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3 July 2023
- 16:4416:44, 3 July 2023 diff hist +563 Talk:Molly White (writer) →Second sentence: new section Tag: New topic
- 16:3416:34, 3 July 2023 diff hist −35 Molly White (writer) Rewriting sentence with the website as the subject, to achieve subject-verb agreement Tag: Reverted
- 14:3514:35, 3 July 2023 diff hist −38 Molly White (politician) Removing spaces. Even if she has other children, I'm not sure what the point is of saying "unnamed child". Tag: Reverted
- 14:2614:26, 3 July 2023 diff hist −28 Molly White (writer) I'm pretty sure that "critic" refers to Molly herself, thus Molly is the subject, and should be treated that way. The website's name can be included here if you prefer, but that seems unnecessary in the intro Tag: Reverted
- 14:1814:18, 3 July 2023 diff hist −86 Das Fürlines →Aftermath: The cited source does not mention Fish and Roses, and does not mention Smith by name. That part probably isn't important here, anyway. If this is restored, make clear what "Fellow New York City" refers to. Tag: Reverted