User contributions for 66.92.161.127

30 May 2016

• 13:1013:10, 30 May 2016 diff hist −2‎ Tuple ‎ →‎References: typographical solecism

26 February 2016

• 15:3515:35, 26 February 2016 diff hist +1‎ Degeneracy (mathematics) ‎ →‎Convex polygon: verb number

21 February 2016

• 23:3323:33, 21 February 2016 diff hist +1‎ Wood veneer ‎ →‎Advantages of using veneers: typography—replacing plain hyphen with em-dash

2 February 2016

• 12:3912:39, 2 February 2016 diff hist +21‎ Golden State Mutual Life Insurance Company ‎ →‎Continued growth and expansion: added wikilink
• 12:3812:38, 2 February 2016 diff hist +28‎ Golden State Mutual Life Insurance Company ‎ →‎Continued growth and expansion: added link to Charles White
• 12:3612:36, 2 February 2016 diff hist +21‎ Charles White ‎ →‎Other: need to reflect more of his range

31 January 2016

• 03:3003:30, 31 January 2016 diff hist +431‎ Talk:Analogy of the Sun ‎ →‎Among excellent edits, one that obfuscates: new section

7 January 2016

• 12:3912:39, 7 January 2016 diff hist +3‎ Actor–network theory ‎ →‎Criticism: replacing punctuation as in original
• 12:3512:35, 7 January 2016 diff hist −2‎ Actor–network theory ‎ →‎Criticism: comma problems
• 02:0402:04, 7 January 2016 diff hist −2‎ Rhizome (philosophy) ‎ →‎As a mode of knowledge and model for society: second try
• 02:0402:04, 7 January 2016 diff hist +26‎ Rhizome (philosophy) ‎ →‎As a mode of knowledge and model for society: hoping to add a non-disruptive explanation
• 01:5901:59, 7 January 2016 diff hist −5‎ Ethnomethodology ‎ →‎Links with phenomenology: commas again
• 01:5701:57, 7 January 2016 diff hist −4‎ Ethnomethodology ‎ →‎Links with phenomenology: misplaced commas
• 01:4501:45, 7 January 2016 diff hist −1‎ Ethnomethodology ‎ →‎Theory and methods: spelling
• 01:3501:35, 7 January 2016 diff hist +6‎ Constructivism (international relations) ‎ →‎Recent developments: added abbreviation after first reference
• 01:2701:27, 7 January 2016 diff hist +1‎ Constructivism (international relations) ‎ →‎Development: closed a broken tag

27 December 2015

• 00:5800:58, 27 December 2015 diff hist 0‎ Virtual artifact ‎ →‎Virtual artifacts in digital environments: punctuation to remove comma splice
• 00:5400:54, 27 December 2015 diff hist −7‎ Handle System ‎ →‎Related technologies: "comprise" == "include"

2 December 2015

• 02:3802:38, 2 December 2015 diff hist +13‎ Pius XII, The Holocaust, and the Cold War ‎ Proper title for official promulgating the executive order

29 November 2015

• 21:0821:08, 29 November 2015 diff hist +624‎ User talk:Stephenb ‎ →‎A little help…: new section

20 September 2015

• 03:4903:49, 20 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Doris Kearns Goodwin ‎ →‎Personal life: Wikipedia style

19 September 2015

• 14:0214:02, 19 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Doris Kearns Goodwin ‎ →‎Personal life: Another comma problem!
• 13:5313:53, 19 September 2015 diff hist −1‎ Doris Kearns Goodwin ‎ →‎Career and awards: inappropriate comma before restrictive modifier (unless it was Burns's only documentary!)
• 13:5213:52, 19 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Doris Kearns Goodwin ‎ →‎Career and awards: missing closing comma after nonrestrictive modifier

12 September 2015

• 01:0801:08, 12 September 2015 diff hist +1‎ Provenance ‎ →‎Archaeology: compound sentence—comma is important for disambiguation

8 March 2015

• 03:0203:02, 8 March 2015 diff hist −1‎ Common (rapper) ‎ →‎1999–2003: Soulquarians era: Okay, it could have been poetic, but it doesn't read that way

23 February 2015

• 02:2902:29, 23 February 2015 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Lethe ‎ →‎Comments: (my error)
• 02:2702:27, 23 February 2015 diff hist +134‎ Talk:Lethe ‎ →‎Comments: just asking

26 January 2015

• 13:1213:12, 26 January 2015 diff hist +1‎ Parasitic impedance ‎ subject-verb agreement

22 November 2014

• 18:2518:25, 22 November 2014 diff hist +6‎ Harriet Elam-Thomas ‎ →‎Life and career: (minor) typographical editing

23 October 2014

• 11:2811:28, 23 October 2014 diff hist 0‎ Bert Williams ‎ →‎Solo career: minor - usage

6 October 2014

• 10:4910:49, 6 October 2014 diff hist −1‎ Major Arcana ‎ →‎Esotericism: minor—misplaced comma

28 September 2013

• 03:5603:56, 28 September 2013 diff hist −1‎ Voyager 1 ‎ →‎Exit from the heliosphere: "where" to "were" (corrected typo)

13 September 2013

• 12:3612:36, 13 September 2013 diff hist 0‎ List of TCP and UDP port numbers ‎ minor edit--misspelling ("rendesvous")

7 August 2013

• 06:0406:04, 7 August 2013 diff hist 0‎ Metrolink (California) ‎ →‎Safety enhancement after accidents: minor hyphen errors

7 July 2013

• 23:2823:28, 7 July 2013 diff hist −1‎ Space opera ‎ minor--spelling

21 June 2013

• 01:2401:24, 21 June 2013 diff hist +275‎ Talk:Prostate cancer screening ‎ →‎Information about racial disparities in incidence and outcomes: new section

9 June 2013

• 14:5714:57, 9 June 2013 diff hist 0‎ Codex ‎ →‎History: minor typo ("Philadelhpia" - > "Philadelphia") in reference to Eric Turner book

11 September 2012

• 06:4706:47, 11 September 2012 diff hist +15‎ Spontaneous symmetry breaking ‎ →‎Higgs mechanism: corrected link (Wikipedia reference is singular rather than plural)

4 May 2012

• 14:3014:30, 4 May 2012 diff hist +3‎ Giuseppe Garibaldi ‎ →‎Legacy: Punctuation

11 February 2012

• 04:0004:00, 11 February 2012 diff hist +258‎ Talk:Leah Chase ‎ →‎Leah Chase's art collection: new section

21 January 2012

• 16:5216:52, 21 January 2012 diff hist 0‎ Billie Holiday ‎ →‎Working for Count Basie and Artie Shaw (1937-1938): Wrong verb tense and inappropriate use of hyphens
• 16:4316:43, 21 January 2012 diff hist −1‎ Rocket 88 ‎ →‎Cover version by Bill Haley: Misplaced comma (the phrase is restrictive and thus requires no comma)
• 16:3416:34, 21 January 2012 diff hist 0‎ Howlin' Wolf ‎ →‎1950s: Misplaced comma and nonstandard possessive

7 January 2012

• 18:2018:20, 7 January 2012 diff hist +2‎ Loudspeaker enclosure ‎ "each other" required "sounds are," since it implies more than 1 (!)

5 January 2012

• 03:5503:55, 5 January 2012 diff hist +1‎ New Deal ‎ →‎Fiscal conservatism: corrected inconsistency in possessive form ("Douglas's")

31 October 2011

• 02:2802:28, 31 October 2011 diff hist +1‎ Sambucus ‎ →‎In popular culture: "eluding" (escaping) -> "alluding" (referring)

29 June 2011

• 17:0217:02, 29 June 2011 diff hist −1‎ Mr. Tambourine Man ‎ →‎Other covers and references: simple usage (no hyphen in "nonfiction")

10 June 2011

• 22:2222:22, 10 June 2011 diff hist −2‎ MiFi ‎ →‎Recall: usage correction ("documentated"? really?)

13 May 2011

• 15:3115:31, 13 May 2011 diff hist +586‎ Talk:Human papillomavirus infection ‎ →‎Co-factors in HPV-induced Cancers: new section