User contributions for 2605:A000:FFC0:D8:E8B0:35F4:5401:1C0D

30 December 2017

• 16:2316:23, 30 December 2017 diff hist 0‎ Ben Murphy ‎No edit summary
• 16:2116:21, 30 December 2017 diff hist +118‎ Ben Murphy ‎ →‎Early life: Add source
• 16:1516:15, 30 December 2017 diff hist −96‎ Pete Duel ‎ Need to use common name/article title, rmv unnecessary variations

5 December 2017

• 17:4317:43, 5 December 2017 diff hist −52‎ Eduardo Saverin ‎ →‎Career: subheadings unnecessary
• 17:3217:32, 5 December 2017 diff hist −4‎ Eduardo Saverin ‎ →‎Aporta
• 17:3217:32, 5 December 2017 diff hist −38‎ Eduardo Saverin ‎ →‎Aporta: not notable
• 17:3117:31, 5 December 2017 diff hist −11‎ Eduardo Saverin ‎ merge/standard presentation
• 17:2617:26, 5 December 2017 diff hist +5‎ Eduardo Saverin ‎ →‎Education: ce
• 17:1517:15, 5 December 2017 diff hist −163‎ Napster ‎ Unsourced for 17 months

29 November 2017

• 04:2804:28, 29 November 2017 diff hist −35‎ David Muir ‎ ce
• 04:0404:04, 29 November 2017 diff hist +13‎ David Muir ‎ Merge content, add wikilink, add year for clarity

28 November 2017

• 15:5215:52, 28 November 2017 diff hist +13‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎2015–16 reconstruction: clarity
• 15:4915:49, 28 November 2017 diff hist −1,451‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎2015–16 reconstruction: ce; far too detailed Tag: references removed
• 15:2715:27, 28 November 2017 diff hist −6‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Merge
• 15:2615:26, 28 November 2017 diff hist −28‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ No need to state name in consecutive sentences
• 15:2515:25, 28 November 2017 diff hist −100‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Unnecessary quote (and it's not found in either source)
• 15:1815:18, 28 November 2017 diff hist −34‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ ce; odd wording, rmv country per MoS
• 15:1515:15, 28 November 2017 diff hist −18‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎History: Replace odd wording
• 15:1315:13, 28 November 2017 diff hist −79‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Inclusion in lead not warranted; content detailed in the body
• 15:0915:09, 28 November 2017 diff hist −48‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎History: Only year needed
• 15:0715:07, 28 November 2017 diff hist −73‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎History: This is an encylopedia; rmv the flowery PR language
• 15:0415:04, 28 November 2017 diff hist −161‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎History: ce, rmv content irrelevant to this article
• 15:0115:01, 28 November 2017 diff hist −186‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Doesn't belong in this article
• 15:0015:00, 28 November 2017 diff hist −16‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ →‎History
• 14:5814:58, 28 November 2017 diff hist −65‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Unnecessary
• 14:5714:57, 28 November 2017 diff hist +2‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Logical placement
• 14:5314:53, 28 November 2017 diff hist −29‎ Tom Benson Hall of Fame Stadium ‎ Redundant; year is provided

26 November 2017

• 10:1910:19, 26 November 2017 diff hist −3‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ m
• 10:1810:18, 26 November 2017 diff hist +1‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ These honors should be presented together, and separated from the other content.
• 10:1610:16, 26 November 2017 diff hist +34‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ The three deaths are invoked, so they should be named; ce subsequent text to adjust for names previously stated.
• 10:0510:05, 26 November 2017 diff hist +1‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ wrong adjective
• 10:0410:04, 26 November 2017 diff hist +91‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ "The band's most popular incarnation" is invoked, so readers need to know who they are, particularly since subsequent members and some founding ones are included later in the lead; ce second paragraph to adjust for names already used in the first.
• 09:4909:49, 26 November 2017 diff hist −1‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ correct
• 09:4409:44, 26 November 2017 diff hist +2‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎No edit summary
• 09:3609:36, 26 November 2017 diff hist −30‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ For consistency; instruments should be indicated for either all or none, but not just a few.
• 09:3009:30, 26 November 2017 diff hist −23‎ Lynyrd Skynyrd ‎ comma, avoid parentheticals unless necessary, rmv rendundancy
• 07:5507:55, 26 November 2017 diff hist 0‎ Capitol Wrestling Corporation ‎No edit summary
• 07:5507:55, 26 November 2017 diff hist 0‎ Capitol Wrestling Corporation ‎No edit summary
• 07:5107:51, 26 November 2017 diff hist −24‎ Capitol Wrestling Corporation ‎ common name
• 07:5007:50, 26 November 2017 diff hist +211‎ Capitol Wrestling Corporation ‎No edit summary
• 07:3907:39, 26 November 2017 diff hist +7‎ Capitol Wrestling Corporation ‎ See WWE
• 06:1106:11, 26 November 2017 diff hist +199‎ Taylor Allderdice High School ‎ →‎Notable alumni: self-rv, verifies class year
• 06:0306:03, 26 November 2017 diff hist +7‎ Johnny Whitaker ‎No edit summary
• 05:5905:59, 26 November 2017 diff hist −26‎ Johnny Whitaker ‎ Unnecessary (and wasn't Keith's nephew; was the nephew of Keith's character)
• 05:5605:56, 26 November 2017 diff hist +4‎ Johnny Whitaker ‎ →‎Early life: better
• 05:5405:54, 26 November 2017 diff hist −76‎ Johnny Whitaker ‎ Undid revision 812140409 by Special:Contributions/2605:A000:FFC0:D8:E8B0:35F4:5401:1C0D self-rv, unnecessary per MoS
• 05:4805:48, 26 November 2017 diff hist +70‎ Johnny Whitaker ‎ Credited as Johnnie in Gunsmoke, Family Affair, and prior
• 05:3305:33, 26 November 2017 diff hist −1‎ Taylor Allderdice High School ‎ →‎Notable alumni: one word
• 05:3105:31, 26 November 2017 diff hist +288‎ Jerry Fielding ‎ →‎Childhood and education
• 05:2405:24, 26 November 2017 diff hist +34‎ Jerry Fielding ‎ MoS