Talk:2011 Food City 250
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:2011 Food City 250/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 14:26, 7 August 2019 (UTC)
I'll take this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 14:26, 7 August 2019 (UTC)
Initial review
Lead
- Clint Bowyer linked in both the first and second paragraphs.
- he was not successful > he was unsuccessful?
- "Joe Gibbs's No. 60 team increased their advantage over the No. 60 team of Jack Roush", can they both be the same number?
Background
- "Roush's No. 6 teams" > team?
- "There were one driver change heading into the race", were > was
Practice and qualification
- "was held in the morning of August 26", should that be on the morning of...?
- "With a time of 16.020 seconds", do we need to go to three decimal places if its a 0?
- "T. J. Bell accidentally reversed on pit road", something missing here. "On the pit road", " in the pit road" or something else?
- "who cut his head" > who also suffered a cut to his head?
Race
- "He began closing the gap to Kyle Busch", no need to suddenly use his Christian name again.
- "As the track tightened, On lap 125", what does the track tightened mean? Also, there's a start capital letter here.
- "By the 239th lap, Busch increased his", should this be had increased his lead given its starting in past tense?
A few points from an initial run through but nothing major. Placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 07:14, 9 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Kosack: Thanks for the comments. Have addressed every point raised in the review. MWright96 (talk) 07:56, 9 August 2019 (UTC)
- Nice work. Can't see anything else to complain about and I'm happy that this meets the GA criteria. Promoting. Kosack (talk) 06:00, 10 August 2019 (UTC)