User contributions for 190.144.34.146

11 January 2024

• 19:0619:06, 11 January 2024 diff hist +134‎ Larry Dolan ‎ →‎Cleveland Guardians owner: Since he bought the team, they have only had four seasons with 90+ losses: https://www.baseball-reference.com/teams/CLE/index.shtml So not "several". Tag: Reverted
• 18:0018:00, 11 January 2024 diff hist +12‎ Killing of JonBenét Ramsey ‎ Burke definitely was not awakened "several hours" after the police arrived. He went to the Ramseys' family friends' house during this time. Tag: Reverted
• 17:5317:53, 11 January 2024 diff hist −2‎ Riley O'Brien ‎ →‎Seattle Mariners: We probably shouldn't say .0 innings, because we wouldn't use decimals to denote parts of innings Tag: Reverted
• 17:4917:49, 11 January 2024 diff hist +20‎ Scott Oberg ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 17:4617:46, 11 January 2024 diff hist +9‎ Bailey Ober ‎ →‎Professional career Tag: Reverted
• 17:4317:43, 11 January 2024 diff hist +22‎ Trevor Oaks ‎ →‎Kansas City Royals Tag: Reverted
• 17:3517:35, 11 January 2024 diff hist +37‎ Lenny Webster ‎ This needs a source. At this point, I doubt this is true. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 17:2617:26, 11 January 2024 diff hist −433‎ Jake Westbrook ‎ You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant in an article about Jake Westbrook. Copy editing. Tag: Reverted
• 17:1917:19, 11 January 2024 diff hist −7‎ David Justice ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 17:1817:18, 11 January 2024 diff hist −592‎ David Justice ‎ His combined 2000 season stats should probably go under his second team, if anywhere. Condensing 2001 to one sentence and one source. Changing "A's" to "Athletics'", so as to avoid a problematic apostrophe placement. "has been named a three-time MLB all-star" sounds odd. Tags: Reverted references removed
• 17:1017:10, 11 January 2024 diff hist −264‎ Jerry Reinsdorf ‎ If we start with "Since purchasing the White Sox in 1981", Reinsdorf is the subject, and his own action should follow. It seems easier just to say "Reinsdorf purchased the White Sox in 1981". I'm not sure it's necessary to mention the White Sox playoff appearances in the intro of this article, but either way we should be mindful of subject-verb agreement. Also removing unneeded space between citations. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 17:1017:10, 11 January 2024 diff hist −15‎ Sean Casey ‎ It's not clear why the Irish politician shouldn't be listed with the rest. Also, if we're going to include those whose names are spelled differently, then the model should be included in the main section; otherwise, the state department head should be under See Also Tag: Reverted
• 16:4316:43, 11 January 2024 diff hist −26‎ Trevor Bauer ‎ Better juxtaposition Tag: Reverted
• 16:3616:36, 11 January 2024 diff hist −2‎ Wikipedia:Call a spade a spade ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 16:3116:31, 11 January 2024 diff hist −1‎ Fred Doe ‎ →‎Major League Baseball Tag: Reverted
• 16:2816:28, 11 January 2024 diff hist −2‎ Sam Dodge ‎ We probably shouldn't say .0, since we don't use decimals for parts of innings Tag: Reverted
• 16:2116:21, 11 January 2024 diff hist +11‎ Walt Doan ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 16:1316:13, 11 January 2024 diff hist −5‎ Timeline of Christianity ‎ Unneeded spaces Tag: Reverted
• 16:0316:03, 11 January 2024 diff hist +1‎ Wikipedia:Don't call a spade a spade ‎ →‎Focus on edits, not editors: semicolon instead of comma Tag: Reverted
• 15:4615:46, 11 January 2024 diff hist −1‎ History of Christianity ‎ →‎Centralization and persecution (1100-1300): Unneeded space

6 December 2023

• 22:2722:27, 6 December 2023 diff hist +103‎ Bartolo Colón ‎ It actually wasn't "just before the trade deadline", which is July 31. Adding source for trade details. Tag: Reverted
• 22:1722:17, 6 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Seth Beer ‎ →‎Arizona Diamondbacks: Plural Tag: Reverted
• 22:1522:15, 6 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Seth Beer ‎ Plural Tag: Reverted
• 22:1222:12, 6 December 2023 diff hist +1‎ Trevor Bauer ‎ Better juxtaposition Tag: Reverted
• 22:0222:02, 6 December 2023 diff hist −259‎ Jerry Reinsdorf ‎ If we start with "Since purchasing the White Sox in 1981", Reinsdorf is the subject, and his own action should follow. It seems easier just to say "Reinsdorf purchased the White Sox in 1981". The other details seem unnecessary in the intro, but if they appear there, they should be in chronological order. Tag: Reverted
• 21:5521:55, 6 December 2023 diff hist −15‎ Sean Casey ‎ It's not clear why that Sean Casey shouldn't be listed with the rest. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 21:4621:46, 6 December 2023 diff hist −30‎ John Smoltz ‎ Subject-verb agreement Tag: Reverted
• 21:3721:37, 6 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Thurman Munson ‎ Should be "RBIs", unless we're just talking about one run batted in Tag: Reverted
• 21:3421:34, 6 December 2023 diff hist +4‎ Dave Roberts (third baseman) ‎ Should be "RBIs" Tag: Reverted
• 21:2221:22, 6 December 2023 diff hist +87‎ Bartolo Colón ‎ →‎Montreal Expos: Actually it was over a month before the (non-waiver) trading deadline Tag: Reverted
• 21:0821:08, 6 December 2023 diff hist −16‎ Kervin Castro ‎ →‎Major leagues: It should probably be "A 0.00 ERA", since it is a "zero" rather than a letter O. However, we can just as easily say that he allowed no earned runs. Win-loss record seems unnecessary to mention since he was a reliever. Tag: Reverted
• 19:4519:45, 6 December 2023 diff hist +37‎ Presbyopia ‎ These three treatments are all discussed in the "Treatments" section, so should be listed in the sidebar. I think there is still excessive spacing and redundant citations, but I will leave that alone. Tag: Reverted
• 19:4519:45, 6 December 2023 diff hist −15‎ Opioid epidemic in the United States ‎ →‎History: It was not a rebuttal to the letter itself. The problem was not the letter, but the way it was misrepresented, as explained at Porter and Jick (even though that article needs to be improved, it is mostly clear on that point) Tag: Reverted
• 19:4519:45, 6 December 2023 diff hist +32‎ Mark Geragos ‎ The pardon was not requested on January 20, 2001. That is when it was granted. The cited source was actually a dead link, but you can see from the archive that Geragos is not mentioned: https://web.archive.org/web/20030206224333/https://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2003/01/25/eveningnews/main537972.shtml The new LA Times source does mention Geragos. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 19:2519:25, 6 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mike Mussina ‎ →‎1996–2000: One comma should have been a period, and the other should have been a word later Tag: Reverted
• 19:0819:08, 6 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Rickey Henderson ‎ Apparently this is supposed to be "RBIs", unless it's just talking about one run batted in Tag: Reverted
• 19:0219:02, 6 December 2023 diff hist +23‎ Jim Thome ‎ Apparently this is supposed to be "RBIs", unless it's just talking about one run batted in. Tag: Reverted
• 18:0418:04, 6 December 2023 diff hist −15‎ Sean Casey ‎No edit summary Tag: Reverted
• 17:5917:59, 6 December 2023 diff hist −4‎ Alex Verdugo ‎ →‎Boston Red Sox: I'm not sure whether it's wrong to put an s at the end, but since "RBI" appears twice above without an s, and logically it isn't needed since it stands for "Runs Batted In", I'll change "RBIs" to "RBI" Tag: Reverted
• 17:4017:40, 6 December 2023 diff hist −2‎ Thurman Munson ‎ →‎1977–1979: There shouldn't be an apostrophe, and perhaps it shouldn't even have an s at the end, since it is "Runs Batted In".
• 17:3417:34, 6 December 2023 diff hist −2‎ Dave Burba ‎ →‎Coaching career: Unneeded spaces Tag: Reverted
• 17:3017:30, 6 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Sean Casey (baseball) ‎ →‎Awards and accomplishments: Unneeded space Tag: Reverted
• 17:0617:06, 6 December 2023 diff hist −28‎ Travis Fryman ‎ If he's currently a hitting instructor, 2015 was not his final year in baseball Tag: Reverted
• 16:4916:49, 6 December 2023 diff hist +3‎ Omar Infante ‎ →‎Detroit Tigers: Missing word Tag: Reverted
• 16:4616:46, 6 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Greg Weissert ‎ →‎New York Yankees: Unneeded space Tag: Reverted
• 16:4316:43, 6 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Richard Fitts ‎ →‎Professional career: Unneeded space Tag: Reverted
• 16:3616:36, 6 December 2023 diff hist −568‎ Alex Verdugo ‎ →‎Boston Red Sox: Noting his stats for the entire 2023 season, rather than just up to June 22. Tags: Reverted references removed

5 December 2023

• 09:0009:00, 5 December 2023 diff hist +1,387‎ Wikipedia:Teahouse ‎ →‎Nonsensical reverts: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
• 08:5208:52, 5 December 2023 diff hist +1,387‎ Wikipedia:Help desk ‎ →‎Nonsensical reverts: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
• 08:2608:26, 5 December 2023 diff hist +1,375‎ Wikipedia:Teahouse ‎ →‎Reverts: new section Tags: Reverted New topic