guitarist Johnny Marr" - to be only slightly more honorific - if it isn't good, let's consider it? Thanks, Jed Eno
• 20:4920:49, 26 September 2010 diff hist −1‎ Morrissey ‎ →‎Sexuality: Lyrics "give" - 3pP, not "gives" 3pS - check out the grammar - and this article needs editing, this is pretentious childish nonsense.

25 September 2010

• 02:0402:04, 25 September 2010 diff hist +12‎ David Byrne ‎ →‎Other artistic endeavors: David Byrne said it was good to embrace the current. It's that or be shocked to death. FoFF (Jed)

20 September 2010

• 19:5719:57, 20 September 2010 diff hist −451‎ Talk:Jonathan Rhys Meyers ‎ →‎Inconsistency & unnecessary info: discussion of whether personal life heading meets standards of privacy for living persons.

19 September 2010

• 20:5320:53, 19 September 2010 diff hist −1‎ Talk:The Rolling Stones ‎ →‎Inconsistent use of band's name: clarification
• 20:4620:46, 19 September 2010 diff hist +250‎ Talk:The Rolling Stones ‎ →‎Inconsistent use of band's name: I had an important thing to discuss about the beginning of articles on Well-known groups.

18 September 2010

• 17:4117:41, 18 September 2010 diff hist −25‎ Jonathan Rhys Meyers ‎ →‎Early life: Changed article to read more biographically and less sensationally - some commas, and some sentences out of order, basically. Thanks, Jed
• 17:3217:32, 18 September 2010 diff hist −1‎ Jonathan Rhys Meyers ‎ →‎Early life: I don't believe there should be a comma there - ("his mother's maiden name Meyers") - that's a complete phrase. no comma before Meyers. -Jed

17 September 2010

• 19:4919:49, 17 September 2010 diff hist +11‎ Simon Singh ‎ →‎Life and career: I thought the tone could use sharpening, from the description of an award WINNER to the description of an event and some subject matter, Thanks, Jed
• 14:4114:41, 17 September 2010 diff hist −13‎ Nutrition ‎ →‎From antiquity to 1900: Changed this from a sort of false ... introduction "The first nutritional experiment..." too coy - if this needs telling. Thanks, Jed E.
• 14:2514:25, 17 September 2010 diff hist +2‎ Thom Yorke ‎ →‎Solo work: commas ;) - "Yorke released his solo album, The Eraser, in 2006." Thanks, Jed E.
• 14:0414:04, 17 September 2010 diff hist +1‎ Headphones ‎ →‎History: Changed developed "Headphones developed..." to "originated" - developed occurs again in the next sentence, and the reference is unclear (transitive verb?) - Jed