User contributions for 202.169.214.106

28 December 2019

• 12:5012:50, 28 December 2019 diff hist +9 Sea kayak replaced clunky word
• 12:4412:44, 28 December 2019 diff hist −9 Sea kayak removed unnecessary word "actually"
• 12:4312:43, 28 December 2019 diff hist −6 Sea kayak tidied grammar
• 12:4212:42, 28 December 2019 diff hist +3 Sea kayak removed weasel word "special"
• 12:4012:40, 28 December 2019 diff hist +7 Sea kayak replaced "where" with appropriate word "which"
• 11:5511:55, 28 December 2019 diff hist 0 C shell fixed poor grammar
• 10:0910:09, 28 December 2019 diff hist −2 Knuckle ball (cricket) women play cricket too....

4 December 2019

• 11:3211:32, 4 December 2019 diff hist +4 Carly Chaikin fixed typo
• 11:3211:32, 4 December 2019 diff hist +7 Carly Chaikin fixed typo
• 11:3111:31, 4 December 2019 diff hist 0 Carly Chaikin fixed bad grammar
• 11:0611:06, 4 December 2019 diff hist +3 Clairton, Pennsylvania replaced nonsense/bad grammar

3 December 2019

• 14:2214:22, 3 December 2019 diff hist −6 Jane Jacobs replaced nonsense/bad grammar

30 November 2019

• 04:3304:33, 30 November 2019 diff hist +2 Pony car which sport? hockey, softball, billiards? added quotes to demonstrate ambiguity
• 04:3204:32, 30 November 2019 diff hist +17 Fastback replaced ugly language. "where"? where what?
• 03:5503:55, 30 November 2019 diff hist +7 The Terror (TV series) added precision to summary
• 03:5403:54, 30 November 2019 diff hist +37 The Terror (disambiguation) added anthology info to tv series
• 03:5103:51, 30 November 2019 diff hist +2 Ernest Godward boost means a temporary increase. fixed by replacing with "increase"

26 November 2019

• 16:4416:44, 26 November 2019 diff hist −95 Bloomberg Terminal removed weasel words "user-friendly", tidied grammar, removed redundant sub-clause

10 November 2019

• 15:2815:28, 10 November 2019 diff hist −7 Sonicare how does a person "begin rebranding"? they either rebrand or they don't. replaced circuitous, mealy-mouthed language
• 14:3614:36, 10 November 2019 diff hist −3 Predator (franchise) tidied grammar

31 October 2019

• 23:1023:10, 31 October 2019 diff hist −73 Autechre discography removed duplicate (NTS was in compilations and studio albums)
• 23:1023:10, 31 October 2019 diff hist 0 Autechre discography No edit summary
• 23:0723:07, 31 October 2019 diff hist +27 Template:Autechre added missing single (sourced from discography wp article)

29 October 2019

• 10:1810:18, 29 October 2019 diff hist +4 WeTransfer replaced jargon (cloud with internet). "the cloud is just someone else's computer"

26 October 2019

• 15:0715:07, 26 October 2019 diff hist −8 Phabricator removed redundancy
• 15:0615:06, 26 October 2019 diff hist −15 Debbugs fixed poor grammar

25 October 2019

• 12:5112:51, 25 October 2019 diff hist +11 House of 1000 Corpses fixed bad grammar

22 October 2019

• 11:1411:14, 22 October 2019 diff hist 0 Samphire fixed sloppy grammar

21 October 2019

• 13:2313:23, 21 October 2019 diff hist −3 Home counties split long sentence
• 13:2113:21, 21 October 2019 diff hist −1 Home counties replaced weasel word "practical"
• 13:1913:19, 21 October 2019 diff hist −1 Metropolitan Green Belt replaced ambiguous word
• 11:1911:19, 21 October 2019 diff hist +1 Colt Police Positive Special fixed sloppy grammar

20 October 2019

• 13:1613:16, 20 October 2019 diff hist +1 True Detective replaced ugly language
• 06:1606:16, 20 October 2019 diff hist +41 Zanata added software

5 October 2019

• 21:5321:53, 5 October 2019 diff hist −9 Cornish Assembly removed mealy-mouthed language
• 12:5612:56, 5 October 2019 diff hist −6 Revenge (British band) →Albums
• 12:5512:55, 5 October 2019 diff hist −1 Revenge (British band) fixed clumsy wording
• 12:5312:53, 5 October 2019 diff hist +4 New Order (band) fixed probable typo

4 October 2019

• 02:4902:49, 4 October 2019 diff hist −20 Check mark removed unnecessary words

23 September 2019

• 02:0802:08, 23 September 2019 diff hist +172 Ben Spendlove added sub fielder info, also schooling

21 September 2019

• 15:3015:30, 21 September 2019 diff hist −21 CumEx-Files removed unnecessary qualifiers/weasel words

19 September 2019

• 03:4903:49, 19 September 2019 diff hist −64 Abortion Legislation Act 2020 Changed "permit the killing of any child that has not become human..." to the neutral "to allow for abortion services"

14 September 2019

• 16:0916:09, 14 September 2019 diff hist −7 2020 Democratic Party presidential primaries how does a person "begin releasing" anything? either they do it or they don't
• 15:4615:46, 14 September 2019 diff hist −6 The Aeronauts (film) removed redundant word

30 August 2019

• 10:5210:52, 30 August 2019 diff hist +1 Steve Chandra Savale fixed typo
• 10:5210:52, 30 August 2019 diff hist −3 Steve Chandra Savale fixed typo
• 10:5010:50, 30 August 2019 diff hist +19 Naxal (disambiguation) wikified
• 10:5010:50, 30 August 2019 diff hist +129 Naxal (disambiguation) added info on Asian Dub Foundation single
• 03:5903:59, 30 August 2019 diff hist +1 Zoom! The Best of 1995–2016 split long sentence
• 03:5803:58, 30 August 2019 diff hist −62 Zoom! The Best of 1995–2016 split long sentences, removed unnecessary detail