Talk:Ester Peony/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- Delink Canada per MOS:OVERLINK
Done
- "Peony started to compose music for Romanian artists before gaining recognition for her YouTube covers in 2015." - better; before gaining recognition for posting covers on YouTube in 2015.
Done
Early life and career
- "There, she showed special interest in music " - how about showed a particular interest or a similarily worded sentence?
Done
- "under her mononym Ester in the winter of 2014." - try to avoid using seasons in a time frame per MOS:SEASON
Done
- "which was playlisted by native radio and television stations." - does the text in bold refer to national and/or local radio/television stations?
Done It refers to national stations; I changed that now.
Artistry and personal life
- "Her stage name features the mentioning of" - mentions
Done
- "In turn, the singer's first name Ester has an Arabic background could mean "star" in Old Persian " - that could mean
Done
This is nice and neat article on Peony. Nothing too major to be addressed in this review. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you very much for the review :) I think I've addressed everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:14, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Lovely. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you very much for the review :) I think I've addressed everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:14, 4 August 2019 (UTC)