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26 August 2013
- 02:1502:15, 26 August 2013 diff hist +235 The Newsroom (American TV series) No edit summary
- 02:0802:08, 26 August 2013 diff hist +74 Russian conquest of Siberia clarify. had made? was made? awkward possibly incorrect grammar
- 01:5501:55, 26 August 2013 diff hist +64 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones No edit summary
- 01:5101:51, 26 August 2013 diff hist −18 Jamie Campbell Bower No edit summary
- 01:4701:47, 26 August 2013 diff hist +8 Jamie Campbell Bower Never say "recently" in an encyclopedia WP:RELTIME
- 01:2801:28, 26 August 2013 diff hist +261 Talk:The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones →That's Quite A Sentence!
- 01:2001:20, 26 August 2013 diff hist +90 Star Trek: Nemesis Missing title.
- 01:1701:17, 26 August 2013 diff hist +81 Star Trek: Nemesis No edit summary
- 01:1401:14, 26 August 2013 diff hist +16 Public Enemies (2009 film) Template:Plainlist more standards compliant and accessible.
- 00:4900:49, 26 August 2013 diff hist +213 The Newsroom (American TV series) Proper direct link to referenced articles.
- 00:4700:47, 26 August 2013 diff hist +141 The Newsroom (American TV series) →Season 2: Each source should be properly referenced. A link to Metacritic is not good enough. Also Season 2 only started, caveat lector reviews are based on first few episodes only WP:RTMC
- 00:3100:31, 26 August 2013 diff hist +34 Zack and Miri Make a Porno WP:MOSFILM suggests "Critical response" as the section heading. copyedit. line break between critical overview and individual critics. (Ebert gets a line break, should he?)
- 00:0500:05, 26 August 2013 diff hist +24 Public Enemies (2009 film) Symmetry. Two column Reflist, two column cast list.
25 August 2013
- 18:3718:37, 25 August 2013 diff hist −115 Public Enemies (2009 film) Avoid unnecessary abbreviations. use named reference instead of repeating same citation.
- 18:1118:11, 25 August 2013 diff hist −24 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Nevermind the linebreak tags, try Template:Plainlist instead, much clearer and easier to read.
- 18:0518:05, 25 August 2013 diff hist −121 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Remove reference to fansite 'TMI Source' for Weaver confirmation.
- 18:0318:03, 25 August 2013 diff hist +198 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Fill in more citation details. (Seems harsh, excessive even, to hammer home the point that it failed quite to this degree.)
- 17:5717:57, 25 August 2013 diff hist +50 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Not required but is included in strict formatting. Removingwhitespacefromcastlistisjustugly. Undid revision 570147228 by 94.190.193.163 (talk)
- 16:5916:59, 25 August 2013 diff hist +383 Enduring Love (film) Empire poll. Sourced.
- 16:5816:58, 25 August 2013 diff hist −34 Nostalgia Critic →Reception: avoid jargon. use simplest language in an encyclopedia.
- 16:5016:50, 25 August 2013 diff hist +541 Talk:Enduring Love (film) →Comparisions to the book: new section
- 16:4716:47, 25 August 2013 diff hist +15 Enduring Love (film) Rotten Tomatoes number of reviews.
- 16:4516:45, 25 August 2013 diff hist −27 The Twilight Saga: Eclipse No edit summary
- 16:4316:43, 25 August 2013 diff hist −16 Haylie Duff Recently twice in same sentence. Recently should not be even used once in sentence. WP:RELTIME Link to actual Twitter post, do not just claim it is on Twitter somewhere.
- 16:3616:36, 25 August 2013 diff hist −13 Life Itself (2014 film) copyedit.
- 16:3016:30, 25 August 2013 diff hist −24 Kaya Scodelario No edit summary
- 16:2916:29, 25 August 2013 diff hist +210 Alex Pettyfer Twitter actual.
- 16:0016:00, 25 August 2013 diff hist +236 The Host (2013 film) Cinemascore source: Ropeofsilicon.
- 15:5415:54, 25 August 2013 diff hist +19 The Host (2013 film) WP:MOSFILM discourages articles from having Ratings sections. Needs a bit more than original research to show this is WP:NOTABLE. Citation needed.
- 15:5315:53, 25 August 2013 diff hist +259 The Host (2013 film) whitespacemakesreadingeasier. WP:MOSFILM Section heading "Critical response"
- 15:5115:51, 25 August 2013 diff hist −42 The Host (2013 film) Two other sources on talk page explain that making back production budget is a bad performance. Undid revision 570139756 by The Devil's Advocate (talk)
- 15:4215:42, 25 August 2013 diff hist −42 The Host (2013 film) Not any kind of success, see talk. Forbes specifically calls it a flop. Undid revision 570081892 by The Devil's Advocate (talk)
- 13:5513:55, 25 August 2013 diff hist +47 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Anchor for headings to prevent link breakage. Heading changed to what is suggested by WP:MOSFILM
- 13:5313:53, 25 August 2013 diff hist −268 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones TMI Source is a fansite. Remove reference. [See Talk] Composer Atli Örvarsson not in any doubt, reference is unnecessary.
- 13:1213:12, 25 August 2013 diff hist +38 Frozen (2013 film) spacing and stricter formatting of markup.
- 12:5612:56, 25 August 2013 diff hist +406 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Fill in citation. Forbes made their comments independently of The Wrap, rather than "reiterating" them.
- 12:4112:41, 25 August 2013 diff hist +4 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones using the word "plus" is clearer than using the symbol '+' Undid revision 570120599 by 94.190.193.163 (talk)
- 12:4012:40, 25 August 2013 diff hist +45 The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones Unexplained stripping of line breaks. Undid revision 570120320 by 94.190.193.163 (talk)
- 03:4003:40, 25 August 2013 diff hist −14 Star Trek: Nemesis Change warning, it has been ignored before, at least this wording tells editors what to check. WP:VERIFY
- 03:3403:34, 25 August 2013 diff hist −20 Star Trek: Nemesis do not change? match the words actually used by the source Metacritic
- 03:0303:03, 25 August 2013 diff hist +15 Chase Masterson WP:RELTIME avoid saying "recent"
- 02:5302:53, 25 August 2013 diff hist +426 Talk:The Captains (film) No edit summary
- 02:5002:50, 25 August 2013 diff hist +312 Talk:The Captains (film) Very brief appearances
- 02:4602:46, 25 August 2013 diff hist −120 The Captains (film) MOS:BOLD no need for bold in cast list.
- 02:3602:36, 25 August 2013 diff hist +328 User talk:ClueBot Commons →Ham and spam: new section
- 02:3302:33, 25 August 2013 diff hist +18 You're Next Rotten Tomatoes gives a score based on a number of reviews, which gives context. Dates are irrelevant. WP:RTMC
- 02:2702:27, 25 August 2013 diff hist −78 Patrick Stewart WP:RELTIME avoid saying "recent"
- 01:3901:39, 25 August 2013 diff hist −4 The World of Suzie Wong WP:RELTIME Nothing stays "new" in an encyclopedia. Avoid.
- 00:5800:58, 25 August 2013 diff hist −1,240 The Mortal Instruments →Film adaptations: Edit for brevity, main article has it covered. Say what it is, do not waste time saying what is it not.
- 00:5600:56, 25 August 2013 diff hist −218 City of Lost Souls (novel) ce brevity. word count seems long.