User contributions for 24.130.12.36

5 August 2008

• 12:5812:58, 5 August 2008 diff hist +264‎ User talk:Deconstructhis ‎ →‎Style on Wiki linking
• 12:5412:54, 5 August 2008 diff hist +11‎ Microcosm Publishing ‎ A publishing company that doesn't know how to follow Wiki style guidelines??
• 12:1212:12, 5 August 2008 diff hist +5‎ Personal lubricant ‎ Registered trademarks are for use of companies to demonstrate that their words are registered. They are irrelevant in other, non-commercial contexts. I.e., Wikipedia. Hence, the two here are removed.

4 August 2008

• 12:0212:02, 4 August 2008 diff hist +222‎ User talk:Deconstructhis ‎ Wiki linking
• 02:5002:50, 4 August 2008 diff hist +1,720‎ N User talk:72.240.169.3 ‎ Reverting your edits.
• 02:3402:34, 4 August 2008 diff hist −15,882‎ Model Behavior ‎ I see the problem. Good faith edits by 72.240.169.3 that made article 4 times longer (you need to read Wiki policies, please, editor). Reverted to version by Svntnth
• 02:2802:28, 4 August 2008 diff hist +40‎ Model Behavior ‎ Summary is about twice as long as it needs to be, and is written like an essay, injecting person perceptions and unencyclopedic language "to hit on Eric", "her kindness compared to the normal way" etc
• 01:1601:16, 4 August 2008 diff hist −32‎ Truckee, California ‎ What land clearing might do.
• 01:1501:15, 4 August 2008 diff hist +3‎ Jaap Penraat ‎ minor edit
• 00:5500:55, 4 August 2008 diff hist −25‎ Talk:Truckee, California ‎ →‎What's appropriate for an encyclopedia
• 00:5400:54, 4 August 2008 diff hist +1,965‎ Talk:Truckee, California ‎ What's appropriate for an encyclopedia
• 00:1600:16, 4 August 2008 diff hist −554‎ Truckee, California ‎ Wiki is not a battleground for political points of view, and is not an advertising site. See discussion on this.

3 August 2008

• 04:5804:58, 3 August 2008 diff hist −226‎ I'm Blue for You, Boo-Bo-Bo-Bo-Boo ‎ Removes speculative definition of a "parody song". This is Original Research, and contrary to basic Wiki guidlines. Labeling this song according to the definition is also Original Research.

2 August 2008

• 22:0722:07, 2 August 2008 diff hist +386‎ Talk:A. B. Frost ‎ Color blindness
• 22:0322:03, 2 August 2008 diff hist −47‎ A. B. Frost ‎ Adds date for "A Tangled Tale", clarifies that photorealism was not a contemporaneous moment, adds photorealism link, marks broken links, removes overlinking per WP:CONTEXT
• 14:0514:05, 2 August 2008 diff hist −84‎ Coins of the pound sterling ‎ Removes multiple links to same Wiki article. Consult with WP:CONTEXT for various aspects of this.
• 13:5613:56, 2 August 2008 diff hist −291‎ Coins of the pound sterling ‎ Reverts good faith edits by 81.159.111.172
• 11:3911:39, 2 August 2008 diff hist +1‎ User talk:72.146.44.166 ‎ →‎Small changes in the way of getting started
• 11:3811:38, 2 August 2008 diff hist +1,844‎ User talk:72.146.44.166 ‎ Small changes

1 August 2008

• 06:4506:45, 1 August 2008 diff hist −96‎ Ulhasnagar ‎ "Made in USA" being Ulhasnagar is a good joke, but absoutely does not belong in Wikipedia. Editors, be advised, this article needs a rewrite. Please consult the style guidelines.
• 06:4006:40, 1 August 2008 diff hist +5‎ Sindhi cinema ‎ minor edit
• 06:3906:39, 1 August 2008 diff hist −232‎ Sindhi cinema ‎ I do not think it's relevant that no articles link to this. It would be an uncommon subject in the UK, US, etc. That tag is removed. However, it did need a copyedit.
• 01:4601:46, 1 August 2008 diff hist −10‎ Saxony (wine region) ‎ "decreased" is maybe a little better than "started to decrease" which seems to imply that the decreasing will go on.
• 01:1801:18, 1 August 2008 diff hist −47‎ Lockheed Martin F-22 Raptor ‎ Removes a few words which are on the verbose side, and in fact might be subject to misinterpretation.
• 00:3600:36, 1 August 2008 diff hist −83‎ Burt Rutan ‎ I'm going to be a little bold here, and speculate that it's unlikely Star Wars would have given Rutan any ideas at all. Rutan is a very experienced engineer, and Lucas borrows ideas from such.

31 July 2008

• 20:4720:47, 31 July 2008 diff hist +72‎ Glass ‎ The neutrality and accuracy of the Wiki link to engineers is disputed, and these statements, at best need citation.
• 10:1010:10, 31 July 2008 diff hist +554‎ User talk:Soaringgoldeneagle ‎ Thanks for the invite.
• 10:0510:05, 31 July 2008 diff hist +56‎ Bar trick ‎ This article seems to be a conflict of interest, see WP:CONFLICT, but also, sorry , this is original research, with a lot of subjective language. Needs