User contributions for 207.161.219.24

17 August 2014

• 15:1915:19, 17 August 2014 diff hist −4‎ Epcot ‎ →‎World Showcase: "include" suggests there are others not listed
• 15:0315:03, 17 August 2014 diff hist +2‎ Resistor ‎ →‎Printed carbon resistor: better to reserve "whilst" for time

15 August 2014

• 04:4304:43, 15 August 2014 diff hist −1‎ Killing of Sammy Yatim ‎ →‎Shooting: grammar

9 August 2014

• 18:2318:23, 9 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Annonaceae ‎ →‎Food: no good reason for quotation marks here

6 August 2014

• 02:5102:51, 6 August 2014 diff hist +13‎ OCR-A ‎ →‎See also: Westminster is not in fact designed to be machine-readable; it's designed to look "computerish" to human beings

4 August 2014

• 16:0916:09, 4 August 2014 diff hist −22‎ Ducking stool ‎ →‎Use in identifying witches: more men convicted than women; not "rare" unless you call the whole business rare
• 15:1415:14, 4 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Drapier's Letters ‎ →‎Background
• 15:0715:07, 4 August 2014 diff hist −2‎ Drapier's Letters ‎ letters patent are plural

28 July 2014

• 13:1313:13, 28 July 2014 diff hist −15‎ Stromboli ‎ "but actually" suggests the previous figure is incorrect

24 July 2014

• 13:4113:41, 24 July 2014 diff hist +11‎ Minor third ‎ rv good faith edit: "Western music" is ambiguous, could be as in "Country and Western," and there seems to be no specific article for "the music of Western culture," incredible as that may seem

19 July 2014

• 22:1322:13, 19 July 2014 diff hist −9‎ Cinelerra ‎No edit summary
• 20:3020:30, 19 July 2014 diff hist −3‎ Koto (instrument) ‎ →‎Construction: no contrast, not a "but"
• 00:1900:19, 19 July 2014 diff hist −5‎ Gill (unit) ‎ "and" makes no sense here - "The Barley Mow" is the name of the specific cumulative song we are talking about

15 July 2014

• 13:0013:00, 15 July 2014 diff hist −52‎ Twinkie ‎ →‎Return of Twinkies to US market: rephrase confusing wording, remove unsupported claim of "popular belief"

13 July 2014

• 22:3422:34, 13 July 2014 diff hist −169‎ MIDI ‎ →‎See also: not appropriate to use this section as "List of MIDI products and manufacturers"

11 July 2014

• 13:2513:25, 11 July 2014 diff hist +2‎ Radio clock ‎ →‎List of radio time signal stations: not what "per" means

10 July 2014

• 00:0700:07, 10 July 2014 diff hist −38‎ Transistor–transistor logic ‎ →‎Implementation: "most frequently" simply not true - the resistor is included in most gates, but leaving it out is a relatively popular variation

6 July 2014

• 04:5704:57, 6 July 2014 diff hist +17‎ Longwave ‎ →‎Broadcasting: otherwise it contradicts the rest of the article which describes many uses outside Region 1

4 July 2014

• 22:2822:28, 4 July 2014 diff hist −6‎ Galvanic corrosion ‎ →‎Overview: "exponentially" has a specific technical meaning and is better not used figuratively

2 July 2014

• 12:1812:18, 2 July 2014 diff hist +11‎ Expression-oriented programming language ‎ original synthesis

30 June 2014

• 04:3904:39, 30 June 2014 diff hist −4‎ Masako Katsura ‎ "trailblazed a path" is poor usage

25 June 2014

• 03:1303:13, 25 June 2014 diff hist −2‎ Insulated-gate bipolar transistor ‎ grammar

24 June 2014

• 02:4802:48, 24 June 2014 diff hist −72‎ Alloy-junction transistor ‎ not necessary to say it twice it a row.
• 02:2302:23, 24 June 2014 diff hist +12‎ 2N2222 ‎ there is only one collector connection; it has to be switched *with* something. From the data sheet, it's the emitter and collector that are switched.

23 June 2014

• 11:3111:31, 23 June 2014 diff hist +17‎ All your base are belong to us ‎ →‎Selected transcript: Japanese original, which I was looking for, conspicuously absent from Wikiquote - let's save the next reader the trouble
• 01:3701:37, 23 June 2014 diff hist −10‎ TO-18 ‎ that's not a "therefore"

15 June 2014

• 01:5401:54, 15 June 2014 diff hist −1‎ Dermatophyte test medium ‎ grammar

14 June 2014

• 22:0322:03, 14 June 2014 diff hist −177‎ Phase-shift oscillator ‎ →‎BJT Implementation: poor English, and apparently describing a diagram not included in the article, without which the description is useles Tag: section blanking
• 17:3917:39, 14 June 2014 diff hist −1‎ MacGyver (1985 TV series) ‎ grammar: an amnesiac (noun) is amnesic (adjective)

13 June 2014

• 00:5500:55, 13 June 2014 diff hist −170‎ Roland SH-101 ‎ rm gratuitous ad

9 June 2014

• 18:4118:41, 9 June 2014 diff hist −1‎ Omphalos ‎ →‎Symbolism
• 12:2512:25, 9 June 2014 diff hist −7‎ Titanium-sapphire laser ‎No edit summary

5 June 2014

• 02:2602:26, 5 June 2014 diff hist −1‎ Apito Dourado ‎ →‎Aftermath: grammar
• 02:2402:24, 5 June 2014 diff hist 0‎ Apito Dourado ‎ we're talking about what he said, not what he thought

30 May 2014

• 13:5813:58, 30 May 2014 diff hist −79‎ Great Molasses Flood ‎ →‎Cleanup: misleading - such comparisons normally mean working "full time", but this calculation actually assumes 24/7, which is not humanly possible
• 13:0513:05, 30 May 2014 diff hist −3‎ Cascode ‎ →‎Biasing
• 13:0413:04, 30 May 2014 diff hist −1‎ Cascode ‎ →‎Operation

23 May 2014

• 13:4013:40, 23 May 2014 diff hist −1,435‎ Andricus lignicola ‎ this is about galls in general and doesn't belong in the current article; also seems to be c'n'ped across many articles

22 May 2014

• 00:3200:32, 22 May 2014 diff hist −3‎ Shankill Butchers ‎ →‎Cut-throat killings: not a word

14 May 2014

• 02:3002:30, 14 May 2014 diff hist −1‎ Moog Taurus ‎ →‎Sound
• 02:2602:26, 14 May 2014 diff hist +6‎ 555 timer IC ‎ →‎558 Quad timer: "control voltage" is one thing; "control" and "voltage" are not two separate things

29 April 2014

• 00:2900:29, 29 April 2014 diff hist +7‎ 555 timer IC ‎ →‎Bistable: otherwise contradictory with next sentence

26 April 2014

• 14:1014:10, 26 April 2014 diff hist −1‎ Kohl (cosmetics) ‎ →‎Health concerns: if they're considered to be inferior quality, then they're not "reputable"

25 April 2014

• 00:3000:30, 25 April 2014 diff hist −5‎ Ādittapariyāya Sutta ‎ grammar

18 April 2014

• 17:0617:06, 18 April 2014 diff hist −10‎ Four Loko ‎ inappropriate for the lead to take a POV against the references, which solidly establish this danger. Marketing to underaged users is harder to prove and could be called "alleged"

14 April 2014

• 12:0512:05, 14 April 2014 diff hist −2‎ Phosphate soda ‎No edit summary

27 March 2014

• 12:0112:01, 27 March 2014 diff hist −1‎ Letter of introduction ‎No edit summary
• 12:0012:00, 27 March 2014 diff hist +11‎ P'tcha ‎ would that be the IUCN Red List of Threatened Jewish Foods, or what?

26 March 2014

• 23:1223:12, 26 March 2014 diff hist −12‎ Bald cap ‎ grammar

15 March 2014

• 21:5021:50, 15 March 2014 diff hist +1‎ Letter of introduction ‎ "unopened" would be nonsense - the point was if you wanted the bearer to be able read it, you didn't seal the envelope