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Just some followup requests after last month, organized by section (I have a COI and am not editing page directly for that reason). A few facts still outdated, some typos, a few wording recommendations were things sounded awkward. Thank you kindly for considering helping :) [[User:JeanetteM2|JeanetteM2]] ([[User talk:JeanetteM2|talk]]) 01:59, 14 March 2021 (UTC) |
Just some followup requests after last month, organized by section (I have a COI and am not editing page directly for that reason). A few facts still outdated, some typos, a few wording recommendations were things sounded awkward. Thank you kindly for considering helping :) [[User:JeanetteM2|JeanetteM2]] ([[User talk:JeanetteM2|talk]]) 01:59, 14 March 2021 (UTC) |
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COI Requests for Jardine Matheson
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A number of stats need to be updated, mostly. As I have a financial COI with Jardine Matheson, I'm not editing the page itself but instead requesting an interested volunteer(s) review the changes, and if they agree, implement them directly. Thank you :) JeanetteM2 (talk) 01:05, 1 February 2021 (UTC)
Request - Infobox Changes
Key People Outdated
Key people in infobox have changed:
Remove:
- Sir Henry Keswick (chairman)
- Ben Keswick (MD)
- Adam Keswick (DMD)
Add:
- Ben Keswick (executive chairman)
- John Witt (managing director)
- Sir Henry Keswick (chairman emeritus)
Link: https://www.jardines.com/en/group/directors.html
Add Astra as Subsidiary
As a major holding under Jardine Cycle & Carriage, Astra International could be added to the subsidiary list in the infobox. Not sure why it's not already there?
Stats Update for 2019
- Revenue:
US$40.9 billion (2019)
- Number of employees: 464,000 (2019)
Link (page 3): https://www.jardines.com/assets/files/Investors/Reports/matheson/jm-ar2019.pdf
Net Income Update for 2019
- Net income:
$2.84 billion
Link: https://www.morningstar.com/stocks/xlon/jar/financials
Product Removal of Financial Services
The parent company (through Astra) sold its stake in Bank Permanta in 2020.
- Products - Remove "financial services"
Product Addition of Automotive
The parent company (through Jardine Strategic) also bought into the Zhongshen Group, a motor dealership.
- Products - change "auto & truck parts" to the broader "automotive"
Link: https://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052702304027204579331562500901326
Request - Infobox/Page Changes - Cut Subsidiary
Jardine Lloyd Thompson is no longer a subsidiary after being acquired by Marsh & McLennan in 2019.
Changes needed:
- Removing Jardine Lloyd Thompson from the infobox (or marking as "former")
- Removing it from the lead
- Adding the subsidiary's sale in the "history" section, maybe "In 2018, Jardines sold its 41% interest in Jardine Lloyd Thompson to Marsh and McLennan Companies."
- Deleting the "Jardine Lloyd Thompson" section from "subsidiaries" heading, or maybe moving it under a new "former subsidiaries" heading
Request - Lead Paragraph Changes
Update of Profit Percentages
Pretty much all the numbers/stats look like they were added around 2010, or some in 2013. Simple updates:
In 2nd para in lead, "41 percent of the company profits were still earned in China," could be updated to 58 percent in 2019
Link (page 9): https://www.jardines.com/assets/files/Investors/Reports/matheson/jm-ar2019.pdf
Fortune 500 Update
In the 3nd para in lead, switch 2013 Fortune ranking with "Jardine Matheson is a Fortune Global 500 company."
Link: https://fortune.com/company/jardine-matheson/global500/
Request - Jardine Pacific Section
Jardine Shipping Services was recently sold to Connexus, and the mention could be removed from the Jardine Pacific section.
Link: https://www.ttgasia.com/2020/07/22/connexus-takes-over-jardines-travel-management-business/
Request - Hongkong Land Section
Square feet in this section is outdated, in the second sentence, need to change 5,000,000 square feet (45,000 m2) to "9,140,000 square feet (850,000 m2)"
Link: https://www.hkland.com/en/about-us/corporate-profile
Request - Corporate Structure Section
1st Paragraph changes
A few roles have changed and now need to be worded in the past tense in the first paragraph.
- In first sentence, it needs an update for the chairman retiring, so maybe simplify to: "Henry Keswick, the company's Tai-pan from 1970 (aged 31) to 1975 and the 6th Keswick to be Tai-pan of the company, is chairman emeritus."
Link: https://www.jardines.com/en/group/directors.html
- 2nd sentence, about the brother Simon, change "is the 7th Keswick to be Tai-pan" to "was the 7th Keswick to be Tai-Pan."
- 4th sentence, change content to "Ben Keswick, son of Simon, is executive chairman of Jardine Matheson Group and from 2012 to 2020 was Tai-pan."
- Fifth sentence, change to: "Adam Keswick, son of Sir Chips Keswick, is an executive director."
Link: https://www.jardines.com/en/group/directors.html
Director Updates
As of 2021, the directors of Jardine Matheson Holdings are:
- Ben Keswick, executive chairman
- John Witt, managing director
- Y.K. Pang
- Graham Baker
- Stuart Gulliver
- David Hsu
- Julian Hui
- Adam Keswick
- Alex Newbigging
- Anthony Nightingale
- Jeremy Parr
- Percy Weatherall
- Michael Wei Kuo Wu
Link: https://www.jardines.com/en/group/directors.html
Also, Neil McNamara is no longer company secretary , and since the role is minor, might as well remove the sentence about him entirely.
Also, Lord Sasson is no longer involved, so cut that section or move it to history?
Link: https://sg.finance.yahoo.com/news/brief-jardine-matheson-holdings-says-105914487.html
Scottish Leadership Section
Same as with infobox change, number of employees has increased to 464,000 (2019)
Link (page 3): https://www.jardines.com/assets/files/Investors/Reports/matheson/jm-ar2019.pdf
- @JeanetteM2:
Done Edit request accepted. ~ Ase1estecharge-paritytime 01:08, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
- @Aseleste: Oh wow, thank you so much! :) JeanetteM2 (talk) 18:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
COI Requests for Jardine Matheson (2 of 2)
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Just some followup requests after last month, organized by section (I have a COI and am not editing page directly for that reason). A few facts still outdated, some typos, a few wording recommendations were things sounded awkward. Thank you kindly for considering helping :) JeanetteM2 (talk) 01:59, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Request - Intro Para Changes
- Typo: 2nd sentence missing an "a" before "primary listing"
- Remove
Jardine Lloyd Thompson
from subsidiary list in 3rd sentence (it was sold)
- Replace
It sponsors the Jardine Scholarship.
withIt set up the Jardine Scholarship in 1982 and established MINDSET, a mental health-focused charity in 2002.
- Link 1: https://www.bangkokpost.com/life/social-and-lifestyle/1352983/the-chosen-one
- Link 2: https://www.scmp.com/article/711667/breaking-mental-health-barriers
- Cut or move 2nd to last sentence, as it randomly singles out the company's size 8 years ago:
In 2013, both Jardine Matheson and Jardine Strategic were among the top 200 publicly traded companies in the world, as valued by market capitalisation.
Request - Post-WWII Changes
To add details from source, please replace this 1st sentence: In 1961, after the firm's flotation,[15] the landmark...
with The firm [[initial public offering|listed]] in Hong Kong in 1961.<ref name="ARCHUB">{{cite web|url=http://archiveshub.ac.uk/features/03021205.html|title=Jardine Matheson Archives|publisher=[[Archives Hub]]|access-date=13 June 2011|url-status=dead|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20110929001710/http://archiveshub.ac.uk/features/03021205.html|archive-date=29 September 2011}}</ref> The landmark...
Request - 1st Century Operations
Cut Jardine Lloyd Thompson
from 2nd sentence listing current subsidiaries (it was sold).
Request - Dairy Farm Changes
- 2nd sentence
Reword The Dairy Farm group's retail operations range from supermarkets, hypermarkets and health and beauty to convenience and home furnishings stores, and operate under well-known local brands.
as The Dairy Farm group's retail operations range from grocery retail and health and beauty stores to convenience and home furnishings, operating under a number of well-known local brands.
- Fourth sentence
- 4th sentence listing supermarkets: Add
[[Yonghui]]
- Link: https://www.reuters.com/article/yonghui-dairyfarm-idUSL3N10I5JV20150807
- Alt link: https://www.ft.com/content/e1d4d1da-2208-11e4-9d4a-00144feabdc0
- Please also add
MarketPlace
- Remove:
Shop n Save
- Switch confusing
Giant hypermarkets
withhypermarkets under the Giant brand
Request - Mandarin Oriental
Final sentence, change from 74% to 79%
Request - Jardine Cycle
- 3rd sentence, replace the number in
employs some 201,000 people
with250,000
and add Myanmar and Thailand
- 4th sentence: add Myanmar as a country where the subsidiary operates
Request - Astra International Changes
- Replace the 1st sentence,
Astra is Southeast Asia's largest independent automotive group.
with the more broad and accurate;Astra is a diversified business group. The largest independent automotive group in Southeast Asia, it has seven primary businesses in Indonesia.
- In 2nd to last sentence, after
heavy equipment sales,
addand also general and life insurance.
- Final sentence, remove
The group is also involved in retail banking through a stake in PT Bank Permata Tbk.
Request - Corporate Structure
- Change 4th sentence so it isn't missing the last Tai-pan:
The 5th generation of Keswicks are also active within the organisation, Adam Keswick, son of Sir Chips Keswick is Deputy managing director.
toThe 5th generation of Keswicks are also active within the organisation, Ben Keswick, son of Simon, is executive chairman of Jardine Matheson Group and from 2012 to 2021 was Tai-pan. Adam Keswick, son of Sir Chips Keswick, is an executive director.
- Final sentence, change
almost totally
to the less surferyfundamentally since its foundation