User contributions for 138.16.32.85

15 May 2012

• 19:1419:14, 15 May 2012 diff hist +3‎ Blog del Narco ‎ →‎History: Minor grammar fix
• 12:3812:38, 15 May 2012 diff hist −48‎ Our American Cousin ‎ →‎Act III: Removed non-plot related detail
• 10:2710:27, 15 May 2012 diff hist −3‎ Sleeping while on duty ‎ Corrected comma usage
• 00:4300:43, 15 May 2012 diff hist −63‎ Kris ‎ →‎Blade: Copy editing

14 May 2012

• 05:2005:20, 14 May 2012 diff hist −1‎ Sic ‎ →‎Formatting: Removed stray apostrophe
• 05:1905:19, 14 May 2012 diff hist −3‎ Sic ‎ →‎Used to denote archaisms: Changed awkward wording
• 05:1405:14, 14 May 2012 diff hist −27‎ Sic ‎ →‎Opposition to over-use: Merged section with previous section
• 05:1205:12, 14 May 2012 diff hist −6‎ Sic ‎ Reordered sentences, other minor changes

13 May 2012

• 19:1119:11, 13 May 2012 diff hist +34‎ Panela ‎ →‎Comparative analysis of panela with other daily foods: Prose template
• 19:1019:10, 13 May 2012 diff hist +11‎ Panela ‎ →‎Nutritional Values Of Panela: section
• 19:1019:10, 13 May 2012 diff hist +24‎ Panela ‎ →‎Nutritional Values Of Panela: Prose template
• 19:0719:07, 13 May 2012 diff hist +24‎ Sugarloaf ‎ Moved tangential information out of intro into its own section

12 May 2012

• 18:2718:27, 12 May 2012 diff hist +3‎ Sandman ‎ Changed order of things at the top of the page
• 18:2318:23, 12 May 2012 diff hist +34‎ Rheum ‎ Added citation needed tag: some of these so-called common names sound very dubious to me
• 18:2018:20, 12 May 2012 diff hist +9‎ College Hill ‎ Reorganized page
• 02:2302:23, 12 May 2012 diff hist −3‎ Bill Alexander (painter) ‎ Removed ==

11 May 2012

• 21:2621:26, 11 May 2012 diff hist +34‎ Spy film ‎ →‎History: Added citation needed tag
• 20:5620:56, 11 May 2012 diff hist +29‎ Runway (fashion) ‎ Reworded intro paragraph
• 20:5620:56, 11 May 2012 diff hist +10‎ Fashion accessory ‎ Wikilink

10 May 2012

• 05:5605:56, 10 May 2012 diff hist −4‎ The Wheel on the School ‎ →‎Plot summary: Changed verb

9 May 2012

• 19:1319:13, 9 May 2012 diff hist −1‎ Crypteia ‎ Changed bullet-point list into a paragraph
• 19:1019:10, 9 May 2012 diff hist +11‎ Crypteia ‎ Changed sentence structure

8 May 2012

• 17:3917:39, 8 May 2012 diff hist +1‎ Rendering (animal products) ‎ →‎Rendering processes for edible products: Comma between parallel adjectives
• 17:3717:37, 8 May 2012 diff hist −2‎ Rendering (animal products) ‎ →‎Rendering processes for edible products: Replaced italics with quote marks

7 May 2012

• 18:3518:35, 7 May 2012 diff hist +21‎ Pub ‎ →‎Beer Houses and the 1830 Beer Act: Changed wikilink format
• 18:2618:26, 7 May 2012 diff hist +1‎ Pot-au-feu ‎ Fixed bracket problem

6 May 2012

• 19:0419:04, 6 May 2012 diff hist +96‎ Foil (metal) ‎ Added tag
• 17:5217:52, 6 May 2012 diff hist +209‎ Talk:Black brant ‎ Comment
• 04:3004:30, 6 May 2012 diff hist −1‎ Conductor (rail) ‎ →‎India

4 May 2012

• 15:5915:59, 4 May 2012 diff hist +1‎ Escape Routes (TV series) ‎ Space
• 15:5815:58, 4 May 2012 diff hist +402‎ Escape Routes (TV series) ‎ →‎Content: Added more description
• 15:5115:51, 4 May 2012 diff hist +211‎ Talk:Escape Routes (TV series) ‎ Comment
• 15:4615:46, 4 May 2012 diff hist +602‎ Escape Routes (TV series) ‎ Added new section describing the content of the show

2 May 2012

• 19:0519:05, 2 May 2012 diff hist +15‎ Pulsus paradoxus ‎ Wikilinked "inspiration"

30 April 2012

• 23:3223:32, 30 April 2012 diff hist −2‎ Yahoo! Answers ‎ →‎Quality: Fixed typographic error

28 April 2012

• 21:0221:02, 28 April 2012 diff hist +1‎ Stephen Sondheim ‎ →‎Broadway lyricist: "awhile" --> "a while" in prepositional phrase

27 April 2012

• 18:0618:06, 27 April 2012 diff hist −663‎ Son of a gun ‎ →‎Others: Removed redundant information (see preceding section)
• 18:0318:03, 27 April 2012 diff hist +1,026‎ Legrand G. Capers ‎ →‎"Bullet pregnancy": Added further detail
• 15:2415:24, 27 April 2012 diff hist +2‎ Supertask ‎ →‎Motion: Improved specificity of wording

26 April 2012

• 23:3923:39, 26 April 2012 diff hist −28‎ Garfield: The Movie ‎ Undid revision 488533424 by 67.221.94.100 (talk)

25 April 2012

• 16:5716:57, 25 April 2012 diff hist −30‎ Hunga Munga ‎ Roadside trash removal

22 April 2012

• 18:3818:38, 22 April 2012 diff hist −2‎ Olive ‎ Removed extra article
• 17:3117:31, 22 April 2012 diff hist −1‎ Motown ‎ →‎Motown Sound: Changed punctuation
• 04:5604:56, 22 April 2012 diff hist +373‎ Talk:High fructose corn syrup and health ‎ →‎Mercury: Comment

21 April 2012

• 03:0803:08, 21 April 2012 diff hist +1‎ Progressive Architecture Award ‎ Changed wording to be less grandiose and more descriptive
• 00:1200:12, 21 April 2012 diff hist −24‎ Sputnik Sweetheart ‎ →‎See also: Removed why tag, as an explanation is provided

16 April 2012

• 18:4018:40, 16 April 2012 diff hist +16‎ The Lady from the Sea ‎ Moved tangential information out of introduction and into section

15 April 2012

• 20:3020:30, 15 April 2012 diff hist +42‎ Pekingese ‎ →‎Peke legends: Unreferenced section tag
• 05:2305:23, 15 April 2012 diff hist +35‎ Ghosts (play) ‎ →‎Objectives: Added tone template

14 April 2012

• 02:1202:12, 14 April 2012 diff hist +7‎ Tsavo Man-Eaters ‎ →‎Modern research: Fixed grammatical error