User contributions for 198.165.14.58

18 June 2010

• 15:5715:57, 18 June 2010 diff hist +95‎ Cape Race ‎No edit summary
• 15:5615:56, 18 June 2010 diff hist +104‎ Cape Race ‎No edit summary

10 June 2010

• 16:3716:37, 10 June 2010 diff hist +145‎ Expedia ‎No edit summary

9 April 2010

• 18:5118:51, 9 April 2010 diff hist +94‎ Kesha ‎No edit summary

24 March 2010

• 14:4514:45, 24 March 2010 diff hist −4‎ United States Navy ‎No edit summary

15 March 2010

• 14:2214:22, 15 March 2010 diff hist +69‎ Tommy Hilfiger ‎No edit summary

11 March 2010

• 17:2817:28, 11 March 2010 diff hist +194‎ Talk:Party in the U.S.A. ‎ →‎Auto Tune

10 March 2010

• 16:0916:09, 10 March 2010 diff hist +9‎ Spartacus: Blood and Sand ‎No edit summary

5 March 2010

• 17:4017:40, 5 March 2010 diff hist +4‎ Party in the U.S.A. ‎No edit summary
• 17:3917:39, 5 March 2010 diff hist +40‎ Party in the U.S.A. ‎No edit summary

18 February 2010

• 18:5218:52, 18 February 2010 diff hist +45‎ Party in the U.S.A. ‎No edit summary

15 February 2010

• 16:1816:18, 15 February 2010 diff hist +44‎ Party in the U.S.A. ‎No edit summary

6 November 2009

• 15:4215:42, 6 November 2009 diff hist −140‎ Section 8 (video game) ‎ →‎Reception: Removed the citation of VGChartz for sales. VGChartz is not reliable for sales numbers and should not be cited. Cite NPD sales numbers or not at all.

16 October 2009

• 12:1012:10, 16 October 2009 diff hist −1‎ List of PlayStation 3 games (A–C) ‎No edit summary

9 October 2009

• 11:5811:58, 9 October 2009 diff hist −101‎ List of Xbox 360 games ‎ Removed "Blue Dragon 2". No citation listed, Sakaguchi claims the current DS installment is the final title in the series. Re-add when or if the game is actually announced.

5 October 2009

• 12:3712:37, 5 October 2009 diff hist −164‎ List of PlayStation 3 games (A–C) ‎ Removed "Clown Combat". A TBA multiplatform game by a no-name company with a placeholder website that was announced in Fall 2006 and has had no update since. Re-add if it ends up being real.
• 12:1212:12, 5 October 2009 diff hist −179‎ List of PlayStation 3 games (A–C) ‎ Removed "Rengoku: End of the Century", a title with no information appearing on a dumping list of titles announced 4 years ago. It has never been heard of again. This title likely does not exist.
• 12:0612:06, 5 October 2009 diff hist −153‎ List of PlayStation 3 games (A–C) ‎ Removed "Dark Cloud 3". The game does not exist. The game never existed. Linking to some stupid placeholder data page on some no-name website is NOT good citation practice.

15 September 2009

• 12:5412:54, 15 September 2009 diff hist −103‎ Mistwalker ‎ →‎Xbox 360: Neither of these games exist. Lost Odyssey 2 does not exist. Blue Dragon 2 does not exist. Wishing something does not make it so. Re-add when/if they are ANNOUNCED and cite accordingly.

23 July 2009

• 13:5813:58, 23 July 2009 diff hist −418‎ List of Xbox Live Arcade games ‎ →‎Upcoming releases: Trine is not an upcoming XBLA game. Frozenbyte confirmed that while they want to do an XBLA version, it's not yet been approved. The citation was Joystiq jumping the gun.
• 13:5613:56, 23 July 2009 diff hist −579‎ List of Xbox Live Arcade games ‎ →‎Upcoming releases: Removed Megaforce. Unannounced, citation for game release is a 2006 financial document which claims 2006 release and Sierra has since essentially folded.
• 13:4213:42, 23 July 2009 diff hist −432‎ List of Xbox Live Arcade games ‎ →‎Upcoming releases: A TBA released unannounced upcoming game with no developer attached? Removed on basis of notability, and no source beyond Mark Rein saying it existed at the time of citation

17 July 2009

• 14:2914:29, 17 July 2009 diff hist −167‎ Amazing Island ‎ →‎Reception: Removed a vanity self-quote and a quote of an obscure site whose opinion on this game would not be noteworthy. Re-add a cited and noteworthy poor review, if necessary for balance.

9 July 2009

• 13:0813:08, 9 July 2009 diff hist −145‎ Lines, Vines and Trying Times ‎ Removed sections of introduction. Why? Uncited, uncapitalized, poor sentence structure, ambiguous sentence ("the US charts" without noting which US chart was being referred to), redundant information.
• 13:0613:06, 9 July 2009 diff hist −300‎ Lines, Vines and Trying Times ‎ →‎Chart Performance: "Half as much"->uncited, "droped"->not a word, "all the way"->POV, "perfomance"->not a word... I know 12 year olds like this band, but do they have to edit the Wiki article?

8 July 2009

• 15:4015:40, 8 July 2009 diff hist −82‎ Bill Murray ‎ →‎Personal life: Uncited totally trivial fact that was almost certainly added by someone who couldn't help from shouting "HEY GUYS I MET A CELEBRITY"

7 July 2009

• 13:3213:32, 7 July 2009 diff hist −406‎ Todd S. Purdum ‎ Changed "attacking" to "discussing", which is more neutral language. Removed the last sentence--I agree that criticism should be included, but "increadulous" is not a word. Re-write and re-add. Tag: references removed

18 June 2009

• 14:4514:45, 18 June 2009 diff hist −295‎ Laurie David ‎ →‎Global warming activism: Removed uncited adultery allegations that don't belong in the section "Global warming activism" even were they cited. Tag: references removed
• 14:4214:42, 18 June 2009 diff hist −100‎ Laurie David ‎ →‎Personal life: removed duplicate text

12 June 2009

• 18:1818:18, 12 June 2009 diff hist −33‎ Solsbury Hill (song) ‎ "and rising disabled Canadian megastar Justin Hines"--no, I don't think it's appropriate to write breathless POV praise of some random artist in this article.

13 May 2009

• 17:4217:42, 13 May 2009 diff hist −93‎ Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story ‎ →‎External links: removed a bizarre gibberish sentence that may be vandalism :p

23 March 2009

• 16:2016:20, 23 March 2009 diff hist −15‎ Mary Walsh (actress) ‎ →‎Honours: A speech was 'memorable'? Says who? The Wikipedian who edited it in? Erm, okay.
• 16:1916:19, 23 March 2009 diff hist −46‎ Mary Walsh (actress) ‎ →‎Biography: What strict covenant school did she attend? She attended my alma mater for high school, and while it was Catholic at the time she attended, it was hardly "strict".

23 February 2009

• 14:4314:43, 23 February 2009 diff hist −659‎ The Veronicas ‎ →‎Early years: Removed a section that really has nothing to do with the "Early years". Do we really need to know the usernames of fans that the Veronicas have sent thank you notes to?

7 January 2009

• 14:2914:29, 7 January 2009 diff hist +7‎ Way of the Samurai 3 ‎ Reflecting the announced 360 port.

5 August 2008

• 11:4911:49, 5 August 2008 diff hist +2‎ Wild Wild West ‎ →‎Reception
• 11:4711:47, 5 August 2008 diff hist −121‎ Wild Wild West ‎ →‎Reaction: "Reaction" should be "Reception", this should be two distinct sections, there were weasel words, and virtually everything needs a citation. Seriously, guys?

4 July 2008

• 13:4013:40, 4 July 2008 diff hist −272‎ Home Alone 4 ‎ →‎Timeline inaccuracy: Not that Home Alone 4 is a critical wikipedia article, but can we please stop having lengthy personal journal entries inside encyclopedia articles?

13 June 2008

• 15:5515:55, 13 June 2008 diff hist −126‎ USB mass storage device class ‎ →‎Device access: Wikipedia is not for patronizing, it's not a how to page (and this is not a how to article), and it should be written in a neutral encyclopedic tone.

16 May 2008

• 14:4814:48, 16 May 2008 diff hist −649‎ Home of the Brave (2006 film) ‎ →‎Release Date Problems: This whole section is written in an inappropriate tone for Wikipedia content. None of it is cited. Weasel words are used. POV issues. Poor use of English.

14 May 2008

• 11:1811:18, 14 May 2008 diff hist +2‎ Jesse Jackson Jr. ‎ Original sentence had "hard core", which I believe to be POV or at minimum unsourced, and was also gramatically correct. I also take issue with "pet issue" in the next sentence.

5 May 2008

• 16:5816:58, 5 May 2008 diff hist −65‎ Duce ‎ →‎History and usage: removing obviously stupid vandalism.

18 February 2008

• 15:2215:22, 18 February 2008 diff hist −19‎ Neil Patrick Harris ‎ The photo describes itself as "self-made". While I agree the photographer deserves credit, it is not the practice to credit the photographer in the main article; that ends up as more of an ad.

5 November 2007

• 18:4918:49, 5 November 2007 diff hist +8‎ Bob Welch (musician) ‎ →‎Fleetwood Mac calls: POV, weasel words.