User contributions for 24.215.162.198

18 April 2008

• 14:5114:51, 18 April 2008 diff hist −4‎ Ozzy Lusth ‎ punctuation
• 14:5014:50, 18 April 2008 diff hist +4‎ Ozzy Lusth ‎ Proper categorization and order
• 13:2313:23, 18 April 2008 diff hist +178‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ bylined and dated news story as reference
• 13:1913:19, 18 April 2008 diff hist −109‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: WP:VERIFY and related policies such as WP:RELIABLE don't allow IMDb, which is user-generated info, to be used as referencece - only as "for further reading" Ext links
• 13:1513:15, 18 April 2008 diff hist −9‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: Wikipedia is very strict about this: NO UNCITED CLAIMS ABOUT LIVING PERSONS. Give a published citation for last name

17 April 2008

• 15:4315:43, 17 April 2008 diff hist +53‎ The Infinity Gauntlet ‎ Pls stop going reverting to versions that are contrary to WPC MOS. The MOS is to state upfront "fictiona;" and "comic book". The month is "Sept." not "Sep." Why do you insist on non-MOS?

15 April 2008

• 22:5022:50, 15 April 2008 diff hist +4‎ Ajay Devgn ‎ Cleanup, formatting, asked for citations
• 19:2019:20, 15 April 2008 diff hist −21‎ Dario Argento ‎ Lots and lots of uncited claims and opinions. Only one footnote and a bunch of "for further reading" links
• 19:1919:19, 15 April 2008 diff hist −195‎ Dario Argento ‎ formatted per guidelines/policy (removing editorializing about the links) and removed link to page with no Dario content. Also, MOS is 5-6 Ext links tops
• 19:1519:15, 15 April 2008 diff hist +42‎ Dario Argento ‎ →‎Critical reception: phrase " 'serious' academic work" is interpretive & POV, esp. w/ "serious" in quotes. "Until recently" is WP:DATED vio. "crit. acclaimed" is WP:PEACOCK. "Unfort.": POV
• 18:4418:44, 15 April 2008 diff hist −34‎ The Ambassadors (Holbein) ‎ fixed WP:DATED vio, moved discussion of figures to later in article, after laying the basic description and groundwork

12 April 2008

• 02:2902:29, 12 April 2008 diff hist −1,924‎ James F. Gennaro ‎ Still unreferenced, but I trimmed and formatted and removed reams of POV and non-encyclopedic hype. Note to Gennaro's staff: Please read and respect Wikipedia policies and guidelines

11 April 2008

• 16:3316:33, 11 April 2008 diff hist +3‎ The Biggest Loser (American TV series) ‎ WP:DATED, moved side information down
• 16:3116:31, 11 April 2008 diff hist −320‎ The Biggest Loser (American TV series) ‎ uncited, repeitious, WP:TONE. This sentence gives the fact simply and succinctly
• 16:2816:28, 11 April 2008 diff hist +208‎ When Women Rule the World ‎ footnote
• 16:1716:17, 11 April 2008 diff hist −11‎ When Women Rule the World ‎ WP:DATED
• 16:1716:17, 11 April 2008 diff hist −1‎ When Women Rule the World ‎ sp, MOS
• 16:1616:16, 11 April 2008 diff hist +110‎ When Women Rule the World ‎ formatting, ref fixing, copy editing
• 15:5715:57, 11 April 2008 diff hist +358‎ List of television series canceled after one episode ‎ →‎Canceled after two episodes, seen back-to-back on premiere night: citations
• 15:4315:43, 11 April 2008 diff hist +34‎ Anchorwoman (TV series) ‎ External links are "further reading" links, not links to references used to write the article
• 15:4015:40, 11 April 2008 diff hist −2‎ Anchorwoman (TV series) ‎ →‎Criticism and Debate: MOS
• 15:3415:34, 11 April 2008 diff hist −1,448‎ Talk:Stop-Loss (film) ‎ →‎True story?: as below. Talk pages must abide by WP:NPOV, with no WP:CRYSTAL predictions, WP:SOAPBOX etc.
• 15:3215:32, 11 April 2008 diff hist −2,084‎ Talk:Stop-Loss (film) ‎ Talk pages must abide by same policies/guidelines as rest of Wikipedia, incl. WP:NPOV, w/no WP:ESSAY or WP:SOAPBOX. Also, talk pgs. are ONLY used to disucss improving article
• 15:3015:30, 11 April 2008 diff hist +22‎ Stop-Loss (film) ‎ →‎Synopsis: Wayyyyyy overwritten plot. Please see WP:FILMS for guidelines and policy
• 15:2715:27, 11 April 2008 diff hist −33‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ Needs more references, but has several now, eliminating need for "no references" tag
• 15:2515:25, 11 April 2008 diff hist +290‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ Details per interview in April 4 issue of Entertainment Weekly
• 14:3714:37, 11 April 2008 diff hist +241‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: interview
• 14:3314:33, 11 April 2008 diff hist +74‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: name of newspaper, name of author
• 14:2814:28, 11 April 2008 diff hist +114‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: last name per Reality TV World -- news source
• 14:2714:27, 11 April 2008 diff hist +247‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: additional last name confirmation from a news source
• 13:5413:54, 11 April 2008 diff hist +16‎ Beauty and the Geek (American TV series) ‎ →‎Challenges & Eliminations: Could we please get some basic factual information like airdates in here?
• 13:5113:51, 11 April 2008 diff hist −131‎ Beauty and the Geek (American TV series) ‎ →‎Cast: As below
• 13:4913:49, 11 April 2008 diff hist −33‎ Beauty and the Geek (American TV series) ‎ →‎Cast: Hey! Read the freaking rules and the Talk page: No uncited claims about living people, especially personal details like last names, without WP:VERIFY & WP:RELIABLE
• 13:4713:47, 11 April 2008 diff hist +248‎ Beauty and the Geek (American TV series) ‎ →‎Cast: last name with footnote

10 April 2008

• 21:5021:50, 10 April 2008 diff hist −67‎ Anamorphosis ‎ →‎"Anamorphic" effects in the work of contemporary artists: "throat-clearing" sentence -- not needed
• 20:1820:18, 10 April 2008 diff hist +27‎ Powered exoskeletons in fiction ‎ →‎In television and film: ital
• 20:1720:17, 10 April 2008 diff hist −234‎ Death Machine ‎ →‎Trivia: "likely homage" is pure POV, and WP:NOR speculation
• 20:1420:14, 10 April 2008 diff hist −8‎ Powered exoskeleton ‎ →‎Current research: Can't say "current", per WP:DATED
• 20:0520:05, 10 April 2008 diff hist +4‎ Metal Hero Series ‎ →‎Current status: fix for WP:DATED

26 March 2008

• 13:0513:05, 26 March 2008 diff hist −61‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ removing my erroneous edit -- only source of this was IMDb -- couldn't independently confirm, and Stop-Loss has her has Kimberly.
• 03:2503:25, 26 March 2008 diff hist +3‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ m
• 03:2403:24, 26 March 2008 diff hist +859‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ Added biographical facts WITH CITATIONS
• 03:0603:06, 26 March 2008 diff hist +18‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ →‎Awards: more uncited
• 03:0603:06, 26 March 2008 diff hist −505‎ Kimberly Peirce ‎ Deleted a completely POV, uncited, WP:NOR section on style. Removed fannish elements, asked for citations, formatted per MOR. Strongly suspect WP:COI in this

21 March 2008

• 14:3914:39, 21 March 2008 diff hist +30‎ Ivan Dixon ‎ added author name. Updated format for that of web site, not print newspaper
• 14:3314:33, 21 March 2008 diff hist +122‎ Ivan Dixon ‎ Then cite it, please
• 14:1014:10, 21 March 2008 diff hist +66‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: full citation
• 14:0814:08, 21 March 2008 diff hist −168‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ forum postings are NOT ALLOWED as reference sources! See WP:V#Self-published sources (online and paper)
• 14:0514:05, 21 March 2008 diff hist −115‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ →‎Contestants: "Source" for last name DID NOT give last name.
• 14:0414:04, 21 March 2008 diff hist −182‎ The Bachelor (American TV series) season 12 ‎ forum postings are NOT ALLOWED as reference sources! See WP:V#Self-published sources (online and paper)