Talk:K-49 (Kansas highway)/GA1
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Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 04:57, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
I've reviewed a few of these, and they're relatively quick to do, so I'll go ahead and do a few more. Comments to come in the next day or so. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 04:57, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- I've left comments about my concerns below, so I'll place this on hold for you to address them. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:33, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- @PCN02WPS: Everything should be fixed now, let me know if I missed anything -420Traveler (talk) 22:17, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, happy to pass! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 23:27, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- @PCN02WPS: Everything should be fixed now, let me know if I missed anything -420Traveler (talk) 22:17, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Lead/infobox
Looks like it'd make more sense to have the citation for "1927-present" after "present" rather than after "1927"
- I'm not able to add a reference for present, but the reference here refers to the establishment date. -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Good point. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 23:21, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not able to add a reference for present, but the reference here refers to the establishment date. -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "U.S. Highway 81" → The page title references "U.S. Route 81", should this be changed here?
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "Before state highways were numbered in Kansas there were auto trails." → comma after "Kansas"
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Even though it's linked in the infobox, you could probably link Kansas Department of Transportation
Fixed I agree -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "Then by 1928,..." → comma after "Then"
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Route description
- "The highway continues north to an at-grade crossing with a BNSF Railway track then reaches an intersection with US-160." → add a comma after "track", and perhaps change to "and then".
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Link the first mention of "at-grade crossing" to Intersection (road)#At grade railways
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "The highway continues north, crossing Slate Creek, before crossing into Sedgwick County." → a bit repetitive (emphasis is mine), consider rewording to eliminate one instance of "crossing"
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "K-49 soon enters Viola as Grice Street. The highway soon exits the city..." → "soon" sounds like future tense and sounds a bit out of place to me
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
History
- "The southern terminus..." → specify that this is the southern terminus of K-49, rather than the southern terminus of the auto trail system as a whole
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "Then zig-zagged northeastward from there to Wichita." → sentence fragment
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:15, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- "In a resolution approved on December 10, 1957 resolution, the overlap..." → remove bolded word but keep the comma after "December 10, 1957," per MOS:DATECOMMA
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 22:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)