Talk:K-170 (Kansas highway)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
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Bolded items indicate things likely worth fixing in other pages, since you have so many similar ones.
Lead
- Add commas after
north of Emporia
andrenumbered to K-99
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
Route description
- Add a comma after "farmlands" in
flat rural farmlands and after about
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add "the" before "Neosho River"
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after
After crossing Cable Creek
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Commas after
At this point
andFrom this point
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
two lane
should be "two lanes"
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Consolidate the two NHS sentences; does the definition need to be in every page if the term is wikilinked?
- I agree, so I changed it a little, let me know if not ok -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
History
K-170 was commissioned as K-70 by 1930, to a highway
— unclear what "to" indicates as a preposition here
- not sure what to change it to? -420Traveler (talk) 04:54, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
three state
should be hyphenated, maybe with a comma after
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Comma after
December 12, 1945
andOctober 23, 1946
(MOS:DATECOMMA). You can avoid excessive commas by switching "December 12, 1945, resolution," to "resolution on December 12, 1945,".
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Merge the last two sentences
- Should be fixed now. -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
Other notes
- Use IABot to archive sources.
- I'm not sure how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Mixed date format in citations. The User:Ohconfucius/script/MOSNUM dates.js date format script will fix this and also catch the GEOCOMMA errors. Consider using it regularly!
Fixed -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- No images.
- I checked flickr and there aren't any. Next month I will be travelling through the are and will take and add pictures. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
@420Traveler: On hold. Not that much to change. Some of these are things you should consider for all your pages. Not going to go after the "US-XX" format for Kansas since that's a project standards issue as identified earlier. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: Most issues are fixed, just had a couple questions. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- 420Traveler, the link to the bot is [1] — check the checkbox. You'll need to authenticate with your Wikipedia account. You can also do a list (say, all Kansas highways) at [2]. I made the other fix; let me know if that works. No images is fine, I was just noting it. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sammi Brie, It looks good. Also thanks, I figured out how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 05:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- It's ready, 420Traveler. Consider going through all your GAs and GANs and archiving the sources. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:02, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sammi Brie, It looks good. Also thanks, I figured out how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 05:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
- 420Traveler, the link to the bot is [1] — check the checkbox. You'll need to authenticate with your Wikipedia account. You can also do a list (say, all Kansas highways) at [2]. I made the other fix; let me know if that works. No images is fine, I was just noting it. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)